yeah so i wrote a new story. i hope you like it, and its ok if you didnt so far, just post comments and suggestions for me, if you please i'd appreciate it.

read my story here, if you havent already

EDIT; May 4, 2008:
well in case you haven't noticed, I'm not going to finish this fanfic...i've got way too much on my mind right now, and it's making it impossible for me to finish this. apologies, and love, and i wish i could go on here more often.

Yeah, yeah, yeah, I'm the first one to review!!!
Wow I'm shocked speechless I have no bad comments! It was the perfect leaght (thou I'm crazy and like them real long, but who cares!) and you had detail and converstaion and everything, i think i'll just do a happy dance! *does a happy dance* plus this is the first fic i've read about a Luna/Neville and i already like it, even if they haven't flirted (very much) or gone out on a date! (yet, right, yet?)
Love it, Love it, Love it, Love it!!!

*Buckbeak rules*

It was shorter then I expected, not that it was bad or anything, I just was expecting more with Neville and Luna then Luna and her dad. Good job all the same.

sweet
just please post next one soon untill i forget what i've been reading about...
and try to focus more on Neville/Loona...forget the others

Ah, I like the story, it kind of made me laugh when Luna's dad said "You are sixteen right". I don't know why it did but it did. And I think it was very cute that Neville was the first person Luna saw coming back, and the fact that she bashed Nevilles weight all at the same time. Overall, short, but good.

oh wow thanks!

sorry to keep you waiting, homework piles up. but im working on the next part, i think i will be finished by friday, so check back by friday or saturday, most likely late friday night, ok?

Off to another great start! I dont reallt see alot of Neville/Luna fics, so this should be a good one! I cant wait to hear more from you as usual. Keep posting! Byee








PS: A new post of Starting Over should be out within the weekend. Sorry for such the wait =\

Neville... Luna...
Awww!
Need I say they make an incredibly cute couple together? Especially at your hands. I thought it was especially cool how the role of 'school bully' switched from Draco to Pansy. I thought it was so mean how she called Neville a klutz and Luna a freak.
But anyway, very good so far! I'll be eagerly awaiting your next installment.

writer101, thanks! yeah i love the idea of them getting together!

ok well just so the rest of you know, i have posted a new update an hour ago, or something like that. hope you all read it, and continue reading!

I love this conversation. You catch every essence of these two characters. I definatley can't wait to hear more from you about this fic. You're doing a great job so far.


PS. A new installment of Starting Over should be here within a week. I promise. [ fingers crost lol ]

Haha, that's great i love how Ginny automanically defend both them !!! I also love how Pansy was such a jerk and Luna really didn't seem to notice. love the chapter and this fic! Mhh... I must say the more i think about it, Luna reminds me of myself, and i guess that's part of the reason why i love this fic! Keep on writing! Can't wait for the next...

*Buckbeak rules*

hey thanks for reviewing, amanda1212 and Buckbeak rules!

oook, i will be posting the next installment like...late late Friday, late Saturday, or in between, and if i dont, sorry!

*sigh* im sorry im sorry...just give me a few more days, it will be up. my teachers give to much homework, so i apologize. i havent had much time to work on it, i am at the moment!

ok, it took a while, but my new update is here!

[...finally...]

please, go and comment!

well, i'd appreciate if you left feedback....*sigh* i just dont get enough readers!

Hellllooo . New post =] yay.... Wellll I think it was realllly good. You described the dream very well. I also think it is a adorable that Neville cares so much and that she stops crying when he talks to her. =] Keep doing what you're doing..


And about readers.. PMing people to try it out, or even people who read your last fic, is always a good idea. Some will, some wont, some will say they will and will end up never reading it. I have experienced all three, but over alll look how many readers I have [ still surprised to this day about that ] but it will up your readers if your worried about that

Ah so good and cute! Neville's so sweet and all! thou if i was Ginny and Harry i wouldn't have believed her and left...

So the question is, was it just a dream?
Haha I am pradinioed yes.

Don't worry i have...2, 3 , 4(?) readers who review. (wait no 1 or 2) don't worry but yeah try PMing people it works.

*Buckbeak rules*

P.S. sorry i didn't review sooner my power socre blew on my PC and i couldn't get on till i got a new one.

i know, it has been a heck of a long time, i truly am sorry about that, since i have posted a new update. sorry sorry sorry, my dear readers! well, probably next week, or the 15th, i will have an update. finals are coming up, so i dont have much time.

okay...

so i posted a new update a couple of hours ago. i know, first time in a month. im sorry about that. and im sorry i didnt post the 15th either! but oh well, here you go!

Short but sweet the question is, what was Neville thinkin' about, Luna? we can hope!
Very good, even if short, can't wait for more Fall_out_Girl.

*Buckbeak rules*

P.S. if you ever need a beta or something, contact me

I love the latest chapter.I bet that Neville was thinking about Luna.
They make such a cute couple! LOVE IT!!!!! Keep writing


Sincerely,
Gem

thanks, guys! and Happy New Years

so i wrote a little tiny update, that will probably take you guys a minute or so to read. its short, because i got writers block.

Writers block stinksss. I hope you get out of it soon. It was cute though. He blushed =] It shows progress in their relashionship which is good.

i thoght i posted a comment already . oh well i lve your fanfic . it was so sweet neville gave luna his sweater
much much love from me and enjoy the new year

thank you!

hm...well...im sort of over my writers block right now...so i guess i will continue.

um...there might be an update tomorrow, either around 12p.m.-ish, or 12a.m.-ish. probably somewhere in between though

Ah they're so cute!!! Neville giving her his sweater and all, AHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Hehe that's almost a date, them goin to the three brooomsticks together!!!
Oh BTW i don't care how short it is, as long as it's cute.

*Buckbeak rules*

P.S. sorry not my best review, because I have gotten about 10 hours of sleep in the last 2 or 3 days.

P.P.S oh and we got a new PC and keyboard so if my spelling is bad it's because i'm not use to this one."

thank you, Buckbeak rules!

hehe...*almost* but not quite yet

i posted another little chapter-update thingy. im not sure if anyone else has done this, but i posted a song that you should listen to while reading. i recommend you do, but you dont have to.

Ahhhhhh, you like makin' me do that don't you Fall_out_Girl?
That's sweet her paying and all, then they going to go and watch the fireworks and saying "Thanks for being my best friend." and all.
Really good, can't wait for more,

*Buckbeak rules*

that was sweet. i like how you write this story. and you were right that song/music with that post turned out really good i love it
much much love from me

awwwww at first i wasn't shure how this was gonna go but it is great I LLLLOOOVVVEEEE IIITTTT!!!! keep it going!

aw, thanks everyone!

you guys make me feel happy!

do what, Buckbeak rules? i have absolutely no idea what your talking about...lol.

might be one up next week, if i have time. but i have school, starting monday, so i dont know yet.

Haha, making me go "Ahhhhh: every fic of yours I read i go "Ahhh" really i am not that sensitive!
I'll try to wait

*Buckbeak rules*

I LOVED it! Neville and Luna are such a cute couple! I have a few questions though.

1)If this is Harry's 7th year, isn't Dumbledore dead?You put in there, after the plates had cleared and Dumbledore's few words of wisdom.....

2)Didn't Ginny and Harry break up when Harry was in his 6th year?

3)What's a writer's block?

4)Didn't Harry say at the end of HPB that he wasn't going back to Hogwarts for his 7th year to look for more Horcruxes with Hermione and Ron?

I know I'm being a bit of a pest for asking these questions, but you don't have to answer them. Happy writing!

hey this story is really good i love it neville and luna are a really good fit hope they get together soon luna seems lonely

Anyway hope you post soon you haven't posted in a long time it would be a shame to let the fic go to waist