Gosh. Stupid Bella and Regulus. They have to ruin everything. Vicky's dead! And Lily thinks it's all her fault. The guilt is all uopn her shoulders. All because of Regulus. Stupid fowl git. I never knew Bella liked James. That's weird! haha. And of course smilmy git Snape. Ew. I might add.
No more deaths, please?

Sad Victoria had to die. But better her than Lily. And then she starts to feel guilty… But James and Lily are sooo cute together, and her mother saw them haha.
“Dance.” Haha. Go Sirius, dance!

Bloody Brillant! wow the rain kiss...sigh.lol keep working o this one I am so happy you are still going along with it. Keep up the good work..

Kaili

Hey, good chapter. Dumbledore rocks, i would also trust him with my life too, i thought that it was really great that james told dumbledore about the spy, good thinking!! Lily's mum rocks, she really seems to understand her daughter, it's a great relationship! It's a shame that vicky had to die though i guess Petunia isn't going to take this too well. Well done and post soon
Piglet

hey this is really good. i like how you had voldy come that made it really interesting. it certainly got my attention. i cant wait to read more of the story.

Ha ha ha! I loved many of those quotes. Smooth Romeo - I like you better than Vernon - She meant DIFFERENT bathrooms! Very funny. poor James. Lilys dad put him that torture! So like fathers these days! Paint fight. I would never have one of those because I would be afraid to get all messy! Im really loving this fic.
Post soon!!!
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Haha hey Stef Great chapter I don't even know what was the last chapter posted but moving on lol. They're all great

Hey, Great chapter!!! I thought it was a really funny one as well, well despite the beginning bit with Regulus. I loved the idea of a paint fight, i myself have never had a full thrown war, but just abit of paint on the face and arms lol, still the idea of using magic to cover the walls in paint seems like cheating!!! Lily's dad sounds great, very protective but all dad's should be like that lol!!! Well done and post soon
Piglet

Hey, Stef. Excellent chapter. James and Sirius have bigger ego's than me and Chris... We could start a club, the Gigantic Ego For Men Club. Lol. James is all nervous around Lily's dad, haha. I know how he feels... Well, anyway, great chapter.
Post again soon.

Well it's late so I'm gonna make this psot short and simple.
A lot happened in this chapter and I liked it.
Everything's turning out lovely.
Post soon.

Awe that was so cute. im happy that they told Lilys parents about each other cause it just shows that they want there blessings, and they really want the parents to be comfortable with there decision. i honestly cant wait till the next chapter.

HOW SWEET! May i comment on my favorite parts.

I laughed my head off at this part!



HA HA! Soooo Muggle Boys! Or at least - the ones I know. Very funny.

I loved the song also! Cute. Nice to see some other people from Hogwarts. Post soon Stef!
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I really liked this chapter!! The song was really sweet!! I loved the part where Sirius and Andrew were racing!! And James' Mom's reaction made me laugh! I can't wait to find out who wins the game so I hope you post again soon!!!

-Kelsea

Hey, cool chapter! I have to say i LOVE James parents, they are just sooo funny!! Especially Andrew, the was he raced Sirius in the air, too funny! Well done and post soon
Piglet

OMG!!!!! THIS IS LIKE THE BEST FANFIC EVERRRRRRRR!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON. THE GIRLS WILL WIN IN BASKET BALL. I LOVE THIS FAN FIC. UPDATE SOON. I'LL BE COUNTING THE DAYS LO.

Stef! You need to pay me for using my lines. Love the writing cutie keep it up

Stef!!! You're not dead!!! lol I'm just kidding!!! I'm so happy you posted!!! That basketball game was fun!!! I knew the girls would win!!! It sounds like they had a fun summer... and I kinda feel sorry for Dotty.... she's all alone in that big house most of the time!!! James and Lily are Head boy and girl that's awesome!!! And that's so awesome that Jay got to hex Bella!!! I tip my hat to her... or I would if I wore hats!!! I hope you post soon!!! Can't wait!!!

-Kelsea

Hey! You're alive! I was just wondering when you would post! Great chapter, whoa, for some reason I thought that last year was their 7th year! I think I am going to go back and re-read! Aww...Dotty sounds so sweet and nice. Haha, Jay hexed Bellatrix! Post soon!
DD's-man-through-and-through

Yea! An update, I’d just begun to worry about you... this was such a great chapter, but did I read the story did end soon? No! It’s so great! Please re-think it. James was nervous about Lily’s parents? Wow, it must really mean a lot to him. But I understand; it’s her parents! They can be scary! James in a band? And then they’ll kick him Gordon out? Haha, they’re mean. And they just had to give James a compliment, and I loved Lily’s reply “Gosh Jay, you had to say it didn’t you? Now his head isn’t going to fit in the car” . Haha! Loved that. I really liked the part where Bellatrix was hexed. HA! In your face! Please post soon, but don’t let it end

Hey, great fanfic!! Oh-no if the fic is ending soon and they have just started their last year of school, What's goning to happen! I liked it when Jay said about flying in a plane, that made me laugh, good cover up!!! It was a funny chapter, and i like how you keep making small references to wormtails strange behaviour or his dissapearences, nice touch!
Piglet

Stef...its just starting seventh year...how is it ending soon? Unless you post really long posts or don't do alot. But anyway: James is hilarious.

I'm up early and read that and gosh..ego, James, ego. HAHA! Nice call about the flying things. Congrats to James and Lily on Head Boy and Girl. Post soon!
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Harry and Ginny 4 eva: oh i always love to get feedback from new readers! it's so amazing to see that someone takes the time to read something so long! thank you so so much for reading

deatheater4ever: dork dork dork don't call me cutie! gosh! thanks for reading dork!

Kelso2010: i'm not dead kelso! i've been... ok i have no excuse dotty loves her job even if it means being alon most of the time i love dotty! so thanks so so much for reading kelso and i'll have a new chapter up very soon

DD's-man-through-and-through: nope but this year will go by very fast hahaha so kaley i'm alive and yeah everyone loves dotty she's so hugable! thank you so much for reading!


happy-potter: vicky it has to end someday well actually it's going to end very soon! so i'm glad that you liked the chapter i think lily is so funny and well jay is baised on a friend from the forums i think you know her ChOco ok so i'll post soon! thanks for reading!

Piglet: the girl jay is baised on is also a dork and says random things like that so yeah this year will go by quickly but well i think i've made it to long already. i'm gla dyou liked it and well i'm really glad you're still reading it thanks for reading and yeah i make mention to wormtails weirdness because it will be relevant in the end

GryffindorBabexhott: wizzie woo! the year will go by fast an the chapters will be long so it is ending soon yeah i love james and sirius they are so funny and cute so i haven't spoken to you in a while you should get online more often! i'm glad you still read and that you enjoy! *hugs*

new chapter up tomorrow or saterday

Wow i love lily and james, no one could ever replace them, i love how they pretend not to see anything. Bellatrix deserved that after what she did, cant wait till the next chapter.

Lily+James=Forever: hahaha aren't lily and james just so responsible? hahaha i love them too! so i'm glad you like the story and i hope you keep reading! thanks for reading!

ok new chapter up

Hey, loved that last chapter! lol i do love Jay, and that story of hers with dumbledore was really quite sad, and i also so can't help but think that it is Jay who will die, please prove me wrong! But it also made me laugh with the duel hehe! Glad Jay is joinin the order, wise choice Lily! Well done and post soon!
Piglet

hey, i love your fanfic! loved the latest chapter!
i have to say i'm not too sure what to think about the latest DADA teacher. but i loved the duel between "black and white"! genious! haha! well can't wait for your next chapter! keep the good writting coming!
kc

Piglet: hey! So yeah jay is the coolest! And ok I’ll tell you the truth she’s not the one who is going to die because well let’s face it the character is baised on a good friend of mine and it’d be rude to kill her but then again if she makes me mad I will kill her thanks for reading!


x_kc_x: yay a new reader *does happy dance* hahahaa well i’m glad you enjoyed it! Well I can’t tell you much about the new teacher only that she’s going to be a big part of the story well ok not big but yeah part hahahaa so ermmm yeah jay and bella now hate each other! Things will get worse between them so thanks for reading! And I hope you continue to read!

New chapter up! Yay! I know I took forever!

Hey, yay your back *little dance* , hmmm.... you know i am actually puzzleing on who that man is, i have a few ideas but i can't decide on who??? Still love the chapter, its funny how they have guessed the furry little problem but Rebecca still has no idea hehe, its good that Jay and Lily are not freaking out and telling the world! Well done and post soon!
Piglet
ooo almost forgot, snape and lily friends a while ago... really nice touch lol!

Can't leave much feedback. I'm in a rush... sorry. But I love how's it's going...
I love it soo much. Keep posting!!

Wow, I haven't been on this site in ages. High school swimming just started again and I've been incredibly busy. But I was checking my email and that song that James sang at Carmels funeral popped into my head. So then I started listening to it, and I was like 'hey I'll check to see if you posted another chapter' and here I am.

Haha so many of the stories I liked have been finished. So I'm looking at a couple hours ahead of me trying to get caught up on them all.

But anyway! Great chapter, ooh, I wonder if that was Lestrange that Bella was kissing? I love how you added Snape and Lily being friends, nice way for Lily to know about Remus. Haha James...'furry little problem' love that line. Still loving this story, and post soon. I'm off to swimming. Yippee. not.

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Piglet: hahahaha becca is a bit slow or just not as observant as lily and jay hahaha ok so ermmm yeah i was right about snape loving lily so i had to work things into the story the mystery man well he isn't like a big deal i'd be more worried about who is watching them ok so i'll try to post more often! i'm working on the next chapter thanks for reading!

JSB 073: i'm glad you find the time to read and i'm glad you love it! i'll try posting soon i promise thanks for reading


DD's-man-through-and-through[b]: kaley!!! long time no see partly because of me right? so yeah i love that song! that's why i included it but i'm glad you took time to come in here and read... well i'm gonna finish it really soon if only i find the time to type new chapters ok so yeah that's a really good guess and i had to include something of the actual story right? so yeah ok so lily knows about remus but she still doesn't know about james being an animagus so let's see how she takes that dun dun dun i'm glad you liked it! so i hope you still find the time to swim over here and read thanks for stopping by and i hope the swimming goes better!

ok guys i'm trying to finish the new chapter but i'm working and going tos school so i'm a bit busy but i'll manage! so thanks for posting!

Wonder chapter. I'm not fond of that teacher, I don't know why though. And James did the incredibyl hard spell. Claps for him.. haha. But I'm asking the same exact questions you asked us at the end of your chapter. So maybe I'll get the answer soon? It's unsafe to meet at Hodgwarts, they're soo stupid. Haha.
Love it. Post soon.

Oooo, someones in trouble hehe! Well firstly why meet in Hogwarts, and then not deeply hidden in the forbidden forest, well duh!!! Hehe, hmm... so i'm in agreement with JSB 073, there is deffinatly something up with that teacher, something strange and mysterious? But well done and post soon!
Piglet

You are a dork. Haha. Kidding. You know I am too!!! That was really great. Poor Remus, being teased about the girl he ends up dating. And he was worried about the map. But James goes a does it after all. Naturally. I wonder what will happen. Post soon!
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STEF IS BACK!!! *angels sing* haha
I don't think you're a dork... well, not too much of a dork anyway. just kidding
Okay, so, on with the feedback! That chapter was excellent! I loved it! But what I want to know is, how did Meredith and Dumbledore know to go out onto the grounds? Was Meredith meeting Dumbledore originally? or did they just bump into each other? if that's the case, then what were the other "matters" that Meredith had?
But honestly, that was an excellent chapter. It was short, but I liked the way you wrote it.
Post again soon!

Ynafets! It was good I loved it but it was short so make it longer! haha I can finally review again! yay! Alright back to reviewing. I can't wait to see what happens next! So update soon! and.... son of a nutcracker I forgot what I was going to say next.... dang it.... all well! Update soon!

The best Blonde EVER!
~Blondie

Hey, Stef! Excellent chapter. Haha, James and Sirius have too much charm for their own good. I mean, it shouldn't be that easy to get off the hook.
And now I don't feel very smart, because I have no idea who the voice belongs to.
Who's going to die? I know it isn't any of the Marauders or Lily. Is it going to be Jay? Or maybe Becca? Oh, maybe it's a teacher.

Wait, I just thought of something. Does the cool voice belong to Meredith?
Post again soon.

Ugh. Stupid Lestrange and Ms. Black. Liars like wonders. It's upsetting. Then between Lily and James... an aww moment. He kissed her head and thye're not going to make out while doign her essay, but thing is. Are they together? I don't think they are.
Voldemort's stupid voice is heard once again. Who's gonna die? Becca? PLease no. DOn't do that to Sirius!
Love it. Post soon.

Hey, can't say much as i've got to go, but hear it goes... Hmmm... my theory is this new defence teacher gets killed, don't know why i think that, i just do??? And i obviously think that it was Voldy's voice, grrr.... Any who, great chapter and post soon!
Piglet

Alright, I really liked it! no wait I lied I loved it! I wonder who's voice it is! OH NO! I didn't do the cool thing at the start son of a nutcracker (i love saying that even if you think it's stupid!) all well I'll say it now! DUN DUN DUN! k I'm good now! so where was I ummm it was good and you should update soon! Oh by the way.... I'm unusual not so typical way too smart to be waiting around! Tai-chi practice and snow board champion I can fix the flat on your car... I might even be a rockstar! I'm done now.... or am I... i took a trip to the year 3000.... just kidding I'm way of topic now! So update soon I like it!

~Hyper Blondie!

How did I miss this? TWO chapters! Whose voice was it? TELL ME! Very interesting… But who will die?!?! If it’s Rebecca, I’m not sure what I’ll do to you… Okay, okay… I might leave you alone, but you can’t, can’t, can’t, CAN’T! DON’T DO IT! But otherwise, really good chapters I loved them both WUHU! Post soon and find someone else to die than Rebecca?

I CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE!!!! Im racking my brains trying to figure this out/. Ok, I have a feeling Voldie was talking and there either going after Lily or Rebecca. I DONT WANT TO BE RIGHT! STEF YOU PROVE ME WRONG!! Now, I love how Lily and Rebecca went mental on their boyfriends. Perfect. I loved it. Now, Dumbledore being all calm is....Dumbledore! And the 'for the greater good' very well put. Post soon!
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gahhlfjsadlfkjsdf, I haven't reviewed your story in forever and ever. I think the longest out of pretty much everything. So, I'm sorry. I've been so busy with everything. Anyways, I just read the latest chapter and loved it. =]
This voice is interesting. I want to see more in it.
Oh, and I have to quote something here.

When I read that the first thing I thought was "bam!" Deathly Hallows! It was great. haha.

Anyways, update soon. Your story's rocking.

-Layla-

i swear i replied to your post but pfff my comp was being dumb! ok here goes again!

GryffindorBabexhott: wizziewoo! i'm glad to see your back! i haven't spoken to you in yonks (that's my new word sophie taught it to me! it means ages) ok so back to the fic ermm the voice really can't be voldy's because well they were talking about voldy see i thought it was obvious but then i made andy read it and he couldn't figure it out so i guess it isn't you'll know soon enough who it is and who they're targeting thanks for reading

eagleanimagous: your a dork hahahaha ok but your a nice dork na ok so yeah both sirius and james are charming little bums who can get themselves out of anything most egocentric pigs are (no offence ) ermm yeah yeah yeah someone will die and you know who so shhhhh ok thanks for reading!

JSB 073: hahaha yeah they can lie but DD didn't buy it i mean he isn't that stupid he just knows when he's fighting a lost battle and james and lily have been together for a while now so yeah no snogging oh and the voice isn't voldy's seeing as they were talking about voldy so yeah but the owner of the voice is almost as evil as voldy himself so you'll see who dies! thanks for reading!

Piglet: meredith dying eh? well i just might do that thanks for the idea so no it wasn't voldy's voice but i repeat it's someone equally evil and i am seriously considering killing meredith thanks to you hahahaah feel proud you might have just caused a death! hahaha so thanks for reading!

bounce.like.a.tigger: well if it isn't america's favorite blonde hahahaha my goodness are you random! and what is the year 3000 like? oh so yeah i copied your dun dun dun and please stop with the son of a nutcraker! hahahaa i'm glad you liked it and you take time off from stupid for your ap euro class ahahahahha thanks for reading random blondie !

happy-potter: oh man it's vicki!!! hey! long time no see my friend! i've probably missed like 100 chapters of your fic! i have some catching up to do! so ok you think i'm going to kill becca eh? well that's an idea maybe i will now hahahahaha or maybe i won't! maybe i'll turn becca evil! oh i had never thought about that! yeah i could see it now becca evil! hahahaha so yeah i'm working on the new chapter and you'll see what'll happen! thanks for reading!

[b]Layla: i don't think you've ever left feedback so this makes this ultra cool i know your busy remember your busy bee? hahahaha random i know! i feel i haven't spoken to you in yonks either! goodness! i'm glad you liked the chapter and yeah i was looking at DH when i wrote that. i thought it was time for DD to show some emotion in my fic hahahaha i'm so glad you took some time in your busy bee world to read and post hahahahaa so thanks for reading and hope to talk to you soon!

ok guys i'm actually working on another chapter right now but i had to write a chapter for my other fic which i haven't posted in like months so yeah i'll try to finish one today! it's actually super early here and i'm already up to try to finish the chapter

NOOO! I just started to like her so much and just because he’s friends with Remus doesn’t mean she has to get killed. Just because they have cookies on the dark side does NOT mean you join them! Haha. No, it’s actually not funny. Not funny AT ALL! You can’t kill her! I swear I’ll come after you then… no I won’t as I’ve no idea where you live… But if I did…!
For a moment I actually thought you’d kill Becca in that duel, but I THINK and HOPE she’ll survive, you better listen to me! As you might have understood by now, I’m not happy with you because you intend to kill Jay!
Oh, and 100 chapters is a lot? Have I written that many? No! I’m mad at you right now, will not talk nicely to you, and you will not hear more from me if you’re killing Jay! I’m serious! … Okay, just don’t kill her and I’m happy? I’m not able to be mad at you for longer periods, but I can try haha.
*Trying to stay mad, trying to stay mad...* ... Okay, it might have failed. I’ll let you hear...
Post soon!

DO NOT I repeat DO NOT let Rebecca die. She dies, I will kill Bellatrix and not someone else in Deathly Hallows. Sirius is a lot that she has and Sirius is all she has. Don't let it happen. You mustn't. It's too cruel!
Oh, so they have been together? I guess I missed that somewhere...over the rainbow! whoops. My bad. =]] I'm hyper today so I'm a bit out of it . As you can tell...=]]
I can't believe it all, how ironic is Jay talking about Peter and a fake Sirius. I usually hate irony in fanfics, it's so sad... But I don't want Becca to die. And who's voice is that still?
And what the hell is Celeste thinkign of doing? Going to Snape is gross, but Remus can have friends of the opposite sex, right? And Jay and him have something in common, both affected by a werewolf, if not the same way... it's all sad.
Love it though. Wow, weird huh? Post soon!

STEF!!!! IF YOU KILL REBECCA I SWEAR YOU WILL FER THE WRATH OF LIZZIE!!! And you know thats badd. Now, Sirius can not - CAN NOT - lose someone now. Everyone needs Rebecca. Now, Jay losing her sister is really sad. I was like ' omg'. Now, Sirius is being so commited to her - YOU CAN NOT LET HER GO!!! Now, the dueling scene was very nice. Post soon! (OR ELSE!!!!!)
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happy-potter: gosh vicki i'm scared! *hides* it was your idea not mine! and maybe celeste will succede! hahaha cookies are very convincing watch *gives vicki cookie* come to the dark side and you can have more! and i don't know if becca will wake up... maybe i'll make her sleep forever =P i don't know yet so thanks for reaidng!

JSB 073: hahaha hyper *pokes* alright see my first name is sarcasm and my middle name is irony! hahahahaha so i'm still glad you enjoy even if it is ironic! and celeste is a b... bad girl hahaha poor bitter girl i feel sorry for her even if she is a fictional character! and maybe we'll see a little action between jay and moony not sure yet... so yeah thanks for reading my friend and stay tune

GryffindorBabexhott: well wizzie woo please tell me who i can kill without enduring the wrath of lizzie? yeah the little sister thing is very sad! i hate voldy! he's moldy! ok that was mature! i liked the duelling specially lily and snape thanks for reading!


i'm working on the next chapter! so it should be up soon

Wow. Celeste-bad? That was a twist... well you had just BETTER post soon! I need to see what happens!!!!!! OH, and you had BETTER NOT kill becca! I will be very very very angry with you! DON'T KILL HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sorry bout that...

-Jasmine

No.1_HarryPotterFan: all this talk about killing becca is giving me ideas! hahahahaha yeah jasmine i knew this girl who is very similar to celeste, she went out of her way to make a certain person miserable because he ex fell in love with said girl *shakes head* so yea she's going to do something really stupid and well i must say that if you all don't stop telling me that i'm going to kill becca i might just do it because you guys say i shouldn't ... thanks for reading and posting



ok guys i'm working on the next chapter but since i have evil wonderful exams i haven't really been able to write much... today is friday (finally) so i should be able to type today or tomorrow and leave all my dumb interesting homework for sunday