Great start! You write so well...very descriptive, show emotions...unfortunatley I haven't read all your fanfics
The end of the chapter kind of changed the mood...it seemed Harry didn't want to be seen with Ginny...right?
I look forward to the next chapter, even though I'll struggle through it because I don't really read love stories

Keep up the great work and I'll find time to read your other fanfics, or get a start on them!