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Rave_XTM
Hey everyone, I'm new to this thread, but I'm severely obsessed non the less biggrin.gif With the last book almost released, I just reread the whole series, including the HBP, and a horrible thought creeps my mind... what is Snape gets killed and then turns out to be good? How horrible would that be? Gah...

What I would like to Snape see doing in DH is
1) I want him to live.
2) I want him to be on the good side (maybe even help Harry defeat Voldemort?).
3) It would be awsome to see some humanity other than anger or hatred.
witchmom
Welcome RAVE XTM!!!
Always great to meet new members.

Ok, here's my one-shot. Always remember I'm not English mothertongue so have pity...

"So that was crying.
A wave of pure emotion raising from his chest, releasing in a sigh all the anger, all the pain, all the delusions he had treasured like precious friends for so many years.
That was crying.
It was...it was like untying a knot with gentle fingers, although the first touch of tears had burned his cheeks like lava. Severus didn't know he still had tears. He had cried his last ones so many years ago he didn't remember anymore.
Severus felt relieved, renewed, young. He started giggling, then openly laughed while tears kept running on his face.
"I'm free" he thought. "I'm free".

Hope you like it!!!
Have a wonderful day...

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Drinotonks
What do I want to see Snape do in DH?

1. As much as it would be nice to see Neville to kill Belatrix, I for somereason would like to see Snape kill her, given her presumption of his loyalty to V I think she'd laugh back at him and not realise until he killed her, that would be a great moment because she's pretty high up in the Voldemort loyalty list

2. I would like to see him somehow feel worthy of himself, feel truly valued, by more than one person, it may be people realising he's good, but some sort of perfect, deserved, happy ending for him, to rid himself of his childhood life. He's suffered too much, maybe he could help Harry kill Voldemort, that would give him some pretty good glory

3. Obviously I dont want him to die, he's suffered enough
toonmili
What I'd like to see Snape do in DH

1) I' love to see him cast a patronus that is related somehow to Lily.

2) I'd love for him to help Harry and for them to finally come to an understanding. They don't have to be best friends but I'd like for them to at least talk without insulting each other every other sentence.

3) I naturally want him to live and not only live, I want him to live well. I am a sucker for happy endings. If he dies then he must die as a huge hero. Other than that it would be ideal for Snape to have a wife of some sort. A HOT one, cause it would be funny to hear Ron's comments but I'm assuming Ron lives. That HOT wife should be Tonks maybe five years later. I see someone said that Remus doesn't have to die for Tonks/Snape to happen and I can see that but I feel better about it if he dies because I don't want Tonks to break poor Remus' heart and I don't want Snape to be a villain for having Tonks. You see guys I have this well thought out. I am obsessed with this ship and I don't know why. I guess I was thinking WOW Snape needs a woman. While most people would suggest Narcissa I am opposed to it because the fact that she asked him to take the vow means that she doesn't care about him. Other women in the series are just not hot or cool enough to offset his behaviour. Tonks is so bright and colourful, he is so dark and moody that they balance each other well.


No matter what happens in DH if these three happen I will love it.
Cobra
The Order was waiting. This would be it, the ultimate test of good and evil. Right where it all started for them, on the grounds of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Suddenly the skies turned darker, as if it was about to rain but not a drop fell. The horizon was suddenly filled with black cloaked figures. The Death Eaters have arrived. Amongst the Order all was silent but Harry, Hermione and Ron knew that Lord Voldemort was weaker now after all of his Horcruxes are destroyed. "Stupefy!" cried a cloaked figure and war broke loose. The Order were battling two and sometimes three Death Eaters at a time! Harry desperately searched for the one he must kill, Voldemort. Harry was shot backwards into a tree. Right then he knew he had found him. Harry dodged a few curses and got a tiny amount of hexes in on Voldemort. Harry was badly bleeding and all was lost but then Severus Snape burst from the battle and belowed, "Sectumsempra!" Lord Voldemort's back was sliced open and he started bleeding. "Severus! You dare turn on your master!" hissed Voldemort. "You are not my master you are nothing!" But then he was thrown backwards. "Aved-" but Voldemort was cut short and fell to the ground. Harry was standing over him crying with joy. Snape stood up embraced Harry in a hug and started crying.

That is more like 200 words sorry but that is what I think Snape's major role will be, except much longer.
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July 19: Write a one-shot -maybe a hundred words, more or less...- of the best Severus moment you could imagine in the last book

“You’re a writer…sir?!” gasped Harry. Hermione twittered slightly hugging a book titled Dark Prince to her chest. “You should ask for an autograph.” muttered Ron. She flushed and swatted him lightly.

“Yes, a writer-” said Snape as he approached closer “and I know fiction when I hear it Mr. Wazlib." Swift as a striking snake Snape held up Harry's left wrist. “Here’s living proof writing lines really doesn’t do a thing! ‘I will tell no lies’ it says! With this very hand you turned over a textbook not your own. Where is it now?” he said icily.

“So what’s this Dark Prince about Hermione?” asked Ron opening the book as they followed Harry and Snape down the halls. With a wicked grin he recited the first lines.

He could no longer fool himself. Slowly, with infinite weariness the professor closed the leather-bound first edition. This was the end. He could no longer bear it. The books he loved so much could not push away the stark, raw loneliness of his existence. The study was lined with books,..*OUCH* Hermin…uh, Sir, I mean. Ouch, yeah.”


**A/N I like to laugh!! I’m hoping for funny parts.**
workaholic_1231
With my one shot, I've comprised all of what I had said I wanted Severus to do, plus a little extra. It's turned out to be a bit longer than 100 words, which I apologize for. When it comes to writing about Severus, it's rather hard to find closure!
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Freedom


After suffering from various curses and hexes he’d received from several Order members, Severus Snape regained consciousness. Fortunately for Severus, all of the Order members were locked up in their own battles and didn’t see him awaken. If they only knew… he thought. His thoughts were momentarily silenced as Voldemort’s voice reached his ears.

“I’m going to kill you Harry Potter.” He said menacingly. He was squared off with Harry, circling him like a lion circles its prey. They were no further than five yards away from where Severus was laying. He scrambled to his feet and the world in front of him began to spin violently. He shook his head and focused on Harry, using the power of Legilimency to tell him to: Be prepared to make the kill!

Bewildered by the sudden intrusion of his mind, Harry broke eye contact with Voldemort to look for the culprit. Don’t break contact Potter!! Snape was mentally yelling. Be prepared!

Then, when Voldemort’s back was towards him, Severus shouted, “Expelliarmus!”

Coming from behind, the spell took the Dark Lord off guard as he looked for the suspect. This provided Harry with enough time to act, “Avada Kedavra!”

Just like that, he was gone; exploding into a huge cloud of green smoke.

He’s gone. It’s over. I’m free. Severus realized. At that moment he dropped to his knees as he was overcome with emotions. His lips involuntarily twitched upward into a genuine smile as one lone tear slid down his cheek.
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Ta-da!

~Ashley
nevillesgirl
Severus crawled over the ancient rubble scraping his hands and knees. Blood trailed behind him as he slide over the splintered door and finally reached his destination. Rummaging through the debris he found it...her picture.

"Lily," he croaked.

Severus tasted the salty tears as they fell uncontrollably from his face. Impatiently he wiped them away and tasted the blood mingling with his pain.

Raising the cracked frame above his tortured face, Severus screamed in anguish.

"I HAVE FAILED! I HAVE NOTHING! HE GROWS STRONGER...and...and your son..."

Severus voice trailed off as he thought of Harry. True, he is James Potter's son. True, they share many of the loathesome qualities that justifies his dilike of the boy. Harry however, is not James. Harry has not once humiliated another for sport. He is fairly intelligent dispite everything I have done to convince him otherwise. He is Lily's son.

It is this last thought that renews life within Severus. His choice is clear. For Lily; for love, he must assist Harry anyway he can.

A faint popping sound peirced the air. Severus looked up to see three shadows cautiously approaching the ruins. He must not be discovered here. Silently he moves away and for now, under the protection of the Dark Lord

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Okay that is mines. I hope you like it. I just wanted to say that everyones stories are so wonderful. Severus is such a great character to improvise about isn't he?
HarryPotterIsLife
ook, well i'm new to this forum, i just found it about three minuets ago and i am happy! mm, i love Servus as a character, and Alan as an actor. he plays snape so well.

well, seeing hows i'm new, i'll do the What I'd like to see Snape do in DH first, and maybe do the one shot later on? ( i will be on this forum A LOT, i hope you guys dont mind too much smile.gif )


What I'd like to see Snape do in DH:



1. firstly, i'd love too see snape have an awsome battle scene with someone, either voldemort himself, ( over which side he's on- good or bad ) Lucious Malfoy or a Death Eater, any of them. up until the sixth book he's been overshined by every other character. he's just known now as "the loser who killed dumbeldor". i think it would be so cool for him to have a battle scence, maybe during the war?! ohh, it would be so awsome.

2. i'd like to see him be on the good side of things, or too come clean about who he really is. he's this mystirious character, nobody knows really anything about him. i want him to finally tell everyone what side he's on, who is he really? tell us why he's on both sides. people want too know.

3. lastly, i'd like to see snape have a heart-to-heart with harry. yah, i know, it most likely wont happen, but one can wish, cant she? i dunno, snape seems to have so many faces, so many sides too him. i'd like him to show a side of himself about his past, or harry's parents, possibly show up at Godrics Hollow? ( because i think everybody knows that harry will go there. )

well, theres my hopes about Servus for Deathly Hallows. im happy to have found this forum!
witchmom
Awww...folks, it's amazing how many incredible stories are still hidden under Snape's cloak... wink.gif
Well, you're still free to post stories for a while. I guess that, since the forums will close today at 9 a.m. there won't be time enough to post our suppositions about Severus' fate in HP7.

My warmest hugs, much envy to those who will participate in one of the mega parties around the world...and all my support to poor ol'Sevvie, whom I love nearly as much as a living being, a close friend, the ideal man, and so on...

One of these days I'll find the courage to publish my novel about him somewhere--just be patient...

xoxo

Clara )O(


Drinotonks
Hmm Snape's future:

nope sorry can't do it justice, I did however want to say that Nevillesgirl I really liked yours, I'm actually at Tafe at the moment, supposed to be working...oops...and I can't concentrate properly on constructing on a worthy piece of prose for Snapes ultimate end, so I wont insult him, I'm sure I could spend months just trying to make those 100 words but I just, as I said before, want to see him valued, I want a moment when he can sigh and think "I'm free" he's been so bound by so many horrible memories, actions and choices his whole life, like so many other characters in the books, such as Lupin, you have to think, can nothing go right for this poor person, haven't they suffered enough?
HP number one Fan
QUOTE(HP number one Fan @ Jul 18 2007, 05:35 PM) [snapback]414842[/snapback]

[I thought long and hard at work today about what I would like to happen to Severus:

*Admit that he did have feelings for Lily. How romantic would that be? And It would prove to everyone else that he is a real man with a heart and sole. wub.gif

*Become a new headmater at Hogwarts. HAHA or form a Severus Snape School for the fun of it tehehe where people learn to be as wonderful and as great a wizard as he is.

*Be the one to kill Voldemort in the end with his famous EXPELLIARMOUS or SECTUMSEMPRA! How cool would that be to see Alan do that? happy.gif Finish the way he started.


First of all Hello again I'm sorry that I couldn't fullfill all of the tasks last week. My computer went dead and had to go in for repaires. I was so gutted! sad.gif

Second of all WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I haven't finished reading the book yet but from what I have read!!:
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So much more of what I predicted came true too which is sooooo scary haha! laugh.gif
What about the rest of you did what you wish for come true?
clara morgue
Hi guys... I havent visited for a while.. twenty or so pages... But I do think the release of deathly Hallows (along with a lot more time) demands a visit.

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Hope everybody here is well... enjoy the rest of the book!

Clara}~
Drinotonks
Wow every 2mins I get a Veritaserum email notification oo this is exciting!

So my views on possibly the best book I have ever read excuse me as I am copying my main viewso n the film and trying to change them to suit the thread otherwaise I could be here until the weekend:

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Yep that's it for now hope it suffices
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Deely Heely the good, the bad and the mostly just plain silly!

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Ah well! Prefer the fanfic versions and they’re forever. Now that I think of it…
Which do you prefer? The fanfic Severus Snape or the JKR version? Why?
Bumblebee
An author cannot possibly keep up with thousands of expectant fans spending months of their free time immersed in theories and speculation. She is bound to have one or two things in her make-believe universe not quite as thoroughly researched as a specialist in her league of fans. How unfair it would be to pass harsh judgement on a few flubs while this otherwise remarkably coherent and intricately detailed magical universe in which we so spend so many happy hours would not exist if it had not been for the author to think of it!

She herself says that the world of Harry Potter is wide enough to allow more tales. The record number of fanfic stories only confirms it. Good universes are generous, and hers is one of the best.

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clara morgue
Ah Bumblebee, all that you said is so true!

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Ps: Hi witchmom.. I missed you eeek.gif tongue.gif
witchmom
Hi...I'm sorry...I need some days to digest the last book...I'm not ready to comment it...just not ready.
Do you believe I cried like a baby for almost 2 hours, after haveing read just ONE sentence? and cried again in front of my husband to whom I was telling that sentence?

I'm totally upset...I don't know how I feel.

Let me recover and a flood of words will literally overflow you biggrin.gif laugh.gif

)O(

Thanks Clara...and BUMBLEBEEEEEEEEE MY SWEETIEEEEEE ...WELCOME BACK!!
nevillesgirl
Like you Witchmom, I need a few days to absorb all that has occured into my psyche. I did want to make one comment though.

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I know my thoughts are all jumbled. I will take asome time to think and post soon.
~nevillesgirl
Rave_XTM
Bumblebee, your words made me cry nearly as hard as when I was reading it.


Mod Edit: One liner/short posts are not allowed on the forums, please check your inbox for owls waiting shortly. Thanks
Cobra
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But yea so, those are my thoughts!
Drinotonks
ok back again I love reading these comments, although it does bring a tear to my eye, I think as I read it I feel even more remorseful for how painful Snape's life must have been...

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EliasOsiris
Finally finished with Deathly Hallows, and I agree, that was a lot to read. Now as for the treatment of Severus Snape in this latest installment...

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I guess I wanted too much.
Bumblebee
Clara! It's so nice to meet you again!


It's good to be back on VTM... I'm lucky to be in between jobs at the right time!


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witchmom
Hi all..
Welcome to some new people...visitors or members...don't still know!! happy.gif

I have to say just ONE thing because I haven't finished the book yet. But as far as Snape is concerned,

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I'll be able to be more precise in a few more days.

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pureblood_narcissa
wub.gif I knew it was gonna turn out much more complex with Snape.

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NM
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vortext
To me Deely Heely continued JKR’s parade of irresponsible adults who need therapy. Snape became 2-dimensional cartoony time-waster Chapter 31-32 for me. Here’s a recent article by a Children’s Book reviewer who points out that JKR failed to understand that a true hero needs a moral victory. Harry didn’t have one, but Snape did. Viva nerds!

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BTW the movie Perfume is now out on DVD. I missed seeing it in the theater due to a water heater malfuntion. There's supposed to be extras about the making of it. Hopefully some choice Alan Rickman moments will be found. happy.gif
habitso
Snape is such an interesting character

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HP number one Fan
Hi! Just finished reading the book and WOW! blink.gif

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pureblood_narcissa
HP Number One Fan;

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NM
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Dumbledore's Widow
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clara morgue
Ah good, I see Im not the only one who was more than a little disappointed with Sevs treatment in this...

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Clara}~
nevillesgirl
QUOTE(EliasOsiris @ Jul 25 2007, 06:17 PM) [snapback]418420[/snapback]

I guess I wanted too much.

I too wanted much more.
I just wanted to comment and perhaps clarify what I meant in my post.

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I hope that clears things up.
~nevillesgirl
EliasOsiris
Aahh, Nevillesgirl, you misunderstand me. I think there should have been MORE emotion in your post, more angst, not less.
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nevillesgirl
Yes. Now I understand exactly what you are trying to convey Elias.

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ibcutie32
oh how I do enjoy this book, and I must say that it just adds to the reasons why I love Snape as character.

Cobra
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HP number one Fan
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clara morgue
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ibcutie32
sleep.gif I wonder if our dear old/yet very handsome Professor ever looks in on us and has a laugh at what we his loyal fans have to say about him.

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HP number one Fan
HAHa yeah! I'm sure he would be very appriciative. Also he would see that we have since day one believe in his good heart. *sighs*
I can't seem to stop feeling sad about his death and shattered heart. I read the book about 3 days ago and yet I still walk around with a big black cloud above my head. I even have the words "Snape is a hero" on my fridge using letter magnets laugh.gif and am refering to my self as his widow now. eeek.gif......I'm not obsessed ....I swear blush.gif happy.gif
baz
Hello all, long time, no see.

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ibcutie32
To HP number one Fan, I have to say that I agree with you. Athough it would be nice to know if any of the cast ever hung out in the forums you just to see what their fans are really saying about them.

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HP number one Fan
Ahhh could you imagine that!? Just one day out of the blue Alan Rickman comes on and has a little natter with us! ohmy.gif How cool would that be? It makes me wonder if he ever looks at any fan sites dedecated to him. I doubt he is so self obsessed to look himself up on the internet or that he has the time but it would be cool if he popped in to say hi. wub.gif
HJP/HJG_TrueLove
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ibcutie32
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etphonehome
For those of you who have ever asked the question....

Why was snape so badly groomed?

THis was Jo's response on the live web chat....

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J.K. Rowling: Hmm. Good question. Poor eyesight? Did he look in the mirror and believe he was gorgeous as he was? I think it more likely that he valued other qualities in himself!


I loved it...I am so sure that someone mentioned his poor eyesight to reason something else. I personally like the second part of her answer myself....
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Did he look in the mirror and believe he was gorgeous as he was?


Brilliant!
Cobra
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J.K. Rowling: Hmm. Good question. Poor eyesight? Did he look in the mirror and believe he was gorgeous as he was? I think it more likely that he valued other qualities in himself!

Yes, the second part sounds like our Severus! He wouldn't care how he looked. He would want to be known for his assets not looks. To him he doesn't care if people think he is gorgeous or not he just wants us to notice his skill!
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