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Potter_Freak
this is my feadback fourm
Ginny<33
Hey!
smile.gif First reply! Well first off I want to say I love your story! I've already said that in my PM to you though tongue.gif . Oh yes and thanks so much for the PM telling me you added another post! I was completely ecstatic! Your new post was so sweet! I must say you glided over the months at the Potter residance fast but it was in a way nice not having to read hours of fill in. And now what we all have been waiting for.. the KISS! Ohmygosh that was too sweet heart.gif happy.gif . I'm glad you made James quiditch (sp?) captain too. And that scene where Sirius and James were flying was so much funn to read! Anyways, you've probably read enough of my blabbering (lol) so please post again soon!
XoX,
Ginny<33
Ginny<33
Hey again!
That chapter was simply fabulous happy.gif . Those gift ideas were really unique! lol I'd love for a bracelet like that tongue.gif . I just have two minor suggestions: Try to use the full word like birthday when you are explaining (you can use it in dialoge as long as the person is litterally saying ' B Day ') just so it'f more formal, and that you add the link to your fanfiction in your signature so more people will see and read it. (Not to mention it will be easier for me to find everytime you update) Which I can't wait till you add more biggrin.gif ! So James is thinking of revenge.. wink.gif and Lily is predicting something bad will happen. lol, lets all hope its something bad to Snape not James or Lily laugh.gif . Or any of their friends for that matter tongue.gif . I can't believe how pitiful the Slytherins are. Hahaha they have to gang up on 2nd years.
Thanks again for the PM!
XoX,
Ginny<33
P.S. lol I just remembered, but the Head dorm seems really sweet! I'd die for a bathroom that big laugh.gif
Lily+James=Forever
wow that was really good cant wait till the next chapters
GryffindorBabexhott
Ok. im sorry i didn't see this befoe. But its really good. I like how James and Lilyare together. Oh. Ba snape. The bracelt sounded beautiful.
Post soon!
<33
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