Place all feedback on my fan fic here.

not bad. it got a little confusing though. like first harry was somewhere with voldemort and then he was somewhere else with hermione and then voldemort appeared again. keep posting

Well, that was just a flashback to show that Harry was searching for the final horcrux and then he figures out that it is Voldemort's wand. I am currently re-writing it to make it sound better since that was just my first draft.

I'm a bit confused, was that a one shot or are you going to write more about how harry finds and kills voldemort, and then maybe some stuff about after the war. hhhmmmm..... whatever the case good post.

Becca

Like I said earlier, that was just a draft that I am going to edit. Now that you mention it, it sounds like a good idea to add on. I am trying to get it to sound more and more like JKR. But, anyways, yes I will add on and make it a more detailed fan-fic. It will be fun to see how it turns out when it is far away from being off the tip of my head.

~Filius~