LEave all of your critism here! Thanks!!

ooooooohhhhh so far this is great so keep writing
much love from me
p.s.
happy holidays

i love it tell us when there is more.

i like how it doesnt start out with tons of action and information, i think you write somewhat like JK.

keep writing, and tell us when there is more.

its been updated! Thanks for reading!

awsome chapter. i feel bad for harry and you know to tell you the truth i never thought of dumbledore as loving harry and now that i think about it i think he does or at least he did which is why it makes his death even sadder oh and great work on this fanfic i love it so far
alot of love from me and please update soon