Hi,

So this is the feedback thread for my fic 'Inside those Beautiful Brown Eyes'. I am open to constructive criticism, and appreciate your thoughts. Please be honest.

Becky N

I really liked this fan fiction . The way you worded it was excellent. I want you to write more!!! please

Becka: thanks! its nice to know someone likes it! i appreciate your comment

yea this is an excelent fic but why the long wait between chapters one and two im sure it couldnt have taken that long to write one chapter. oh well please post again soon!!

mike
destroying the world one child at a time

Mike:yh I know it took ages to even get round to writing the second part, but i've had LOADS going and that needed sorting out, and i even forgot for a little while. but it shouldn't take anywhere near as long as it did before, so don't worry, the next part should be up by the end of the week-hopefully if i'm not too busy. glad you like it!
p.s i love that you added in the bit about 'destroying the world one child at a time! made me chuckle! but i'm just weird that way

Yeah this fanfic is really good. I like the way you describe like everything. I think that means you're a natural. I'm not like that, although I try. Great job on it and I hope you post soon because I will be glad to read this.

zonkos_employee:i think the reason why i describe everything, is because i read a lot of books, and that's how they're written, so i sort of automatically write like that myself. it's good to know you think i'm doing a good job, and i will try to kept it going! and i hope i post soon too because gosh, where is Ron?! i'm not quite sure yet. so i need to sort that out.

I really like the fic!! Hurry up and post the next chapter because I can't wait to see what happened to Ron!!

tagme87:thanks for reading and for leaving feedback! oh and thanks to the other guys who left feedback too. well, I hurried up the best that I could and my beta will, hopefully, have the next chapter ready later! but I did only just get it to her today, so it could be up tomorrow.

Up and spectacular Becky. I agree with zonkos_employee, you really are a natural! Why did Mr and Mrs Weasley hve to die?
hope you write soon

nads

miss granger:thanks fo ther compliment god i think i'm blushing. i'm so weird! and don't get too upset about Mr and Mrs Weasley. i haven't killed them off.....yet. hey and nice job on the betaing!

YEY!!! *does little jig around room*
Mr and Mrs Weasley aren't dead!!!

I love this chapter! I can't wait for more... *stares expectantly at computer screen* lol

Nads

why hello there my lovely beta! wonderful job that you've done, as always! and i'm glad you like it
and don't worry, hopefully you won't have to wait too long for the next chapter.

BeckyN

even though now i can tell its not headed with my ship i think i will still stick around for the end good job with this

thanks. hope you do stick around, and btw there won't be any H/G either, in case you wanted to know.