"If we turn our heads and look away and hope that it will all disappear then they will - all of them, an entire generation of people. And we will have only history left to judge us."

- George Clooney
April 30, 2006, Washington




A Beautiful Tale - Chapter 02

Author: MaL
Genre: General
Rating: G
Score: 3.22222  
Story: Disclaimer: The only thing I own is the plot and the made up characters. The rest I give complete credit to the amazing JKR.

A/N: I came up with this plot line before the 6th book came out. So, consider this to be what I think would happen in their 7th year without the happenings of the current 6th novel.
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‘My dear friend,

How are you doing? Are your aunt and uncle treating you well? I hope so.
Well, you will be surprised to know that I have new neighbors, Mr. and Mrs. Crysear and they have a son, Day. He’s our age and also a wizard! It’s always been sort of lonely without magical families or what not around, especially since my own family is non-magical. I’m sure you can relate. Now, don’t get me wrong or anything, I love and look forward to yours and Ron’s letters. But, it’s just so nice to have someone there, ya know?
Harry, I really need to talk to you. But not like this, in a letter. I gave you my phone number after last term ended, remember? Call me from wherever you want as soon as you get this. Oh, and if you forgot it, just send a reply back as soon as possible. Please Harry, get back to me soon.

Hermione’

Hermione was more confused than she had ever been. She did like Day, really liked him, but what about that other boy? What about the one she has suspected feelings for since her third year? She needed to talk to Harry, immediately.
One day had passed since she had written and sent her letter to Harry. She had purposely stayed inside and away from Day. She could tell they were growing closer, faster.
RING, RING
“I got it, mum!” Hermione practically yelled to her mother when she was just barely 20 feet away.
“Hello?” Hermione answered eagerly.
“Yes, is your mother there sweetie?” A woman who sounded to be Mrs. Crysear replied.
“Oh, yea. Hold on a minute please.” Hermione covered the mouthpiece reluctantly to tell her mother she had a phone call.
It was after 10 o’clock and Hermione finally decided to go to bed. She had a phone in her room just in case.
Almost five minutes later…
RING, RING
Hermione just knew it would be him.
“Harry?”
“How did ya know it was me?” Harry replied playfully.
Hermione let out a great sigh of relief and laughed.
“Listen, Hermione. Sorry I didn’t call earlier. Uncle Vernon refused to let me use the phone.”
“Don’t worry about it. So, where are you calling from, then?”
“I’m on a pay phone, so we have to be quick. What’s up? I mean, are you doing okay?”
“Oh, yes. I’m fine. But here’s the thing…”
From here, Hermione explained how she felt about Day and the other boy at school. For her, it felt so good to get all of this out there, in the open to Harry. She knew she could trust him.
“Hermione,” Harry started, “this Day sounds great. But that’s all I can say about him, that he sounds great. Now, with the other one, you two look and sound great.”
“So, you think I should just stay friends with Day? Just tell him no, let’s just be friends?”
“No, I didn’t say that. Listen, my time is almost out and sooner or later, the evil couple will realize it’s too quiet.” Harry pauses to give a short laugh. “I’ll try and get to the train early so I can meet Day before you know who comes.”
“Well, I have to be on the train 20 minutes early to have a head of school briefing. Oh I didn’t tell you! I’m Head Girl!”
“Congrats! But I already figured that. Well, I’ll try and be there by 10:30. Try and meet me in front of the barrier.” BEEP
“Harry?”
“I have 20 seconds. So, can you do that?”
“Yea. I’ll see you soon!”
“Bye, ‘Mione, and good luck!”
“Bye, Harry!”
CLICK

The day came when Hermione had to face all. It was 10 o’clock on the morning of September first. Hermione was able to persuade her parents to just let herself escort Day. His parents had important business to attend to.
While Day and Hermione were in a taxi cab, going to Kings Cross, Day started the conversation.
“So, what’s Harry like? I mean, is he nice or is he like a prat?”
Hermione let out a little giggle and replied, “Oh, no. He’s extremely nice.”
The rest of the trip was spent talking about what they thought was going to happen this year. Day just happened to notice that Hermione didn’t seem to be all there, almost like she didn’t want to be going to school.
“Hermione,” Day asked, taking hold of her hand, “are you okay?”
Hermione loved the warmth of his hand, but she felt a little uncomfortable. “I’m fine.” She said as she tightened her grip to his and then let go completely. “Just nervous for the year, that’s all.” She half lied. “Oh, look. We’re here.”
It was 10:25 when they pulled up. They met Harry at the barrier a few minutes later. They all three went through into Platform 9 and 3/4 while no one appeared to be looking.
“Oh, how I missed you, Harry!” Hermione exclaimed while giving him a huge bear hug.
“I missed ya too, ‘Mione. And you must be Day.” Harry replied shaking Day’s hand.
“Yea. It’s nice to meet you.”
“You too. Well, should we get a compartment?”
“Yes. We’re early enough we should find a good one.” Hermione replied.
They found an empty compartment without trouble. Hermione and Harry left Day, Hermione to go to the Head department and Harry to wait for Ron, but actually to talk to Hermione.
“Well, what do you think?” Hermione asked expectedly.
“Hermione, he’s great. You’ve got a tough choice. I beg you to make your choice quickly. You can’t leave them hanging.”
“You mean you’re not going to tell me who I should choose?” Hermione almost looked hurt.
“No, I’m not. I am not your heart. I don’t know what or how you feel or what you want. What you need, though, is someone to make you happy. Who do you want to be with, Hermione? Who will make you happy?”
“Hey, guys! Guess what? I’m early this time! Can ya believe it?”
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Reviews
Marilyn
YOUR STORY WAS OKAY BUT CONFUSING. 'DAY' IS AN ODD NAME AND HERMIONE DOESN'T SOUND LIKE HERSELF.
AcidPops
i like it but its a little confusin
Sophie
Your first chapter was better. I think you should re-read your work first, and I find it hard to think of Harry or Ron saying 'ya' all the time.
roberta
i really liked this chapter and the one before and am a HUGE fan of the hermione and ron thing. please, please come out with the next chapter soon! good job and keep it up!
Mouser Mousey
Ouch that was good. I like this story and you better continue with it lol. Hate to nag but my fic has been up for ages and no ones reviewed it (HINT) lol. This story is a lot better than your other one. But anywho i enjoyed your story and you should carry on with it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LoonyGurl93
Wait who is this 'other boy?' Do I smell a R/Hr or a D/Hr fanfic coming on?
Twinny90
yeah some of the language is a bit weird but :0 the suspeeeense, i dont know who i like more !
Saphira4411
well, i like the Ron/hermione and the harry/ginny thing so i dont think hermione likes harry. and so that was proved for both of the in the HBP but this is a very nice story
hp candy
i like it but harry is off he is not good with girls remeber but i still like it lots too
hp candy
oh for got to add does she like ron and day but i love the suspeense keep it up cant wait to read next chapter
None .harrys.girl.
tis strange tis strange
emma_67
well actually its strange to see ron and harry using american slang,and actually calling hermione 'mione'!!!!
bonitachica
you left me hanging! I want to know who she picks! Godd job!
Natalie 01
You're really taking our advice. Outstanding work!!!
Ruth Emma Renoldy
I loved it! I personally like the idea of bringing an American in to the picture! Keep writing because you're really good! Awaiting the next chapter!! Another 5 STARS!
Leah Cox
I like. I love the ending. Is there a hint of who hermione may choose there eh eh eh? Who will make you happy? *enter ron* =]
None Leah Cox
Oh but I don't think hermione would address harry as "my dear friend", bit distant.
Halelu
I like the story and i hope you'll write more. That Day guy is kinda cheesy though
None oOoRaven_RacheloOo
lol its good not as good as the 1dt one but still good keep ritin!
None MaL
thank you everyone for ur reviews! i posted the next chapters a couple weeks ago so i'm hoping they will be up soon! stay tooned...:D
Ruby Sky
there my question about ron was answered and i have to be honest, it was a bit out of character for hemionie.
Ms.Draco Malfoy
AWFUL!
mizz.3li
I dont like Day. Go Ron!
Dobbywe
ron and hermione belong together, it's just whats right!*sniffles* okay serious now. it was confusing and the characters were completly wrong. hermione was acting like lavender, not like hermione and the name "day" sounds like some cheesey american blond guy whos teeth are to white. you have potenial and i enjoyed reading it. the plot might hae been good if it weren't a harry potter fan fic.
None Dobbywe
sorry i know he was american, i'm just saying he sounds like an annoying american.
hpobsessed21
where is the next chapters???????? this is good, but a bit OOC...... and hermione has been in love with ron for ever, she cant just give up on him now!!!!!!!!!!! Or she could go out with day to make ron jealous, or something like that...
Diana Smith
Well...I still want Ron and Hermione to get together. Can you blame me? They're like peanut butter and jelly- they just go together. Day is like cheese. You just don't put jelly and cheese together. Still, I have to admit, I like the story. It's really cute. I haven't seen this idea anywhere else. Besides, I like Day's name. I've never heard that before either. Who said the last line? Anyway, great story. Keep going with it. Can you see my stuff too? Thank you. Please, please keep going. I may be a fan of peanut butter and jelly, but this jelly and cheese thing might work! Hurry up!
Klee
"i'm not ur heart"??? ugh. harry would not say that.
None Klee
oh, and Dobbywe? AMERICANS ARE NOT CHEESEY!!!!!!!
Dobbywe
Oh and Klee? I AM AMERICAN. ANDI HAVE MET CHEESEY ONES. IN NO WAY IS AMERICA PERFECT. I'D SAY GEORGE BUSH IS PRETTY CHEESEY!!!!
None Lyn Ziegenhagen
Harry does not sound like his normal insensotive self. I dont think he would really tell hermione to "listen to her heart" and all of that cheezy stuff. I also think that ron is the other boy at school that she has liked since the third year.
None Lyn Ziegenhagen
eye hart hairy potur!
Jessica Rohr
Where's the next chapter! I've submitted my first fanfic today, please keep an eye out for it!
Jessica Rohr
I'm sorry, but I was just checking out the other reviews and I have agree that some of the characters' personalities were not captured just right- But not everyone's the mighty JKR! hey? Keep it up. George Bush isn't cheesey, and yes, 'the land of the free and the home of the brave' aka U.S. of A is not perfect- It's part of the world, ain't it?
Elisabeth
I was confused when I read "My dear friend." I didn't know who was writing to who. Some of the language was weird. I can't imagine teens talking like that. I think your first chapter was better.
None ...Fred's Girl...
Lol Dobbywe and yeah It sounded...well not like Harmione and Harry. Day is a weird name. Plus im with Hermione/Ron all the way..c'mon they love each other!
V's Girl
Y does ron have 2 show up early when Hermione is already having problems? Write more. I want 2 no what happens next. I'm a Ron and Hermione shipper but I still love the story.
***LUNA***
A little rough on the ending but still pretty good!
Sally S
I must say the characters didnt sound like their real selves... i mean, Hermione calling Harry "my dear friend" and Harry's language resembling that of Hagrid with all that "Ya"... The plot is nice with a good start in the first chapter, but i guess the second one should be refined and tuned according to the trio's real character... anyways, keep it up!!! cheers, thats a tough job ur doing!
Sally S
I must say the characters didnt sound like their real selves... i mean, Hermione calling Harry "my dear friend" and Harry's language resembling that of Hagrid with all that "Ya"... The plot is nice with a good start in the first chapter, but i guess the second one should be refined and tuned according to the trio's real character... anyways, keep it up!!! cheers, thats a tough job ur doing!
Sally S
I must say the characters didnt sound like their real selves... i mean, Hermione calling Harry "my dear friend" and Harry's language resembling that of Hagrid with all that "Ya"... The plot is nice with a good start in the first chapter, but i guess the second one should be refined and tuned according to the trio's real character... anyways, keep it up!!! cheers, thats a tough job ur doing!
Sally S
I must say the characters didnt sound like their real selves... i mean, Hermione calling Harry "my dear friend" and Harry's language resembling that of Hagrid with all that "Ya"... The plot is nice with a good start in the first chapter, but i guess the second one should be refined and tuned according to the trio's real character... anyways, keep it up!!! cheers, thats a tough job ur doing!
Skylar B.
Sally S, you're only supposed to give your opinion/ score once and then post neutral that way you don't make MaLs ratings go down just because you don't like it. Now contrary to a lot of the ones above, I actually like this one better, a lot less cliche to it and your writing style has improved greatly in my opinion. Can't wait to see more :D Skylar
Alyssa the other Hermione
I really liked it, but honestly, " the other bopy from school"! what was that about, come on just say RON! we all know she adores the boy so just say it. also the character vocab was a little odd, other than that I totally loved it.
None Alyssa the other Hermione
sorry ment boy* my bad:P
Farzana Olla
Pretty good. Hermione doesn't really sound like jerself and Harry doesn't either. Still good.








 
 
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