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nevfx
You can read this FanFic HERE

Here is the Feedback thread for my FanFic. Please be honest and even if its just to say what you voted for on the poll connected to the FanFic Thread itself, then just say it, but please remeber the one line rule.
eagleanimagous
Great start. How long is it after the battle? I wasn't exactly sure. I like how you have Harry feeling some kind of remorse for killing someone. I always thought that he would feel that way, he isn't heartless. I wonder what happened to Mr. Weasley that made him late. I hope Harry and Ginny get together soon.
nevfx
I'm glad someone noticed I hadn't put how long it was after they had won the "Final Battle". You'll find out how long later, its not of great importance.

Thanks for the feedback!
arryha
That was pretty good! Keep up the good work. :)
nevfx
Thank you for your comments, please keep reading my FanFic.

On a different note, I might like to add that not all the chapters will have the same lenght, I mean at the moment, Chapter 3 isn't very long, but Chapter 2 is just a little but less then Chapter 1.
Shadowfox99
ph34r.gif i just have one question are you going to bet harry and ginny back together. if not that would be cruel to those of us who are fans of their ship. your story is good so post again. ph34r.gif






-mike
destroying the world one child at a time
zonkos_employee
That was pretty good, I've never read a fic before starting right after the final battle. It says that you will update in the week so I can't wait to see what happens. I hope Harry and Ginny get together too.
danluver501
Hmm so almost everyone of Vold'y supporters are dead. Thats interesting. And Im sooo happy that voldy is dead. Its a no wonder why harry keeps having nighmares about it. Personally I don't think taht I would have the guts to kill some one... Even if they did kill my parents. So Draco's turned from Voldy has he? I wonder if he will stay on the good side un like Snape.... And what exactly does Hogwarts want with Hermione, Ron, and Harry?

~danluver501~
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