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Dlicious237
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KitCatGurl13
very good, a little graphic at some parts, but it's like i can feel how they feel, keep up the good work!
Dlicious237
Thanks very much! Yes, I was a little worried about it being too graphic, but I'm glad that the emotions come through clearly. Thanks for the review!
HaRRYPoTTeR FReaK
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“Don’t think about tomorrow,” Harry whispered, more for his own sake than for Malfoy’s. “Don’t think about yesterday, or this morning even. Don’t think about the plan. Think about tonight. Think about right now.”

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OMG! Is there a reason why you stopped it at that particular place?

This is amazing. I love the description, and how you've kept both Harry and Draco well in-character. Does this take place during HBP? I think so, but I'm just clarifying...

Anyway, PLEASE post more, and PM me as soon as you do. This is one of the best H/D fics I've ever read (including my own! tongue.gif)

-HPF
weird_wizard
hello there,

I just read your story and I really like it! It's amazing, I mean we are talking about Harry and Draco, yet it's believable. you can actually feel the internal struggle they are both fighting, especially Draco, which makes the story really touching.
why did you stop in the middle of the sentence -this was such a breath-taking scene in the Hospital wing?! please update soon, I want to know what happens next! rolleyes.gif

olivia
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