Ok this is is my feedback thread for my first fan fiction 'Do I Love You' so if you like/dislike my story tell me!

Hey.
I already posted before in your fic but i just thought i would say it seems good so far. i can't wait to see what happens with James and Lily.
post again soon

Heyy there!
I just stumbled acrossed your fic and it's quite good! I can't wait to see what happens next! Post more soon!

P.S.If you have some extra time, you can check out my fics. My latest one is "Where You Are". The link is in my siggy. And good luck with your science fair!

Hi!
It is realy good!I want to see what happens with Sirius and Nat and James and Lilly!

Hey guys thanks for the feedback!

Madmoiselle Lilly-thanks for the luck I diddn't win but I passed with a B so thats good.

snaperules-thank you for telling me that you like it.

eagleanimagous- thanks for telling ne how to set up a feedback thread.


Please give me more feed back everyone!!!

aww... your story is turning out to be pretty well for your first. but not much has been going on. i mean yes, i do like it, but more has to go on between lily nad james, i think they are the main characters, right?

Yea JSB 073 I know it's getting away from L/J but the next chapter (It will be here soon) will go in the Lilly/James direction



Just had to add this I need feed back please!!!!!!!!!!

i was hoping more would happen when the boys were ver, but that's just me. it's pretty cute, but it's like other stories, james is both head by and quidditch captain then lily is head girl, blah blah blah. but i like ti anyways. truce with a hug from lily... hm. interesting.

aww that was cute. You have a good start i bet you fic will be really good! Post soon i wanna know what happens next!
Ginny Potter

i like it i think this is gana turn into a great fic. write soon i wana know what happens.

Yes! thank you more feed back

JSB 073-Remember the boys haven't left yet

DD's-man-through-and-through-Thanks I'm glad you like it!!

Potter_Freak-Thanks I'm working on the next chapter right now

Thanks people keep posting!

ooooo. Poor Sirius! He actually got dumped by a girl. Everyne is having love trouble. Ha. Is one of Lilys friends a seer? Because that would be pretty awesome!
Post soon!
<333

Um... Lizzie I think you have the wrong story I don't remember writing any thing about a prank on wormtail and my name was never ana and I never asked anyone to call me that

Hi! I Just posted my chapter so check it out!

that is a really good story!!!!!! i like how sirius had his foot jammed!!! post soon so i can read more!!!!!!!!!

hahaha. I love that girl's name. Chickadee. =]
And they hexed the Slytherin's sweet.
cool chap. post soon

Hi guys thanks I promise the next chapter will be here soon

Okay. I DON'T LIKE CLIFFHANGERS. No one does actually. So why don't yu just come back and post the next chapter up?
I can't believe never broke up with his old girlfriend.. stupid. I mean it's common sense, you're going to hurt her wthout meaning to. And why is he gonna kiss her when his old girldfriend is right there. Not safe. What's gonna happen?
love it. POST SOON.

Hi everyone I'm sooooooooooooooooooooo sorry i haven't been on. But does anyone know ware my story is if you do please PM me!!!!!!!!

HI!!! i just read your fanfic and I like it.In the beginning it was a little slow,but it's better now.I can't believe he culdn't break-up with his old girlfriend.I think he is really dumb.Well,liking it!
>Post soon.

Hey! laughingirl_92 thanx so much i'll post asap if i can find my story!

i really like the story so far. i like how its centered on relationships. its funny how peter pettegrew is just there and has nobody, yet in a way its kinda sad. it would be interesting if you incorporated snape a bit more since him and lily were supposed to be best friends and all but its your story and whatever direction you choose to take with it im sure it will turn out really great. please please please post the next chapter soon. and you should have a link back to your fic, it would make it easier to find.

oh and your story is on page 2 of the fan fics. just to help you find it.

Hi everyone thanx for the help finding my story I just posted another chapter!!

Well written chapter! I liked it a lot! Well can't wait for the next one!!

it was quite good. i was dissappointed at how not much happened during the chapter but it was great how lily and james are getting closer. i was a little confused at the part with slughorn and jess and tess and amanda talking but the rest was really well written. i cant wait for the next chapter <3 luvin the story. pleez write again soon!

I'm sorry this is going to be a short post but I have to study.This was very well written and I liked this chapter very much.Do post soon
>Rosie

Hey Rosie thanks that makes me feel a lot better knowing someone enjoyed my chapter
and ali kisskiss thanx too and now you say it that probably could have been better written



Ok people I know nothing much happens during chapter 9 but like I said the next one will make up for it and be more interesting. and I don't know maybe some of you will enjoy it!

i really liked this chapter. though it was shorter than i'd have hoped, it was interesting. i like the unexpected twist of lily feeling gealous and her dreams about james. lovin in! post again soon

Hi people this has to be fast but It will take a little longer than I expected to get the chapter up but I'll post as soon as I get the time!!
Jill

i dont mean to rush you but i reallly want you to post right away. i've been impatiently waiting for the next chapter for what seems like forever. i just hope itll be good. you're doing great with this story. keep it up!

Oooh nice chapter! And Lily sort of confesses in the last part! Oooh But why do I have the feeling, that even though she asks Natalie not to tell, Natalie is going to tell James? I just have a feeling..

Post soon

Try-outs went well and Lily has admitted she likes James. That's a huge step for her. What's up next?
<33 Post soon.

Hey guys! I'm glad you liked the chapter And I know you're going to love the next one!
<3 Jill
PS. Feel free to Pm me if I'm taking too long!

It's Great!!!! PLEASE keep writing, it's one of the best of all of the ones I've read (and I've read almost all of them).

Lord Harry

Post soon

Yay! She admitted it... now what???? Will Natalie tell??? Post SOON!

Ok Just posted a new chapter Blah, blah, blah I don't need to keep doing this just tell me what you think!!
<3 Jill

Nice, I wanted more but that's okay. Why is she so frantic thinking her friend will tell? Trust them.
Can't wait for more interesting things.
<33 Post soon.

Oh no. That 'yet'... she IS going to tell, isn't she??? Gar... then James'll be all, "You like me, ha ha!!" then I will be mad at you! Lily should just TELL James, then she won't have to worry so much!!

-Jasmine

Hey I said I wasnt going to post here after every chapter but let's face it I don't have the restraint Hope you like the new chapter (and Jasmine plz don't be mad at me!)

<33 Jill

oh oh wow. She told Sirius who told James. Either way, the secret was told. Now Lily hates her, great.... And why exactly will we love the next chapter? Lucky guess, Lily and James get together? Hmm.?
<333 Post soon.

Ha! Natalie told Sirius who told James. Nice one, she must have known he would tell James eventually Nice chapter, and I really want to read the next part!

Post soon

Gar. Natalie told. James had better not be being an obnoxious brat about it!

WHY will we love the next chapter? Grr... tell me NOW!

Please!

--Jasmine

Now guys you know I can't (won't) tell you what happens next you'll just have to be patient and wait But I warn you you will see a side of Natalie and Lilly that you haven't seen before!

Love ya
Jill

Hi peeps Just posted a fairly interesting chapter pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzze give me some Feedback (Please I'm begging you)

Wow. Pretty long chapter. It was good though. Natalie and Lily made up as friends. That's good. And Lily's mother died. That's horrible! And James came after her to comfort her and they KISSED! Are they together now? A yes? A no? A maybe so? And Natalie and Sirius saw them? Is that suppose to be a good thing?
<333 post soon.

Aww the juxtapostition of that last chapter was really good!! Happiness Vs Sadness!! It's shame it took Lily so long to get together with James to see what he's really like, but are they actually 'together'? Tht would be nice for them over Christmas, apart from the fact that Lily's mother died

Oh well, write again soon!

~Amy

Aww I feel so sad for Lily because of her mother but YES! Lily and James are together! Right? Well I guess we'll find out in the next chapter. And Sirius and Nat saw them Nice one.
But what will Lily say when she finds out ?

And by the way they are standing in the castle in public right? James and Lily kissing should surprise alot of people if they saw. And just imagine some teacher yelling: 'Potter, Evans! Public display of affection is banned!' or something like that

Love it, please post soon!!!

Hey people normally right now I would give you a clue as to what will happen in the chapter but as they all turn out to (unintentionally of course) be lies! but you know me I cant resist giving you a hint, so all i will say is that the next chapter will be very emotional for lilly (big surprise) and it will be the two days before Christmas
If only Christmas were only two days away
Thanks for the feedback
Love you all
Jill

OH MY! i feel bad for lily, but OH MY! it would have been better if it started slower than that, holding hands and stuff, since i'd be able to connect with it, but thats sooooo HOT! i love it, i guess it makes sense, they're 17 so its something that people that age would do, lol, but wow, a little too much kiss description for me, but WOW. that was kinda unpredictable, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!! good job!

Weeeeee! They're together! Love it! Post soon! I like how Sirius and Natalie saw... interesting. So they're together, right? RIGHT?

-Jasmine ♥