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Daniels_Girl
What do you think of my newest story? Yeah I have a lot, but hopefully you enjoy this one too!

Love:
Krystal~*
El Barto
Great start! You write so well...very descriptive, show emotions...unfortunatley I haven't read all your fanfics sad.gif

The end of the chapter kind of changed the mood...it seemed Harry didn't want to be seen with Ginny...right?

I look forward to the next chapter, even though I'll struggle through it because I don't really read love stories biggrin.gif Keep up the great work and I'll find time to read your other fanfics, or get a start on them!

Daniels_Girl
Yeah, sorry about that. It was supposed to be she. I went and fixed it. No, Harry is enjoying being with her.
ILoveHarryPotter07
Hey!!
Ohhh..I like it very much so far! Its very well written..I can't wait for more..please post soon! You need to get a feedback thread thought...just in case you forgot or didn't know..great job!!
Courtney
fjkrs
Hello!
Oh I love this fic hehe. The part with Ron sitting on gum..hilarious! And Ginny and Harry are so cute. Romilda Vane though...well she's quite intresting isn't she? Hmm...and Ron's reaction to Ginny and Harry is great. biggrin.gif You have an excellent type of writting I always enjoy your fics. Keep up the great work!
NyMpHaDoRa
This is brilliant! Except one thing, I dont understand what year it is. Is it supposed to be like an alternate HBP? Thats all. I love any story that has Romilda Vane in it (as you can see).

keep on writing!
angie biggrin.gif
xkidrogue
WOW! This is pre-HBP, right? Okay, good. I really like your story! I like your other story too, the one you last updated on the 2ND! Anyway, this is so cute! wub.gif Harry/Ginny fics are awesome. But, what's up with Romilda Vane?
Daniels_Girl
Heya guys! YAY! People are finally reading my fic! I was worried that no one wanted to read this one sad.gif haha Meh, but yeah, This is after Order of the Phoenix, In their 6th year, but I'm not going by that story line ok? So yeah, Thanks fjkrs! I always enjoy reading your replies!! wub.gif
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