Hey guyss I got bored so i decided to make another James and Lily Fan fic... heres the feed back and have funn!!

hey i really like the way this starts. post again soon. i cant wait to keep reading.

Lovin it! I like your story plot. You described your characters well. I thihnk Lily might be over exxagerating a little with James trying to sneak a peek. But I just have to wait. Can't wait for more so post soon!

This was a really good post. I liked it a lot. But I think there is something happening that the Maruaders don't see. Along with Lily and her friends. I want to know what it is. But I guess I have to ait until the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

You posted the same chapter again.