Me again! Lovin' the feedback! Now that you have read my story, let me know how I can make it better! I appreciate it so much! You guys rock!! Happy Reading!

Oh, I’m first to post to this very good fanfic! I just red it and really enjoyed it. Draco didn’t remember proposing and thought he had been drunk, that was FUNNY It was a ‘good’ side of Draco we saw, and I liked it. I think you could do better is be making some more act, (if you know what I mean?) There was a lot of talk, and it was great, but there could have been more acts where we was told something they did or something. Hope you got it? Keep up the good work and I hope you post again, because this was actually good

Hey! I really like this story. I think that it is great that you are branching out from the normal fics and starting your own topics. I love it when people do this . Your writing is very good and flows really well. The pace is perfect and I can't wait to read more on this fic! Good luck!

I LOVE THIS FIC SO FAR!!!! I love Draco fics, when he's good. You made him sound so normal, and you really wrote Natalee's character so fantastically! I really hope you post more soon because even though I've only read the first two chapters I am sooo hooked!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST MORE SOOOOOOON!!!!!

fellow slytherin lover,
Becca

haha. lol, I luved this fic...haha...Draco's gonna get married...haha, lol, brilliant story plot, very original I LUVED IT. I can't belive it, only 2 chapters in, and I already find it amusing & enjoyable (good job! its' really hard to get me interested in things)...post soon, i'd luv to read more

*DANCES* Heya! Thanks everyone for reading my story and leaving me your thoughts! I love to read them, seriously, I get so excited when I have a new post! YAY! Sorry, I'm a bit hyper at the moment. Anyway, as long as you guys keep leaving the feedback, I will keep posting the stories! Does anyone want me to pm them when I post a new chappie? Just let me know! You guys rock! *GIGGLES* Byes!

~Nicolle~

Hey Nicolle, I think the newest bit is very great!!! I just wish there was more.:( Your IMB image in your signature of a girl w/ green lips is soooo cool. I actually copied it and pasted it on microsoft word. There is no need to pm me cause I'm on vtm all the time. I love how Draco is seen in this fic. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST MORE SOOOOON!!! Who's hyper nooow!! :) :) :) :)

Draco is HOT,
Becca

This was a really good chapter. I like that Draco cares about Natalee and how he describes his friends. I also like this new side of Draco that we have never seen before… He seamed sooo sweet. Anyways… Good chapter and I hope you post again soon

OMG! i luv it! and i really like Natlee (sp?) personality and Draco's nice side, but what i love most of all is that you mentioned Jesse McCartney in here! HE IS MY FAVORITE!!! my door is completely plastered with posters of him! and half of my ipod songs are his, i know obsessive, but i'm obsessed with harry potter too, not to worry!

awww...that last phrase "Yes, I do" is so sweet...lol, brillinat chapter...oooh, so Draco is starting to have feelings for Natalee...cute. lol, I hope you post soon

haha! this is really great! i love this fic! I can just imagine the looks on their faces when they found out they had an arranged marriage... LOL!!! Draco and an arranged marriage! I just cant stop cracking up! this is great!

Aw thanks so much! I'm really happy with all of the feedback I am getting here, I wish I would have found this site sooner! I totally love that icon as well! It's pretty sweet!
~Nicolle~





I'm glad you like Draco, I was worried he'd be a little too OFC, but at the same time, I did want to show a different side of Draco, one that we all know is hiding inside somewhere. *Randomness* the sequel to Prince of Purebloods is actually called. "A Different Side of Me"
~Nicolle~



LOL, Don't worry about being obsessive! It's all good, as long as you don't stalk him! I adore JMac, he's gorgeous and I love his music! I totally know where you're coming from there. As for Natalee, this may make me sound stuck up, and if it does, I am sorry, that was not my intention, but, I tried to model Natalee's character after me, the way I would act if Draco Malfoy was my best friend and future husband. Also, in a few chapters, you will find that Natalee is terrified of thunder storms, that is 100% me, terrified of thunder storms.
~Nicolle~



Thanks! I've had a lot of fun writing this fic and coming up with cute things for them to say to each other, just tryingto make it an enjoyable experience for all who read it, and I'm glad that it shows!
~Nicolle~



I know! I can totally see all of this happening in my mind. Sometimes I am just sitting there writing and I start laughing for no apparent reason, because I've thought of something funny to write, my sister is always like "What is so funny?" and I'm like "Oh nothing."
~Nicolle~

Hi Nicolle,

This is a great story so far. It's nice to read something different, and using different characters. I really think Draco's protectiveness over Natalee is a great quality to show in him, and the fact that he twists it to his friends is very "Draco-ish"...nice.

One little comment to maybe help your story is to watch your tenses...I noticed that you switch back and forth a little. It's definitely not a big deal, but it's something to watch for.

Keep up the great writing! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Abs

lol yeah I noticed that, I started writing it in one tense and then I changed to another, but these chapters have gone through my beta, so maybe he missed that, Thanks for pointing it out to me, other than that I'm glad you like the story!
~Nicolle~

Hello again!
Just read this fic of yours too. I really do like the concepts for stories you bring in with Malfoy...very creative. You incorporate new characters very well. Also, the diversity between this story and your "Dare Me" one is really awesome. They're both very different (especially as far as Malfoy's character is concerned) and yet, both are written wonderfully. Definitely keep up the amazing work. Cant wait to see if Malfoy is really serious about her or not.

~Cheers!~

omg, brilliant chapter...oh my, why did draco have to break little natalee's heart by saying that...hopefully he didn't mean it...omg, pleaaaaaaassssssssse update soon. its' great!

Hey! I just read the rest of your fic that ou posted and can I just say that you a brilliant?! I absolutely love it! I like the fact that Nat is flirting with Goyle, and Draco pretends to be the man and "protect her". I think that it is sad that they used to be such great friends and then when they found out that they were betrothed....they freaked out! I also liked the line:
"After my pep talk with Carley, I was totally ready to kick some Pureblood butt."
That totally sounded like a girl on a mission! Anyhow, keep writing!

Thank you so much! I couldn't stop smiling the entire time I read that! I love feedback! *squeals* okay, down to business, Draco's character is definatly more OFC in POP, so I wanted to come back to Draco's cannon and incorporate that into my story.
~Nicolle~



Thanks doll! Draco was just being the jerk that he is with his friends, I think the only person Draco feels comfortable with is Natalee, when he is with her, he can show his true colors and not be constrained by what people think you know, that is the main reason I added that part, I wanted to show some insecurity, plus he is falling in love with her, and that scares him a bit.
~Nicolle~




lol I like that part too! Draco and Natalee are both a little screwed up at the moment, but don't worry, it'll work out good in the end!
~Nicolle~

Wow! I can't believe I haven't seen this one before!

I love the way you portray Draco! Natalee is a great character, and the two together remind me of a couple of friends I have... Sorry, went a little off topic... Anyways, can't wait for more.

Darkwort

AH!

Need...more...

I really do love this story...oohhh...they are wicked...

I cant wait to see what happens!

Post more soon!!!!..........pwease?

~Cheers!~

woah...haha...lol, great chap, I like how natalee's trying to make draco feel bad, but at the same time trying to get him jealous...oooooh...so Narcissa finally blew her cool...sheesh, I wonder why? and awww....they're falling in love...how sweet lol, I hope you post real soon, i'd luv to read more!

Draco is really annoyed that Natalee flirts with Goyle ... I think he likes her !! And it seams a little Ron-Hermione-ish to argue like that , it's good . Natalee is very good at kicking pure-blood but ! YEAH ! (It sounded sooo good!) Please post again soon !

lol that is cool that my characters remind you of your friends! sweet! I'm so glad you like my ortrayl of Draco, its a little ooc but i really like it that way.
~Nicolle~




I'm so glad you like it, I think you are addicted, that would be pretty cool for me, but not so cool for you. =0]
~Nicolle~




Narcissa is fed up with Natalee and Draco's continual fighting, and she lost it, she knows they are perfect together, as do we! Basically, Draco and Natalee are already in love, they just havent realized it yet and that kind of scares them.
~Nicolle~



I love the fighting, cause it is something I would want to do, but would never do and sometimes it's fun to live through your characters! I especiaaly love a scene coming up at Draco's party, it is awesome if i do say so myself!
~Nicolle~

Sorry I havn't done feedback in a while but I found your fic posted on another site and read wayyyyy ahead, so I havn't bothered to give you feedback cause I've already read most of it. I love all of your fic. please keep writing.

Becca

lol really? that is cool, which site was it?

Wonderful installment!

Oh, this should make for some interesting competition between the two of them...And we all know how competative Malfoy can be. I wonder who will come out on top...

You know, this situation (the refusal of Malfoy to admit how he feels about Nat) is highly reminicent of Ron's refusal to tell Hermione how he feels about her. hehe...I bet he ends up yelling at Natalee over something and just blurts out that he loves her or something.

Anyway...do update soon, will you? Addicted...hmmm ... maybe... hehe. But it really is good!

~Cheers!~

Hahaha! I love it! This chapter was so fun and let us glimpse a little bit of who Narcissa is in your story! She was making me laugh! I love the line you dropped about Lucius....
" Lucius said, giving me and Draco an evil "do as I say or something unspeakable will befall you" look. "We are." Draco said, giving me the same look."
That sounds so much like a Malfoy thing! I can't wait for your next chapter....I hate Pansy ! Keep writing!

omg, that ending really nailed it...I luved it, so Draco has his own plans, eh?...haha, should be interesting to read what comes on next. post soon, i'd luv to read more.

wow! i never imagined goyle with an actual personality! (well, a semi-personality at least) nice going, this fic is so entertaining! that was so funny when narcissa came in to talk to nat and told her to make draco jealous... post again soon!

This was a great chapter.In fact this chapter is 1 of my faves. Remember when u asked which site I read ur fic on? I googled " Prince of Purebloods by Slytherinsweetheart" and found that ur fic is posted on quite a few sites. I read it on darkmark. Please post more in both, your writing is really fantastic.

See ya,
Becca

Another great chapter I really liked the Natalee trying to make Goyle jealous, but when he kissed her it was just too disgusting. Just imagine... EWW ! but I really liked the ending, and the whole chapter for the matter of fact. Keep posting

Hey! I really liked this chapter! I loved how she was muttering to herself about the strike one, strike two, and strike three! Very impressive writing! I loved the beginning paragraphs and especially the line.... "Every once in a while, I would sneak a glance at him and step up my flirt o meter when necessary.".......Hahaha! I thought that it was funny that they finally came around in the end! I wonder how the story is going to progress from here?! The story is flowing really well, keep up the great work!

HAHAHAHAHA!!!!

That was awesome! It seemed extremely accurate and probably is how it would really happen. LOVED the whole bit with Malfoy and Natalee yelling at each other. So romantic ...hehe.

Hmmm...Now I'm curious to see what happens between the two of them. I'm sure they will end up fighting over something again. Or, Natalee still hasn't confronted Malfoy about what she heard him say, so maybe that will come up somehow and it'll cause problems...

I don't know...So many possibilities...the only way we'll find out is if you post soon!

~Cheers!~

haha...major LOL! I can't believe I would actucally say this, but I feel sorry for goyle...o well...awww...Draco & Natalee fighting was sweet....and I luved the ending...very good...post soon. PLEASE!

Hi - lovely chapter! I really enjoyed the running commentary by Natalee...to bad Goyle wasn't bright enough to pick up on it. I must admit I kind of felt bad for the fellow, being so obviously used...but at least there was no permanent damage. Great heated argument between Natalee and Draco, especially considering it was in front of everyone! Nice ending to the argument, too!!

Nice job, keep it up!
Abs

haha, you were right, kind of, they both end up yelling at eachother. I never really thought about R/Hr it is kinda like Nat and Draco huh?
~Nicolle



I have to credit my beta wiht the Narcissa scene, he really helped me with it, but as for Lucius's line there, I stole it from Gilmore Girls, I thought it fit perfectly!
~Nicolle~



Well, I hope you enjoyed the nest chapter!
~Nicolle~



lol, me either, that is why I wanted to give him one, to show that he isn't just a mindless drone. I loved writing the part about Narcissa and Natalee, especially that Narcissa told her point blank "Make him jealous." and it worked!
~Nicolle~



huh, I never even thought of doing that, well, now you know what happens, dont tell anyone okay!
~Nicolle~



Thank you, this chapter was the most fun to write.
~Nicolle~



You'll never know until you read it! But I' glad you like!
~Nicolle~



lol. like I just said, you wont know until you find out. You have many guesses, young padawan, haha
~Nicolle~



Thank you very much, I will post again tomorrow!
~Nicolle~



Thanks Dear!I know I felt so bad for him as well, as I was writing it I was like *sobs* "Poor Goyle! I feel so baaaaad!" but I'm better now. lol
~Nicolle~

Nice chapter. It seamed so cosy with the movie and everything. And I just want to say again that I love this ide of drace that we don't see in the books. I'd love to be Natalee in this story keep posting, it's a good story.

Hey! I love this fan fic!!!! I think that you portray Draco Malfoy so well and I really like Natalie too. I thought that it was funny that when she asked him if he wanted to go up into her room and .......watch a movie....Very Funny! I thought that this was a great protrayal of him and I loved how she is holding him in check.....I aslo really liked the part where they talk about him becoming a Death Eater...it is nice that they can talk about serious things too! I loved your line ........."He just looked at me for what seemed like an eternity. Then finally, he sighed and moved his arm from my shoulders, "We're missing the movie." '...
Poor Draco! I feel like he is being forced into being a Death Eater because of his dad and all the pure bloods are. Anyhow, keep up the amazing work!

great chap nicolle. It was very sweet & cosy...oh...so Natalee's trying to prevent Draco from becoming a death eater, because she's scared for him...interesting. I wonder if he will listen to her...

haha, typical....lol. I hope you post soon

i absolutely LOVE it!!!!!!
its just so...BRILLIANT!!!
im lost for words!!
you HAVE to update really soon!!!
lol x <3

oh my gosh i think you are a genius!!! I love this story so much. I couldn't even think of draco as that sweet until you wrote it and now i want to be natalie (Really really bad)!!!! well anyways what she did to goyle not nice funny but not nice. but they really seem to have an extreme relationship, Hate/mad then Love/Affectionate. I think it is very realistic
erin

haha! me too! thats the best part about writing this story, i can pretend i am her, and actually, as ive said before, i modeled Natalee after me.
~Nicolle~



Thank you! I've always felt bad for Draco, he seems to have it so hard. and no one really cares.
~Nicolle~



haha, that was a late addition, when i was typing my story to send it to my beta. I'm glad you liked it!
~Nicolle~




Thank you so much! I'm so glad POP is such a hit! I had no idea it would be.
~Nicolle~




I really wanted to show that side of Draco, because that is the side i always saw, and i wanted to share it, i think jkr didnt tell us enough about Draco, she just left it up to the imagination and i wanted to fill it in, not that my work is anything like hers.
~Nicolle~

Argh! Who's the new guy?! They were completely happy and now this new dude is in her life! Uh oh! Draco's gonna have some competition for the lady! I love where this is going! Who is this Tristan guy anyhow? I loved both of the shower scenes...but I can't beleive that Natalee would kiss that guy back when she has Draco! Oh well, her loss. I really liked the line....."And pigs can fly. Just a friendly piece of advice; Malfoys aren't capable of love.".........That her friend Carley says about the Malfoys....that in a way is soooo true! Anywho, keep up the amazing work and post soon!

Ahhrg! Tristan is such a jerk! And Draco is so sweet! I bet he knew that Tristan would try something like that. I’m just sad that Natalee was so mush ‘in love’ with him that she didn’t see he was this jerk and didn’t trust what Drace said. But I’m glad he came to pick up Natalee. (-But I’m pretty sure Drace’s eyes are grey, not iceblue? )Poast again soon

OMGsh! Natalee is so dumb! How could she leave a guy that is completely hot and was just there for her and run off with this creep! I can't believe that she would leave Draco right when they were starting to get along and show that they like eachother . But I'm feel really bad that she had these disillusions about this dude that she thought she liked and he totally tried to pull something on her. Good thing that Draco was there and Nats found him . You are an amazing writer and I'm completely hooked on your story! Keep it up!

yay! update. why would anyone want to run away from draco?...beats me...god, tristen is such a bloody jerk...natalee deserves so much better...and oh my, that last paragraph was so sweet. I bet the guy was draco, right? brilliant chap & I reeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaalllly hope you post soon

I like that line too!
~Nicolle



I know, Tristan was a jerk I hate him. I dunno I thougt I read somewhere that Draco's eyes are blue oh well.
~Nicolle




YAY draco! I dunno, she was mad at him because he told her not to go, and she didnt want to listen, I guess she learned her lesson!
~Nicolle



YA it was Draco! He was out looking for her, seeing as he didnt know where she went!
~Nicolle

wow...haha, brilliant post! made me laugh hehe, I can just imagine Draco looking all embarressed at being caught making out...mmm...I wonder how dinner will go...haha, great post Nicolle & I hope you post real soon!

Hey! Sorry that is has been a while since I last read...I sorta got grounded for a few days..but I'm back and I love where you went with this chapter. There was no yelling and a big fight about what she did...Draco just accepted what she was doing and then let her learn her lesson without making a huge fuss. He is cool like that in this fic. Love it..that was funny when Ossie came in on them...how embarrasing! Anyhow, can't wait for the next chap!

Haha. Funny chapters. hadnt seen your last chapter, but it was really good and I really laughed when I red this.

Haha. It was so funny the latest chapter was really good to and I like they can talk together like that. It's really a different side of Draco we see keep up .