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*~drhpluvr4l~*

hihihi *g* well, i can partly understand harry, that he doesn't want to face them all and that it's difficult for him, but i really think it's unrealistic that he wants to stay at the dursleys!!!
anyways, apart from that the fic was great! i like it so far... h/g and r/h are great couples, i think so i hope, of course, that they get together
well, good work!

-kathy

Hello,
The story so far is not too shabby. I feel really bad for Harry; he doesn't know what to do and what to feel and can understand why he doesn't want to go to the Burrow. Well, will await next post!
Yours truly,
Rebecca

Woohoo I'm finally catching a Fan fic from the beginning... I think it's pretty good. I can definitely understand Harry not wanting to be around anyone,including Ginny. Seeing as how his options are kind of limited as to where he can go it's either the Burrow,the Durley's or Mrs. Figg with all her cats.

Awaiting next installment...

Murcus

Hey!!
I like it so far! It is very very good! I think it will get very interesting judging by all the ships you've included. I cannot wait! I think there will be a lot of fighting and cheating..lol.very scandelous! Anyways...great job..please post soon!
Courtney

Hello,
Wow this is quite exciting!! Ron and Harry having to take Emotion Elixir. Poor Harry though. It's an accident waiting to happen with him and the elixir. I smell a little drama brewing through the story....
Will wait for next post.
~Becky

Hello,
Wow! Ron and Harry got in a very powerful row there. I couldn't believe it was going on, but that was all from the elixir. I just feel bad because Ginny will definitely find out, along with the rest of the Weasely family and the Burrow. I can't wait for the next post.
~Becky

Hey!
I like the newest chapters..they took emotion exlirs..that was pretty funny but as prooved could have very dangerous side-effects.The fight was pretty scary because they couldn't control their emotions but at the same time it was amusing to see what they would do not being able to control them.. the after efects of the fight..pretty amusing..I think that Mrs. Weasley might still find out though. But your idea for emotion exlirs was really individual and brilliant.. Please post soon!
Courtney

Hello again,
The last post was very interesting....seeing how you brought Fred and George into the picture. I feel bad for poor Ginny though.....poor, poor girl. And Hermione! I'm surprised she hasn't talked to Harry about her feelings and whatnot...hopefully once Ron awakes they will sort out the trouble......gotta love the drama!
~Becky

hehehe..WOW...this is getting VERY interesting. So Hermione did not have feelings for them at all?.lol...I love how this story is going..and Mrs.Weasley fell for it.. lol great job please update soon!
Courtney

Hey,
I'm soooo glad things are better between Ginny and Harry......hopefully it will stay that way. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter!
Your truly,
Becky

Yo whats crackin'?

Very Nice story, Keep on writing...

Hi

I just read the whole fic because I had nothing else to do and have fallen in love with it! I really love the potions they all took and how it caused Ron and Harry to get into a huge fight over Hermione. I am glad Harry and Ginny have made up but I am sure something will go wrong at Hogwarts.
I love your writing style and can not wait to read more.

Caity

Hi

This was a great chapter and I am glad in a way that it isn't going to be all about Horcruxs like a lot of other fanfics and book 7. Change is great.
Anyway, I really liked Draco coming in and drinking the elixar, so this means his emotions are going to be a rollercoaster like the other four. I can not wait to read what happens.

Update as soon as you can,
Caity

Hello,
I really enjoyed the last post! Man, Draco can get on my nerves so easily!! But you gotta love him! I love how Draco is brought into the picture and can't wait to see what happens to him after drinking the potion. Will await next post!
Yours truly,
Becky

Hi!!
I liked the newest chapters..I see draco getting attacked in the future lol..but what did he take an exlir or an antidote? lol..srry I was confused and didn't get it. I can't wait for more..this fic gets more interesting with every chapter!
Courtney

Hello,
I really do appreciate you continuing the chapter showing the extreme hate Harry has for Malfoy since the "incident." I am really enjoying this and can't wait till the next post.
Yours truly,
Becky

Hello!

That was great! I love how Ron doesn't believe that Draco is inoccent and how Harry wants to hurt Draco. Somehow I think it was the potion kicking in there because he wouldn't be that bad, would he?
Anyway, I love your writing and loved how the chapter was put together, I can not wait for more.

Caity

Hi

That was good. I like how Harry just wanted to calm down and didn't even realise that Ginny and he were holding hands. Cool, Lupin and Moody are teachers again, I hope nothing bad happens to Lupin because he is teaching DADA! (For the second time)
It was really well writen and I can not wait to read more!

Caity

Hey.
Great new chapter..I think somthing big is about to go down lol I thought it was funny how Ron was decribing the teachers..a good bit of humor there. OK well Update soon! I think its good that Moody and Lupin are back..well not really back(im Moody's case) lol
Courtney

Bonjour,
I really liked the last chapter. I found it so cute that Harry didn't even notice that he was holding Ginny's hand. So adorable. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Yours truly,
Becky

Hi

Oh my goodness! Draco likes Hermione? That is...different but great to put into the story. What will happen to poor ickle Ronnikins ( ) because they are supposed to be going to Hogsmeade together. I really can not wait to read what will happen next so please update soon!

Caity

Hello,
The past two chapters were really good!! I feel so bad for Hermione though, to have to endure Malfoy kissing her. Ron's probably gonna flip out because she was out all night. Poor Hermione! Can't wait to read more!
Yours truly,
Becky

Hi

I really like this chapter because it shows how most women would react when a man chased them around and how telling someone doesn't fell like the right thing (I know, one boy wouldn't leave me alone and he touched me (not to badly like I know other girls have)). Also, Ginny, like most women, understand what emotional trouble is unlike men who have no idea (no offence).
Anyway, this is really well writen and I really enjoyed reading it so please update soon.

Caity

Hello,
Poor Hermione!!I love how Ron reacts to the news...it is so Ron. I wonder how Ginny figured it out so quickly. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Yours truly,
Becky

Hi

That was a great chapter and I loved how McGonagall acuatley believed it, or did she? Does she know that that wasn't what happened.
Anyway, Ginny is a really suportive friend and I loved how you portrayed it. It was done really well.

Please update soon,
Caity

Hey,
McGonagall actually believed them?? That's so crazy!! I wonder if Hermione is ever gonna warn McGonagall about Malfoy. Who knows...can't wait to see what happens next.
Yours truly,
Becky

Hi

I was right, McGonagall did suspect something going on! Lupin and Moody are just going to scare Hermione if she thinks someone is following her and doesn't know who! This is getting really interesting so please update soon!

Caity

Hello,
I knew McGonagall couldn't possibly believe anything Ginny had said. But I wonder why she wanted Lupin and Moody to talk to Ron and Harry..can't wait to read more!
Yours truly,
Becky

Hi

I really enjoyed how you have backtracked and shown other people's points of view because it really adds to the story and how it is all working out. Will there be one from Draco's point of view?
I am glad that Harry and Ron now know who it is and want to kill Draco. I can not wait to read what happens next, now that Lupin and Moody are investigating(sp?) too.
Please update soon!

Caity

Hi

I love the new chapter, I love how you back tracked right as Harry was walking in on Draco and Ginny. I screamed at the computer because I didn't think I would find out who it was, my first thought was Hermione and Draco.
Poor Ginny, her and Hermione have both been attacked by Draco all because he drank some of Hermione's elixar on the train. Harry and Ron are going to have to esscort them everywhere or something worse may happen.
I loved how Harry burst in after he saw Ginny's non-verbal spell and was shocked with what he saw.
Also I like how Draco hurt Ginny and then went back to kissing her as if to say 'I'm sorry'.
Moody was a bit curious so I really want to know what Lupin and Moody tell McGonagall about the trio plus Ginny.

Please update soon!

Caity

Heyhey my fellow Gryffindor!! Wicked story, i told you i'd read it!!

OOhhh the fight between Ron & Harry, very cleverly written! Loving the story, keep it up!
Tigzie x

Hey!
I really like the newest chapters..I thought that how you went through it from everyones perspectives was really good. I knew that they were all going to figure out that it was Draco..although they seem to be between a rock and a hard place..either tell the truth or keep lieing..wow..not a good choice. Please update soon!
Courtney

Hey
OMG..Draco..wow..first Hermione then Ginny. I think that he will probably try to tell McGonagal that they gave him somthing on the train..even if he doesn't I think that the truth will have to come out. Great job though. I thought it was cute at the end how Ginny didn't want Harry to leave her. I think that it shows more into their relationship. Post soon.
Courtney

Hi

I really liked that chapter. It is so sweet that Harry stayed by Ginny's side the whole time because he promised her. Draco is in for it now that McGonagall knows about Hermione and Ginny. As long as the four don't get in trouble for the potion.

Please update soon!

Caity

Hi

Draco is in so much trouble that I almost feel sorry for him because he has no where to go but...Azkaban! That will be horrible for him but a just punishment after what he has done to Hermione and Ginny. I can't wait to see what punishment he gets.
Will he tell about the elixar? What's going to happen to the others?

Please update soon!

Caity

Hey,
i really love your FanFic. it's kind of confusing with the Elixor and everything but i still LOVE IT!
i can't wait for more and to see what happens! i feel so sorry for ginny and hermione. Malfoy's gonna get it! please update soon!

Hello,
Malfoy is outta here!! WAHOOOOO!! I feel so bad for Hermoine and Ginny. It is soo awful. I just got back from two weeks of band camp and am really excited to read the next chappie!
Yours truly,
Becky

Malfoy is getting exactly what he deserves! I am so glad that they are kicking him out. As for hermione and ginny..they have been through a horrible ordeal..and Im sure the exlir isn't helping much. I think that when they both regain conciousness Mcgonagall will have to be told..I can't wait for more.
Courtney

That was a great chapter. McGonagall is going to find out soon about Hermione and Ginny when they both regain conciousness. It is so awful. Draco is in so much trouble and getting exactly what he deserves! Please update soon!

Caity

Hello,
I knew there was something wrong knowing that they took Hermione's elixir. Poor Ginny! She sounds very unstable and without sleep she can't really learn to calm down. I just wished Hermione would have said something to Madame Pomfrey about it. Can't wait to read more!
Yours truly,
Becky

This was superb. Your style of writing and everything. I just started getting into fanfictions and this by far is my favorite. Keep Posting! I cannot wait for more!

I just read all of the story so far, and I really, really like it, eventhough I am a Harry/Hermione shipper. You write each character well and it is funny too. Can't wait for the next post!

hey, i love the new chapter.. it's so cool that ron and harry care about hermione and Ginny so much. so did draco leave? that's good. he deserves way worse than to get expelled but i guess it's fair enough. im nervous to what madam pomfrey is going to say about the elixor. i love this fanfic so much! please post soon!
-Lisa

how is it possibly possible that i have not yet posted a reply to this?! i have been an avid reader of this fic ever since you first posted it and i have to say... i'm hooked! it is quite good. keep up the awsonova work! i really do like the idea for this story, very original! happy writing!

~Cheers!~

hey i love this fic its really cool i only read six chapters though can't wait to finish the rest lol (long way to go) anyways your story shows that hermione has some romantic emotion towards harry but i hope it does not persist because i would love to see them as only friends (no hard feelings ) any ways i absolutly love your fanfic

toodels;)

Hi

This was a great chapter! Hermione is going to be in so much trouble now that they are going to tell Madam Pomfrey. I feel so sorry for them because of the scaring it has left and they may not fully heal. Harry and Ron are so kind to stay with them and care how they do.Somehow I don't think Draco has fully left the story just yet but I may be wrong. I really cannot wait for more and what will happen to them with the elixar.

Caity

Hi

I am so glad you posted more! I really loved it! Poor Harry, I think the letter was from Draco because he isn't too happy with Harry for telling McGonagal what he did.
I hope everything works out for the four of them, mainly Hermione and Ginny's emotional scaring. So please update soon!

Caity

I really love this chapter. Harry and Ron are in so much trouble but it was better to tell sooner that later because Hermione and Ginny can be helped quicker. I hope it all goes well for them because you ended with a cliff-hanger.
Please write more soon but I can wait a week if I must because I understand how horrible homework is.

Caity

hey!
awesome fic
i really liked it
harry and ron are in so much trouble now
please post the next bit soon

love aishwarya