Tell me what you think of my story " Of Sweaters and Shoes " here. Any advice is welcome

http://www.veritaserum.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=10483

Hey!
I liked your story..I thought it was very sweet! I like remus and tonks together..I thought it was funny when Molly came out and said that! Great job!
Courtney

Hello,
I really liked the story!! It was soo adorable I loved the way Remus kept battling whether to be with Tonks or not...too cute! It was well written and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
~Becky

thank u! im really glad u liked it! thx for reviewing

awwww..... that was so cute!! I loved it You should write a fic about them. Remus +Tonks=

Oh my goodness! That was so awesome! Too sweet, dear. I give it a big fat ten! Great job!

a 10, really ? lol im reall glad you liked it! thanks for reviewing!

Okay that was just very cute remus and tonks in love Your fan fic was great I have say I loved it. Keep writing you have style . You wrote your story beautifully too. loved your fic,
Krisiebug88