Please leave feedback for my fic Sweet Dream Sweets here.

Yes, you evil and vile creature. . .I did. Many many times! Heck, even that is making me yawn!

I, aside from the interactive aspect, did enjoy the yawning conversation. It was too well done!

The sweet concoction was great, as well! The little intricacies were wonderful . . .the dreamless sleep, the day-dream, the love potion, the antidote, and the memory work! Quite fun. When will these be on the market? (Aside from the Malfoy bit.)

Poor Draco, meeting his doom all for the prank of Fred and George. Ah well. Someone's got to go.

Their banter was well done and in character, nice to see.

Great story!

I really liked this and I can't wait to read more. I like the idea of Fred and George tricking Lord Voldemort, haha, as that is probably something that would make them proud of themselves. I like it even better that they could do this while helping Harry at the same time.

Is this really the end or are you adding more on?
I'd like to read more about it.

I thought I had better leave a feedback while I have five minutes in my hand!

Harry tried to snarl, but a yawn ruined the effect.

[...] but another huge yawn escaped instead, turning (Ron's) answer into something less than coherent.
Lol, oh good one there... I like it the way you make each of their 'yawn' related back to their personality. Especially with Ron, who likes to talk while eating and makes his words less decipherable. So, in a way, it was so like him to talk while he yawned, even if no one can understand him. (did you yawn reading that? )

OMG, poor Harry had to endure all of these nighmare... especially when several of them are from true events... (Die, Voldemort! Die!) I can just imagine him asking for a stronger dose because the current one is not working anymore. Gosh, he was drugged...


I was tempted alright! But then, I just had my coffee, so nah...

There's a couple of typos I've noticed and I'll PM you with it. But overall, I like it. Especially your exploitation of using the 'power he knows not = power of love' concept. Very interesting!

Good one, bajab!

Ok, I have made a few typo changes, as per Zyra's help, and have made few bits a bit longer. If anybody spots more errors (except for missing commas!) please feel free to PM me with them.

Appears I needed to do a bit more explaining in regards to what the sweets actually accomplished. Hopefuilly it is all a bit clearer now.

Sorry ginnyeff, this is a one-shot with no sequels planned, although it could be fun to have Draco running from Voldemort because they think Harry is in love with him.

Ciao.

I love the way you let the twins speak in this one-shot. It's like hearing the Phelps brothers speak in person. Spot on.

Love the twist at the end of the story too. This is definitely something that has to remain open ended, if only just for effect. Well done!

Hey Bajab!

It took a while for me to find this fic, sorry for that!
The twins are portrayed in a lovely way, it's great how they complete eachother sentences and the way they're speaking to others. Like Bumblebee said, you can hear the Phelps twins speaking as if they're right next to you. I didn't yawn during the first part, but I did yawn when I read everyones replies.
I was already expecting an interesting twist at the end of the story (that's just your trademark ) But I didn't expect the story to end this way. Brilliantly written again.

I just have one question...why is it that all of the one shot I have read are the ones that I want to see more of? the endings all seem to sudden and leave too much hanging. I want to know what happens to Draco and what everyone else continues doing! you are a good writer. I love the way you portray Fred and George (two of my favorite characters)...if you decide to lenghten this, please let me know. I would love to read more!

ROFLMAO!!! Oh my goodness! Just picturing Fred and George delivering the "dream content", Harry watching with an amused grin, and Hermione with her jaw to the floor is absolutely brilliant!

If I keep laughing like this people are going to start looking at me like I'm crazy! Well, more than they usually do.

Man, every story (long or short) is EXCELLENT!!!!! I was laughing a lot!! I always listen to music so when Fred and Geoge were having their "tennis match" the song was going back and forth between speakers.... I thought that was pretty good timing... My jaw almost dropped like Hermiones' did when Fred or George said it was Malfoy!! I was like "What?!?!?!" I thought the discripsion of how Voldmort was feeling in the ways of pain, were very accurate. I love reading about Fred and George's "tennis match" conversations, there soooo funny!! I'm really glad they play a major role in this story. I'm sad your not going to write a sequel, but at the same time you sort of can't without making the story go on and on. When I was reading the beginning I didn't yawn, but when I read the first few replies I almost yawned.... But yeah, this is a GREAT short story!!!