I’m very sad to admit that it was not me who came up with the Harry Potter-universe. JKR have given me inspiration to the story which I have written. I do not own any of the characters! Most of them are JKR’s.
I just want to say that it's my first fanfic.
This story I’m working on starts in James and all the other’s first year. I think it’s necessary because I’ll explain to you why Lily hates James so much.
In the beginning it will be most about the marauders time at Hogwarts, but it’ll end as a James and Lily fic.
I don’t know about that Rating System (PG-13). I think there will be some late in the story, but I’m not sure. If something comes up, I’ll put it in the beginning of the chapter.
Here we go.
1
”Bye mum. Bye dad. See you at Christmas” The boy called, hanging out of the open window.
“Bye Honey” The parents called back, waving and smiling.
The boy closed the window and began looking for a place to sit. The wind outside had messed his hair very much, but it didn’t seam to bother him. He pushed his glasses a little up at his nose because they were on the way to fall off. Everywhere he looked was filled up, until he made the last compartment. A boy at his own age with black hair sat all alone. He opened the door, and the boy looked up.
“Is that seat taken? Everywhere else is filled up”
“No, please sit”. The boy said, putting out his hand. “I’m Sirius Black, first year”
“James Potter, first year too” he said, taking it. “Where’re you from? I don’t think a have ever seen you before?”
“London,” Sirius answered “big city, but a little bit boring if you ask me. Way too many muggles, and no witches or wizards, if you’re not in Diagon Alley. There’s no one to talk to but the stupid little brother of mine. What about you?”
“That’s probably why I have never seen you before. I’m from…”
But Sirius didn’t get the chance to hear where James was from, because in that moment the door to the compartment opened. A boy with light brown hair and a look of tiredness in his face stood in the doorway.
“Hey” he said and smiled a little nervously “Do you mind if I sit in here? Everyone else is to noisy and irritating”
“It’s okay” James said “I’m James Potter, and this is Sirius Black” He pointed at Sirius, who waved and smiled.
“Right.” The boy said “I’m Remus Lupin”
Several hours had past when a yell of help reached the three boys compartment. James opened the door and looked out for the cry. A little further down the passage, two boys and a girl had surrounded a fourth boy with brown mousy hair, who was the one that had yelled.
“HEY! Leave him alone!” James called “What’s he done to you?”
A boy with greasy black hair looked up.
“Mind your own business!” He shouted at James.
“What’s going on” Sirius asked. He had just stepped out beside James.
“They are bullying that boy” James said and pointed.
The three boys had now all their attention at James, Sirius and last Remus who had just stepped out of their compartment too. The third boy had crawled away and was now crying silently.
“Go away will you!” This time it wasn’t the black haired talking, but the girl. She sent an angry look at Sirius, James didn’t know why.
“Now, if you don’t mind, we’ll get back to business.” the black haired boy said, and they turned to the little boy again.
Both James and Sirius drew their wands, and the three turned.
“Get away from him” James said in almost a whisper.
“NOW!” Sirius roared when they didn’t do anything.
They both knew that they couldn’t do much magic, but it was worth a try. The two boys and one girl looked at them, and then turned to leave. When they had stepped into their own compartment, James, Sirius and Remus ran over to the boy.
“Are you okay?” Remus asked, offering a helping hand.
“Yeah. I’m okay” He said taking the hand.
“I’m Remus, and this is James and Sirius. Why don’t you come and sit in our compartment?”
“Okay that’ll be nice. I’m by the way Peter Pettigrew” The boy said a little nervously.
The four boys smiled at each other and went inside the compartment.
Not long after they had entered the compartment, the train begun to slow down.
“I think we’re there” Sirius said.
The four boys took their luggage and went outside. First they just stood at the platform, looking around at the other students.
“First years over here” A voice called, and they moved towards it.
A lot of small kids were there. The two boys and one girl who had tease peter too. Soon they started walking and ended up by a lake. They all was told to sit down in some small bots and they begun sailing over the lake. They went inside the great castle Hogwarts, and were placed in a little room. Here a tall witch called Professor McGonagall told them some things about Hogwarts. James knew the most, his father had told him. After a while they were brought into the biggest hall James had ever seen.
So what do you think of the first chapter?
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