Characters you don't recognize are ones I made up. The ones that you do were created by J.K Rowling.
Chapter One:
A young woman, sixteen years of age, walked down the hallway with an air of grace and elegance. Her fiery red hair billowed out behind her as she strode by. An outsider would say that this girl looked to be very prideful and confident. And they would be right.
As she strolled on down the hallway another girl with layered, light brown hair and brown eyes joined her.
“Hey Lily.”
The young woman slowed her pace. “Hi Sarah. How’ve you been?”
“What? Since ten minutes ago? Absolutely splendid if you must ask.”
A faint smile tugged at the corner of Lily’s lips. “You found Nathan, did you?”
“Yes I did. He was outside the transfiguration classroom with one of his friends. Lily, he actually smiled at me when I walked by,” said Sarah dreamily.
Lily couldn't help but laugh a little. “Congratulations. I’m glad that he is finally noticing you for the great person you are.” There was a faint trace of sarcasm in her voice.
Sarah beamed. “Thanks Lily, that means a lot…oh yeah, James is looking for you.”
The smile slipped off Lily’s face. “Joy…Now I’m glad that I left while you were looking for Nathan.”
Sarah sighed, “You know Lily, we’ve been best friend since we first met on the Hogwart’s Express. So, that’s six years. Six years of being in all your classes. Six years of being in the same dormitory, with beds next to each other and six years of James chasing after you. We know everything about each other. But the one thing I never understood was why you don’t like James Potter.”
Lily scowled, “I don’t know why I have to explain this all the time. He just annoys me so much. We are not suited for each other. We are polar opposites.”
Sarah smirked. “Yeah, how so?”
“Okay, say that we are given a Defense Against the Dark Arts spell to research for homework. I’ll go to the library and write about its origin, effects, and uses. Potter will find some little kid and use the spell on him to see what happens.
“Yeah, but you both still get good grades nonetheless. Think about it Lily, he has been after you for six years now. The school year is nearly over, so soon to be seven, and you haven’t given him a chance once.”
“I don’t think not getting me is upsetting him too much,” said Lily icily. “He has had plenty of girlfriends over the years.”
“Yeah, but not the one he wants,” pointed out Sarah.
“You don’t get it Sarah,” started Lily in a brittle voice. “He is just so full of himself. Just because he is smart and a good quidditch player does not give him the right to act like he is above everyone and hex people just because he feels like it.”
“He hexed Snape that one time he called you that foul name.”
Lily stared at her. “He didn’t just hex Snape. He turned him into a slug.”
“Well the slime did match his hair somewhat…”
“Listen, I don’t care about Snape, or what he calls me. He could swear at me day and night for all I care. But what Potter did dropped him down to Snape’s level. I don’t understand why he even likes me."
“Well,” said Sarah. “He did mention last year that he adored your thick, red hair and he could stare into your green eyes all day...that has to count for something.”
Lily laughed mirthlessly. “I wonder if it would be a shock to Potter if I came back next term with my hair cut and dyed brown and brown contacts lenses.”
“God, don’t even joke about that,” came a deep voice from in front of them.
There stood James Potter in the flesh.
He was leaning against a wall eating an apple. His hazel eyes were full of laughter and his hair was messy and stuck up in the back, as usual. Beside him stood Sirius Black, whose black hair fell gracefully over his eyes. They had been talking when they had heard Lily’s comment as she walked by.
Lily eyed him. “You never know Potter. I am able to do whatever I want with my physical appearance. And beside, if it will drive you away, then I might as well do it.”
“Ah, but I know you won’t Evans, I know you too well. You’ll get bored without me around,” said James slyly.
“Fat chance,” said Lily shortly.
“So Lily,” said James, “How about you and me go get some lunch together?”
“No, Potter.”
She didn’t even hesitate. He had asked her so often that it was pretty much a ritual.
“How about we all catch some lunch then,” suggested James, motioning towards the Great Hall.
Sirius turned to face him, “Can’t mate, sorry, I gotta go make up some test for Binns. I don’t get why we have to learn about things that are past and people that are dead…”
James looked at Lily out of the corner of his eye and then said, “Sirius, mate, it’s so we don’t make the same mistakes in the future that we did in the past.”
“James, that was probably the most intelligent thing I’ve heard you say, “said Sarah sweetly, nudging Lily.
“Oh yeah, a real Einstein,” muttered lily sarcastically.
All three of them looked at her. “Who?”
“Never mind.”
“Okay, anyways James,” began Sirius. “So, I’ll probably be staying at your house for the better part of the summer. My uncle Alphard agreed to lend me some gold when I come of age so that I can get my own place.”
“That’s great Sirius. You’re welcome at my house any time. My parents especially like when you come over for Sunday lunch.
Lily’s eyes narrowed. She was curious about this transaction, but she didn't want to be rude and pry into business that wasn’t her own.
After Sirius departed James turned to Lily and Sarah and asked, “Will you two fine ladies like to accompany me to the Great Hall?”
Sarah began to say something, but Lily discreetly stepped on her foot and said, “We’re on the way to the library for some last minute studying before Slughorn’s final exams."
James studied them with one eyebrow slightly arched, “Well okay, I’ll see you in potions.” As Sarah and Lily started walking away James’ voice rang out, “Hey Lily…”
She turned and eyed him haughtily. “Yes Potter?”
He smiled his smile that made most girls lightheaded. “You’ll fall for me eventually.” Then he turned and strode away before she could utter a word.
Chapter Two:
“You should have seen the look on her face when I said that.”
It was lunchtime and James was reciting what had just occurred to his other two friends, Remus Lupin and Peter Pettigrew as they ate scalding hot vegetable soup and white bread.
Remus gave a heavy sigh. “You probably just made her mad, James.”
James scowled at him, “You’re ruining my moment, Moony.”
“If you want her to like you, you need to be sincere and compassionate. Show here that there is more to you then meets the eye,” suggested Remus.
Peter started nodding in agreement.
“You don’t think I’ve tried?” snarled James. “Every time she is around me I can’t resist trying to make her like me. It’s like I loose control of my actions and either do or say something stupid that makes her hate me more.
“You know what we are going to do?” said Remus with a smile. “We’re going to find someone to turn you into a gentleman.”
“What about him?” asked Peter pointing to someone behind them.” He usually has a girlfriend.”
They looked over their shoulders to see Sirius running across the Great Hall in their direction. He slid along the bench towards them. He was going so fast that he crashed headlong into them and fell sideways into the food, upending the large soup bowl that rained down right on James. He was covered head to foot in scalding hot broth and carrots, among other vegetables. He opened an eye and say the Marauders falling over themselves with laughter. The rest of the Great Hall had gotten to their feet to see the commotion and now they were taking pictures. James laughed and poured the rest of his soup on Sirius’ head. He got up and headed to his dormitory to change his clothes.
*
Lily and Sarah headed back to the Gryffindor common room.
“We should have just eaten lunch with him,” Sarah grumbled. “He could probably see right through your lie. You’re top in Slughorn’s class. You don’t need to study for your exam. Besides, that’s all you were doing last night.”
Lily wasn’t listening. She was beside herself with rage, “I cannot believe that he had the nerve to say something like that. Fall for him? He could have had the decency to let me respond. But, no, he is so stuck-up that he had to make sure that the last word was in his favor,” Lily kept ranting, “He is so cowardly that he can’t have an honest conversation with me. He has to make himself feel superior by pushing down others.”
Finally she said in a low voice, “James Potter, I will never fall for you.”
When they reached the portrait hole Lily was still fuming. Sarah decided to take a chance and say, “Lily, calm down. I’m sure James was just playing around.”
They walked into the common room, which had only a few people, and took the two armchairs by the fire.
Lily sighed. “I don’t know why I’m so mad. I just wish that he would give up on me. I can’t wait to go home for the summer and forget about him.”
“Well,” began Sarah cautiously. “He obviously likes you a lot...What if he is really nervous and can’t control himself around you? Maybe if you gave him a chance he would calm down around you and act more civilized.”
Lily looked at her friend with raised eyebrows, “It’s James Potter. It’s just the way he is. Can you honestly see him of all people nervous?
“Well, no.”
They heard the portrait hole open and both turned to see James stumble through the opening. He appeared to be sopping wet and covered in what appeared to be little bits of food. When he saw them sitting in front of the fire he waved and started walking towards them.
Lily scowled.
“So how are you ladies?”
Lily got up, walked past him, and headed towards her dormitory.
James reached out and took hold of her arm.
She tried to pull herself free but he held on tight, “What is the matter with you?
She faced him, her face full of pure hatred, “Potter, just leave me alone. You think that you’re so high and mighty, but it’s really just hot air. I thought that you would have the sense to realize that if you wanted to go out with me then you might have to change a little, you know, maybe deflate your head a bit, but obviously, you don’t have the sense God gave a goat. God, you make me sick.” With that she kicked him in the shins with all her strength. She was tired of this. Couldn't she live her life in peace without James Potter?
He grunted and let go of her. She ran up the stairs into her dormitory. Sarah gave James a terrified look and then ran up after her. He swore and then began to run up the stairs. Within the first few steps the stairs turned into a slide. He tried to climb up the slide by bracing his hand and feet against the side of the wall. He inched up very slowly. Several times he fell and slid all the way to the bottom. He finally got to the top of the first landing and saw that there were several more staircases before he would get to the sixth year girls.
Already exhausted from his first climb and still wet he gave up and slid down to the common room. When he got up to his dormitory he changed his clothes and lay down on his bed, thinking about what had happened.
*
Lily sat on her bed and stared at the wall ahead of her. She had surprised herself with what she had said down in the common room. She had always refused Potter, but she had never been downright cruel, well, at least not to his face. She and Sarah sat on the bed in silence as they listened to James try and climb the slide. When he eventually gave up Sarah said, “He must really like you Lily.”
“Don’t remind me,” said Lily miserably. “Only a week until term gets out. I can’t wait.”
“Maybe he’ll change,” said Sarah hopefully.
“We’ll see.”
“Tomorrow’s the last Hogsmeade trip. We’re going right?”
“Of course,” said Lily, glad for the change of subject, “Emma and Alice are coming with us too,” referring to two other girls in their dorm that they were friends with.
I'm sorry, this is about half of chapter two. I intended on copying the whole thing. (I have about three chapters written). But I ran out of time. I have to get off the computer...
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