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EliasOsiris
What do you think of my story?
http://www.veritaserum.com/forums/index.ph...ndpost&p=177502
HJPM_PP
I liked it! I like the fact that you're new here and you have a story up in your first 5 posts ohmy.gif ! Cool cool.gif ! Anyway I like your story a lot! I'm a little crazy so sorry in the future wacko.gif !
When will the next chapter be up? I like the idea of your story,please post more soon!
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Grint_lovah
Hey nice story!:) It's really cool! Hurry up and write more! I'm verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry impatient. I dunno to me it's sorta confusing but it's still good. Keep up the writing!
HJPM_PP
I like the new chapters! It been crazy around my house so I couldn't post sad.gif ! SORRY! Can't wait for more! wink.gif

T.N.W.T.
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song of the phoenix
this is brilliant...absolutely, bloody brilliant...very interesting...curious, curious...

~song of the phoenix~
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