"If we turn our heads and look away and hope that it will all disappear then they will - all of them, an entire generation of people. And we will have only history left to judge us."

- George Clooney
April 30, 2006, Washington




A Demolition Of Darkness

Author: Harry/George/Roger/Joe
Genre: General
Rating: G
Score: 3.46154  
Story: A/N: This is my first chapter it’s kind of a slow start but things will start happening soon.
Hope you enjoy!
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It was a warm night; Harry sat on a rock and watched a small puddle of water making small waves. The summer was almost over and he and Hermione hadn’t found the horcrux they were looking for. They decided to get the hardest one over with first.

Ron, against his will, had to stay at home. Mrs. Weasley wouldn’t allow him to go on such a dangerous quest and she only half-heartedly let Harry and Hermione go.

Harry was watching guard but nothing seemed to be out at the moment. He wished Ginny were with him. He needed her now. He started thinking of her beautiful red hair and her bright brown eyes when a sound interrupted him. Something was in the trees of the forest. He went to go investigate.
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*POP* A twelve- year old girl appeared in the forest. Her name was Evelyn. She had just been playing with a wand she had ordered out of a magazine. It was suppose to be a ‘Harry’s wand’. She was in her room playing around with the wand when she decided she would try to ‘apparate’.

All of the sudden she found herself in the middle of a dark forest. It was quiet, too quiet. She sat down and started rustling through a pile of leaves as she decided what she should do.

A shiny object caught her eye. She picked it up. It was a gold coin with a dragon symbol on one side and Japanese writing on the other. As she continued digging through the leaves she discovered thirteen more coins. She put all fourteen of them in her pocket. She wished she could get back and she tried to apparate back to her room again. But instead she just apparated to somewhere else in this big forest. She decided she would test out the wand again.

“Lumos,” she muttered remembering a spell she had read. She began walking around silently. She was being inane. There was nothing in the forest. But, she had a feeling that something was watching her.

She saw a figure off in the distance. Surreptitiously as she could, she crept forward. She wanted to see who or what it was. “Nox,” she whispered. She watched as this person walked toward her.

Oh no, she thought to herself. Then without waiting she popped off somewhere else.

Harry started running into the forest as he heard the sound of something snap. Someone was close by. Or had been close by. His robes were becoming tattered by the branches as he continued to run this way and that.

“Great, it must have gotten away,” he thought wondering who or what he had been about to catch. He knew Hermione would be worried if she woke up and he wasn’t there. She and Harry had been switching off guard duty so the other could get some sleep. The past two hours had been his time. He was torpid by then but he continued to run.

“Whoa!” he flipped head over heels on a root and immediately felt sorry for Ron in his fourth year during the Dark Mark incident at the Quidditch World Cup. Not only was he bruised now but also he had lost his glasses and his wand. “Lumos!” he said quietly.

The wand shown brightly and he crawled over to it. Harry carefully picked up his wand. He conjectured where his glasses were but immediately realized he had guessed wrong when he heard a crunching sound under his left knee.

He picked up the broken glasses and murmured, “Reparo.” He looked in front of him and there was a coin. It had a dragon on it. On the back was Japanese writing. Judiciously, he decided to take it. It could be something vital to figuring out who the mysterious person was.

He popped back to the rock he had been sitting on and wondered if the Ministry of Magic would ever figure out he had apparated without his license.

Slowly, the sun started to rise up and he knew it would soon be his turn to sleep while Hermione was on guard. Soon, Hermione got up. Harry was so tired he went to sleep before he told her about the dragon coin he had discovered.

The sun was creeping up and shining in Evelyn’s face through the trees. “Ugh,” she sighed and made herself get up. She had fallen asleep after using so much energy to apparate. She felt that someone was watching her again but she shrugged the feeling away and got up.

She pulled a finger through her strawberry blonde hair and then remembered she hadn’t eaten since yesterday at lunch. She remembered that Texas was probably many hours behind where ever she was.

If only I could hear someone talk I could tell what country I’m in. “Surely I’m still in Texas,” she thought. “I’m being insane,” she told herself out loud. She heard the rustling of leaves behind her. She was a very curious girl and curiosity got the better of her this time.

She walked into more trees until it was rather dark. All at once she felt someone grab her. Or something. Was she tied up? No one could tie someone up that fast. There were ropes all around her. She had to be tied up. Maybe it was a double or a replica that could move super fast. So fast that no one could see it. No it wasn’t that. Could it be a wizard or a witch? No, it couldn’t be. It wasn’t. She had only read about them before. Who knew? Some strange things had happened to her the night before and she did believe in magic.

She was about to make up her mind but all she saw was a flash of red light and she was unconscious.
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Hermione got incredibly bored on guard duty. She decided to amuse herself with defensive spell casting she had just learned recently. Out of the corner of her eye, she saw Harry rolling this way and that. He was probably having a bad dream.
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------In a dream, Harry was walking. He had an odd feeling that he knew where he was going and he needed something.

He saw Snape and Bellatrix. They were searching a girl. Harry knew this girl had something Harry wanted.

“Come on, this girl can’t have hid these well. She doesn’t even know what it is,” Harry called angrily to Snape and Bellatrix. “Crucio! Crucio!” he shouted at them.

“While they are busy flailing around, I’ll do it myself,” he thought. “Accio coins!”
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“Harry…HARRY!!!” a voice called. Harry jerked awake and noticed that his hand was on his forehead. His scar was burning.

“Harry, what happened?” Hermione asked. She, of course, knew what happened. It was just her way of asking what he saw in his dream.

“We need them, the coins!” Harry half-shouted at her.

“Coins, what coins?” Hermione looked deeply concerned.

“Dunno, I have one of them but there are others and we need them. I don’t know how many there are,” Harry reached into his pocket and took out the coin that he had found. Perhaps the girl in his dream had the coins he needed.

“Harry, tell me exactly what you saw in your dream and how you got this coin?” asked Hermione quickly. Harry quickly filled her in on the dream and the familiar sound he had heard the night before of a person apparating.


Evelyn woke up. Her feet suspended her.

“Libercorpus,” she thought. She didn’t have her wand on her. “Accio,” she thought concentrating hard. Her wand flew to her. She caught it with difficulty, but caught it all the same. She then released herself.

She fell to the ground and noted that her face was all bloody. Although she had no idea why, she needed to see if the coins she found were still in her pocket.
They were gone! All fourteen of them! “I’m so stupid, this is horrible!” she said out loud to herself. They were only silly coins. What could they do? She’d been a little bit out of it for a while now. Still, she thought they must have had some kind of important meaning. It was odd but they had felt like something she had to protect.

She had to find them now! Determined, she got up and picked up the wand. “To the coins,” she thought as she tried to apparate to where ever this would take her.
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“Oh no! Here it is again,” Hermione whispered to Harry as she heard a rustling in the leaves.

“I’ll take this one and you can be my back-up,” Harry added just to make sure she didn’t feel like she wasn’t doing anything. Although, he was quite sure he could take on whatever this was.

She nodded in agreement as the thing started toward them. When it wasn’t too far away, Harry muttered, “Incarcerous.” Then silence. They heard it murmur the counter charm and it was gone.

“I’m going to find it,” Harry replied. He apparated after it. *POP* It was dark in the forest even though it the sun had started to creep up. He started backing up with his wand out.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------It was dark and cool in the forest part where she had apparated. She started walking backward as she heard sounds.

“AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” she screamed as someone behind her bumped into her and he yelled as well. She covered her mouth. “You’re, you’re Harry Potter, aren’t you?” she asked. He nodded and was about to say something when a response came from around a turn.

“Harry! Are you okay?” Hermione said as she popped in behind him.

“Hermione? This is just too weird,” Evelyn thought as she watched Hermione come into view.

“I’m fine, and, who are you?” asked Harry turning to Evelyn.

“I’m Evelyn, I’ve read the all the books about you,” she explained.

“How did you find us?” asked Hermione suspiciously.

“Well, that’s a long story, but to shorten it, I was messing around with this wand and then I appeared here. Then I found these coins. They’re dragon coins. Then I got attacked and I didn’t have time to see who it was but now my coins are gone.” Evelyn shrugged and blushed slightly with the too older teens looking down at her in surprise.

“You were the one who made the mysterious pop I heard the other night. I found… I must have found… one of your coins!” He pulled the coin out for her to see. “But they aren’t… no, they can’t be…” Harry was lost for words.

“The coins! Yes! The last horcrux! It’s got to be!” Evelyn cried.

“Wait, one coin, that would be too simple, it must be in…” Harry trailed off.

“All the coins, I guess if all the coins are together the horcrux could be destroyed,” Evelyn continued his sentence. “I don’t want this coin stolen like the rest. I have a place where we can keep this coin safe,” she smiled.

“I have a place that you could put that too,” said an unwanted voice. The three turned around but didn’t have to; they all knew whom the voice came from. Bellatrix Lestrange.

A/N: I hope you enjoy and I hope the suspense is killing you for what will happen next. Anyway, my next chapter is soon to come.
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Reviews
Mirella
it was a good story but i do not relly undersand about the wand that the girl evelyn got from a catallog to look like harry's as well.
None
This was a good first attempt, definitely keep writing. You're creative, but this story could use some improvements. It would help if you added more descriptions, and made the dialogue a little bit more like the characters. You're on the right track as far as the plotline goes. It would help if it stayed a little closer to the originals, but good try nonetheless.
hp candy
i loved it
seekergrl55
awsome
RelientK
I thougt it was so cool I can not wait for the next chapter.
sunken_ship
Bit confused about Evelyn, but understood after reading the entire story. She was introduced to the story somewhat abruptly and I think that you should have made her first appearance a bit longer, so that the readers could get used to her character. I also believe that Ron would have run away from home if Mrs. Weasley didn't let him go with Harry and Hermione. I like the coin idea. It'll be interesting to see how the fact that you need all of them to destroy the Horcrux comes into play later in the story. On the whole, it was alright and I applaud you on your cliffhanger ending.
None Niloo Ravaei
is the evlyn girl a muggle?? like did she actually read the harry potter books jk rowling wrote?? if she ordered a wand out of muggle catalog, how could it have magic powers, and even if it did, how could a muggle be able apparate and use all the complicated spells that harry learnt how to use after six years? I think your plotline is good, but i don't really understand evlyn's character
Your worst nightmare's little sis
ummm it was ok but confusing soooo....
lord of the rings
same as Niloo Ravaei
Klee
good fic
JM Troemel
That was very good. The story line is kinda weird though but good all the same.
albus severus
i'm kinda confused about Evlyn but you should continue it...i want to read more
SeverusSnape'sLoyalFanFOREVER!!!
I'm sorry but I didn't like it. Not at all. There was not enough explaining. Your writing style is good, but you left out a few crucial parts. I'll read more if there is, and I really hope you explain more.
SeverusSnape'sLoyalFanFOREVER!!!
I'm sorry but I didn't like it. Not at all. There was not enough explaining. Your writing style is good, but you left out a few crucial parts. I'll read more if there is, and I really hope you explain more.
hod mo
It was good! Evelyn was sorta confusing,though. I agree with Niloo Ravaei on that one. Why would a Texas-born muggle just end up there? How did she know magic? The suspense was excellent,though.








 
 
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