Hi everyone!!!! This is my first fanfic and i don't think i'm much of a writer so please leave some feedback and tell me what i could do to improve it!!!! I've started writing it but i'm not sure where it's going to lead so maybe you could give me good ideas for the plot line aswell! Thanks for reading it and i'll post some more soon.

Frm rachel *~ (miss_r_weasley) xx

hey i thought this was really good. i like ginny's line about how lupin realized he was beign stupid but at the same time telling harry he was stupid. keep posting

Hey I like the story. I agree with eagleanimagus about Lupin being stupid. I wish Harry would just get with Ginny again soon. Please write more! This is really good. I'm looking forward to more.

haha what did you say?? it wouldn't be as good as mine?? no you're right...it's better!!! Its really good. The extras are improvements too!! I love it! I cant wait for you to write more!!!
x-x-x em x-x-x
p.s. thanks for adding me at the beginning!!! wooo!!!

Hey loving this so far, you have a great first chapter and lots of potential to write more so keep it up.
For a first fic your have started it off with a good chapter that is written well, hope this means there are more good ones to come

keep posting

Omg wow!!! I didn't think many people would like it!!! I'm writing more now but i don't know when i'll be able to post it because i'm stuck in the middle of looming exams and a huge pile of coursework that hasn't been done lol. Thanks anyway everyone!!!(and em yours is really good so everyone check it out!)

Frm rachel *~ xx

This is very good! I liked your new chapter. Im looking forward to reading alot more of this story. Its very descriptive and I like that. I could imagine everything in my head.

wow, great chapter. you have really nice writing, i hope all goes well with the wedding. please post soon, i'd luv to read more

I love it so far! You have everyone in character perfectly and you have the right timing too. Things aren't rushed or happening to slow. Overall it is just a perfectly smooth read. Great job! Love it! Can't wait to read more.
~snitch

i like it a lot. brilliant chapter. i wonder what happens at the wedding. what happened to ginny did she not come down fro her room when fleur asked her for more clips? hope you post soon.

Hey!
I like this story so far. I like the Lupin/Tonks thing and I hope Ginny and Harry get together again really soon. Looking forward to the wedding. Keep writing please!

Hey great story, I really love it. I'm a h/g shipper so I hope they get together soon, and Ron and Hermione . Unless I missed it, which I do sometimes, I don't think you meantioned what Ginny was wearing. I would really love to read that (if you already didn't ) Or maybe it's in the next chap..
can't wait for more! update soon!
harry_potter_5678

Hi.
Thanks harry_potter_5678! No you didn't miss any R/H action but some may come in future chapters and Ginny's outfit will all be explained in the next chapter and i'm not sayin any more . lol.

Frm rachel *~ xx

Hey guys! I've posted a new chapter and it has a description of Ginny's dress in it. I got the idea for the dress from my cousins wedding, all the bridesmaids were wearing the dress that Ginny wore in my fanfic. If you want to check it out click on the link and there is a picture of the back my cousin's bridesmaid dresses.

Click here for a picture of Ginny's dress!

Hope you liked the chapter!!!
rachel *~ xx

hey i liked this chapter. the wedding was really well described. i hope harry and ginny get together soon. post again soon. this fic is great and i wanna know what happens

Hey! New chapter! I like the description of the dress and its beautiful. What does Harry want to talk about? I hope it means he wants to get back together soon! Please post more soon!

Hey great chapter! The wedding was great and so was the after party with the dancing and stuff. I really hope that Harry wants to talk to Ginny about getting back together!!! Post more soon please!!

hey I loved this chapter, it was soo cute . I loved the details you went into on the wedding and the dancing..Ooo I hope Harry wants to talk with Ginny about getting back together Can't wait for your next post.
harry_potter_5678

hey. this was excellent. you are a brilliant writer! i liked harry's birthday presents. the snitch was a great idea! and the two way mirrors. post again soon. i can't wait to read more.

YEA! Harry and Ginny ARE BACK TOGETHER! iM VERY HAPPY RIGHT NOW! I liked Harrys gifts and I can't wait to read more. Post soon!

good on ya for getting harry and ginny back together this chapter is excellent you must have put in a bit of thought to come up with those presents they were really good

Anyway congrats on another excellent chapter hope you post again soon

Excellent Chapter!I I like Harry's birhday presents and I'm glad that Harry and Ginny are back together!!!I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Hey! This is a really good fic. I like it a lot. You really have something going here. I love the details that you put in it. I loved the wedding. The Twins getting drunk. Hermiona and Ron together. Harry and Ginny together. Ron getting Harry that amazing gift. This is a truly awesome fic. Keep up the good work.

This is so great, I love ship stories like this. Harry and Ginny, Ron and Hermione, and Lupin and Tonks are simply meant to be. That's all there is to it. Keep up the good work, I absolutely love it.

Much love,

ShainaPotter

As you can probably guess, the smilies are in celebration of Harry and Ginny getting back together but to be on the safe side, I’ll just give it an extra YEAH!!
Oh, and by the way, fab chapter. I liked the birthday presents, with the Voldemort thing and the two way mirrors.
Post more soon!

GO HERMIONE! I am sooo happy she is Head Girl. This chapter was muy fabuolous. Ginny did such a good job on her Owls. Yeah her! So Hogwarts is re opening? Harry, Ron and Hermione going back? Ill have to wait. Post soon!

i knew Hermione would be Head Girl. So are Ron and Hermione going to go with Harry or is he going to make them stay? i hope they go with him, Ginny too. Speaking of Ginny, she did good on her OWLs. post again soon. i can't wait to read more

hey good chapter good on hermione for getting head girl LOL every one at the burrow knows that ron and hermione like each ginny did really well in her OWL's.

excellent chapter hope you post again soon

This fic is still going strong. i like the way Hermione acted about her HG badge. But now I want to know who HB is. Probably Ernie MacMillian? Oh well I guess we have to find out next time. Ginny's O.W.L. grades were really good. But of course everyone except Hermione failed HoM. That's a given. But keep up the good work.

Although I absolutely love this story, I have but one request, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T MAKE DRACO MALFOY HEAD BOY. Please. Again, your fic is excellent as usual and I particularly like the new chapter. Very good job and keep up the good work!

Much love,

ShainaPotter

I agree with ShainaPotter, please dont make Draco Malfoy head Boy. Im glad Mrs. Weasley is secret kepper. She is a good choice. Im so glad that Harry told Ginny everything. Im also happy that Harry, Ron and Hermione are going back to school. Post soon!

Hey!! Wow i'm so sorry i've not signed this feedback thread for a while and it's my own! Sorry! Anyway thank you so much for all of the comments i stay can't believe people actually like my writing! It amazes me. Hope you like the new chapter!

thank you!
rachel *~ xx

hey excellent chapter. i like the twins new invention. Molly the secret keeper... i would never have thought that but i guess that's why you made her secret keeper haha. post again soon. i can't wait to read more

LOL that chapter was awesome i like Ginny she's a feisty girl i reckon that the order made a good choice in their secret keeper the twins continue to amaze with their new inventions i wonder what they will come up with next???

Anyway hope you post a new chapter soon i cant wait

Hey this was a really good chapter.Simply fantastic. I loved F&G new invention and everything else. Harry telling Ginny about the prophecy and Horcruxes. This was a really good chapter. Keep up the good work and you have to keep me posted.

Wow what a chapter. It was huge! But I liked it! I missed the last one so a note on the second last chapter : thank you for making Hermione Head girl and thank you for making her hug Ron!
Also I like the Mrs Weasley secret keeper thing, I would never have thought of that so good job! Please keep the Harry/Ginny stuff, coming loving it! Also could you put a touch more R/Hr in or am I being to impatient?! Oh well, keep up the good work and post more soon!

Hi guys! I've added a new chapter and especially for HP#1_wee_lil' I've added a special R/Hr moment for you. Hope you like it but it's a bit of a cliffy sorry!

Frm rachel *~ xx

hey.
great chapter. i like when are Ron and Hermione going to get together? i wonder what this new DADA teacher is like. post again soon. you are a really good writer

hey this was a really good chapter. i liked the way you put in the two different common rooms and the flashback. thank goodness hermione isn't the way she used to be. i couldn't deal with that. hermione and ron were awfully close together. they will probaly make an excuse for it. harry and ginny will probably tease them as usual.

Hey. Great chapter. Good thing McGonagall is letting them go. Man, when are Ron and Hermione going to get together? Something always seems to ruin the moment for them. I wonder what it'll be like when they find a Horcrux.
Post again soon.

Yeah new post! well that seemed easy to get McGonagall to let them go after Voldemort. Why wwont Ron and Hermione look each other in the eye? I probably missed something. Post soon!

Hey thanks everyone for the feedback i'm really grateful for it. Sorry GryffindorBabexhott if i didn't make it very clear and for anyone else who doesn't know what's going on: Harry and Ginny found Ron and Hermione stood close together in chapter six (i think) and they got very embarressed, so then in the last chapter they were again pushed close together and they again got embarressed.

Sorry if i didn't make that clear but there you go.

Thanks rachel xx

I loved this chapter. Ron and Hermione are getting really close together. Why don't they jusy hurry up and get it over with. They both clearly like each other. How can people be so smart yet so dumb? It confuses me. McGonagall was easier to convince than usual. I thought Harry would have to argue for a moment at least. But oh well. I can't wait for the next chapter so post soon.

Hey everyone! I am so sorry it's taking so long to post the next chapter. It's a bit of an important one and i'm taking my time writing it because i don't want to get it wrong but thank you so much for all of your feedback so far.
Again, so sorry.

New Chapter people!!!!!!!!!!!! Woo finally again i am terribly sorry that it took so long but at least it's here. Bit of a big chapter so who do you all think the person behind them is? I'll give you a clue: it's probably not who you are expecting but i'm guessing now i've said that you will all have guessed who it is.

Please post feedback thanks but no one liners please.

rachel xx

Wow. Nice ccliffy . Grrr. Who was it. A Death Eater? Wow. I didnt expect Harry to be related to Ravenclaw. But that was brilliant! I cant wait for more

Post Soon
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Hey! That wasn't fair! Whose voice was that? I need to know... now! That was an excellent chapter. Typical Ron, behind on homework already... you'd think he'd have learned by now. And Harry's ancestor was best friends with Rowena Ravenclaw, wow!
post again soon.

I agree with eagleanimagous. That was not fair. I have got to stop reading these fics. They get me frustrated if I read too mant good ones at the same time. This is the second time today I have had to read a cliffy. Stop it NOW! But I liked the idea of RR being related to Harry. But I think that was either Snape or Voldy's voice. Most likely it was Voldy, but I am torn between the two. Now I will say this nicely like I did to Big D. Post now and nobody get hurt.

Hey evryone! Thanks so much for the feedback.

GryffindorBabexhottYour right, it is a death eater but i would have thought that was a given. lol. Just remember Harry isn't actually related to Ravenclaw, she just left his family all of her possessions. They were friends. But anyway, I'm glad you like it and i'll try to post soon. We're off school so i have loads of time to write.

eagleanimagous I'm sorry but i'm not going to tell you who it is you'll have to wait to find out. I wanted something to happen at Godric's Hollow to make the story a bit more exciting and so i needed something that would give Voldemort to leave a horcrux there. I'll try and post soon.

padfoot17 Fanfics get me frustrated aswell lol. I am truely sorry about the cliffy. Happy that you like the idea of RR being connected to Harry although like i said to GryffindorBabexhott, he is not related. Not sying anything about the voice but you're on the right lines. Please don't hurt me!!!!! I'll post soon!!!!! lol.

rachel xx

I just read all of it
I can't believe it was a cliffhanger *looks angry*
Hopefully you'll post soon *hint*
That was really great, i can't wait for more Brilliant ideas and really creative!
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