"If we turn our heads and look away and hope that it will all disappear then they will - all of them, an entire generation of people. And we will have only history left to judge us."

- George Clooney
April 30, 2006, Washington




A Day She Thought Would Never Come - Chapter 01: A Window to the Past

Author: Suze
Genre: General
Rating: G
Score: 2.90476  
Story: **Disclaimer: All the characters belong to J.K Rowling, as do the places and other stuff.**

Chapter 1 – A window to the past

"Hmm," Hermione thought, straightening the cushions on her couch. She gazed around the sitting room. Everything was perfectly in its place. It had been a strange few years. She sank down onto the couch, reminiscing.

Seventh year had seen Harry Potter, now even more a hero than ever before, leave school and go around the world, slowly destroying parts of Lord Voldemort’s soul. This left Hermione on her own with Ron, where she slowly fell so deeply in love with him that it hurt. She was almost certain Ron felt the same. But both were too unsure to make a move.

Professor Minerva McGonagall, the temporary Headmistress, made Hermione head girl. Ernie Macmillan was made head boy. They worked well together and became a great help to poor Professor McGonagall who hadn’t got over the death of Albus Dumbledore, her truest and closest friend. Ron, much to his great delight, had been made Quidditch Captain due to the absence of Harry.

Hermione taught all the younger students Transfiguration, because it was much too much work for devastated Professor McGonagall. The Defence against the Dark Arts post was filled, once again, by Remus Lupin, much to the students delight, as he was the best teacher they had ever had (“Besides Harry, of course,” Hermione thought to herself with a smile.) Defence against the Dark Arts classes were doubled in frequency due to the dark times they were all going through.

Ron and Hermione wrote to Harry almost every day. It was odd not be able to go with him on his quest, but he insisted they finished school before they came to join him. Harry couldn’t tell them very much in his letters. During the Christmas holidays, they were all reunited at the Burrow. Harry informed them he had destroyed all the Horcruxes, all but one. Unfortunately, he couldn’t work out what the last one could be.

In May, Harry wrote to tell them he had figured it out. He was the last Horcrux. Both Ron and Hermione cried the evening they received this letter. They sat together curled up on the couch and cried. Ginny joined them when she realised. That evening was possibly the saddest evening in Hermione’s life so far.

School finished at the end of June. Hermione and Ron went immediately to Harry’s side. They wanted to be with him to finish this. The plan was, Harry would let Voldemort kill him and then Ron and Hermione were to kill Voldemort. Harry knew the end was coming soon. The tension was painful. The killings had increased and increased steadily until there was a sudden lull. For almost two months, there were no deaths.

Then suddenly, on the 31st July, it started. The Dark Mark shone high in the sky above Hogwarts, high enough for everyone to see. This time, though, it didn’t mean someone was already dead, it meant everyone was about to die. It signalled the start of the greatest war the wizard world would ever see. Wizards from all around grabbed their wands and apparated to Hogsmeade.

Hogwarts was surrounded. Death Eaters, Giants, Inferi, Dementors, and, most evil of all, Lord Voldemort. Fortunately, flocking to the scene, were even more wizards than attended the Quidditch World Cup. The streets of Hogsmeade, packed with wizards, all looked to Harry. After the death of Albus Dumbledore, Harry was now thought to be the most powerful wizard, next to Lord Voldemort. Harry climbed onto the roof of Honeydukes Sweet Shop.

He gave a speech that would have made an Army Commander proud. He taught new spells, new methods he had come up with for defeating Giants and Dementors. He taught old spells, spells he had learnt from the greatest wizard of all time, Albus Dumbledore. The good side ran into that battle so confidently, it brought a tear to Hermione’s eye to think upon it.

Each person surrounded by a Ring of Fire, to keep away Inferi and Dementors, those brave men and woman charged at the armies of evil. But a lone trio, ignoring the fighting between good and evil, were in search of just one man, knowing when this man was defeated, it would be finished. They found him. He was lurking in the Dark Forest on his own, undefended. Harry instructed Ron and Hermione to hide. He would figure them out too quickly if they all went charging in.

So, Ron and Hermione huddled together, terrified, hiding in Hagrid’s hut. They heard raised voices from the forest. The heard Harry attempt to disarm Voldemort unsuccessfully. They heard Voldemort yell “Avada Kedavra.” They saw an almighty flash of green light. They heard Harry fall to the ground. Then they saw Voldemort shoot another Dark Mark into the sky.

Hermione flung the door of Hagrid’s hut open and they sprinted out. Voldemort was running towards the school building. Hermione, with exceptional aim, even with the tears falling like a river down her cheeks, shot an amazing stunner at him which hit him square in the back. He toppled over and lay perfectly still. She set off towards the most evil man on the face of the earth, her eyes fixed, her stride determined. Then she faltered. Glancing over her shoulder, she saw nothing. Ron was gone. She reached Voldemort and yelled, her voice full of more hatred than ever before, “AVADA KEDAVRA!” A jet of green light shot from her wand and hit him between the eyes.

Her heart leapt then plunged deeper than ever before. Voldemort was dead. But so were Harry and probably Ron, her two best friends. Hermione lay down in the grass and cried.


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AcidPops
it was good but if harry was a horcrux y wud voldemort b trying 2 kill him????
Skylar B.
i agree
None chris day
i hated it i mean wat da heck? its a complete change in the story. totaly off. but u r a great writer! u should just change it a little i mean everyone dead? the write is awsome but....
LoonyGurl93
chris day your insane! Have you even read the books?! I mean it's totally obvious that Harry is a horcrux and I'm guessing that Voldie didn't mean to make him one it just sorta happened. I'm and 100% on your side Suze your totally right! Oh and brilliantly written!
keith buner
It was ok.

i had thort hary was a hjorcrux.. but hadnt thought of y voldemort wud b tryin to kill him if it was true... if he had alredyd eliberately made 7 i mean. but its a good story but a bit jus like a recount.. then agen i no u cant rite a book on here lol!
I_love_HP
the main idea was brilliant in a sence, but it seemed to have rushed through everything giving hardly any detail as if you were fast forwarding a movie. It doesn't make sense how harry dies if he's a horcrux because even if he had another peice of soul inside him, he have mathematically speaking 1 1/7 souls. To kill voldemort he'd only need to kill that 1/7 part of the soul, the horcux, and the rest is his soul, meaning he still lives. You have a great theme but you need to emphasis on the details a lot more.
None KazSmurph
harry isnt a horcrux. it wdnt b logical. voldemort has to mean it to make is horcruxes, it can't be an accident. we practically already know what all of them are but one. the ring, the locket the diary, the cup, something of gryffindor's or ravenclaw's, and the snake, nagini. voldemort wouldn't want to make a horcrux out of something he wanted to destroy.
hermione's loyal twin
OMG!!!!!!!!!u killed harry :( not that he's my bf but how can u kill him!!!!!!i'm not so concerned about ron though
Natalie 01
It did'nt have any logic at all. A bit insane and stupid.
harrypotterfan328
Im sorry, but it stunk. I mean, havent you read the books??? The profecy said that Harry was the only one who could kill Voldermort!!!
Rebekah Edwards
it was a good story, a little off, but good, and yes you did rush through a bit but, not bad. i can tell you have a writer in you, very interesting
DementorKing
Good Job
potter fanatic
i think this was a gr*t story a story with a twist as u dont spercifically say tht harry is dead great plot u rule!
None mizz.3li
i agree with acid pops. its pretty confusing
Dobbywe
ron and hermione would never let harry do it on his own. they wouldn't take his reasons. they just wouldn't n good by the way.
sydney t.
it was well written but i didn't really mad any sense.
Klee
it's mad depressing!!!!!! harry dead and probably ron?????!!!!!! how depressed r u???????????
Matthew Ives
It was ok (probably better then mine (After the Burial part 1)) If there was goin to be a war why would harry be teaching spells just before the fight? It normally (as close to normal as u can get) takes a while to learna new spell. and ummmm stuff. it was short, but pretty good. If it was longer it would be better.
Elisabeth
I think you jumped around too much. The story needed to be a little more discriptive. I also think it didn't really go too well with the actual Harry Potter books. However, if worked on a little more the story could be exciting.
albus severus
What happened to Ron?
SeverusSnape'sLoyalFanFOREVER!!!
I apologize for the low rating, but writing like this deserves it! The first time I read it through I was all ready to give it a 1, but I decided that would be too biased and reread it, trying to see it as just a piece of writing, and not focus on the subject matter. I did, and I still hated it. Sorry. It was totally too rushed. No details. Give me some sensory images, please! I agree with Klee that it's bloody depressing. It's also way, way off a logical storyline. I'm not talking about a logical theme (Harry Potter is completely illogical, given the whole magic thing.) I mean, the story, overall, was difficult to follow because it made no sense! Really! Also, I know it's fanfic, and it's supposed to be your own storyline, but it should at least be somewhat possible in a real JKR book! This was way too out there. I'm sorry that I'm totally trashing your story, but I really feel strongly about it. Another issue was that although you talked about them crying, there was no emotion whatsoever. Seriously. In a good fanfic I cry. Always. Even if it wasn't meant to be sad, I cry. My mind always wonders over to imagine how so-and-so must be feeling! That did not happen here. There were no tears for this story. Besides, it was like you were watching from the sidelines and couldn't get the whole story. You seemed to skip around. I hope your reading this because you needed these things said to you, but I'm also sorry if they're upsetting (which, let it be known, can mean more than boo hoo. It can mean internal unrest because of what I said.) Please pay attention in Writing class.
dan-radcliffe's-girlfriend
it was okay but it didnt really make sence. I persnally think it could've been alot better. OMG why on gods green earth would you kill harry. you are a discrace to the harry potter world. get a life. I mean you suck like big time
None Ilove Harry
ummm.....no
None Elin Riihimäki
are u insane? u can't kill Harry!!!!
*ignoringyoulotcauseIwon'tlookupfromHBP*
Good story line but you can't kill harry!is he alive?I must know!








 
 
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