Okay so I don't care what you guys say, as long as it's concerning my fanfic, and if you absolutely hate it, then you don't have to post. Because that might bring down my thoughts about it. But I don't mind comments to make it better. So... that's pretty much it. I hope you are liking it though.

wow, thats really good!

i was a bit suprised at the end, i wasnt expecting that lol!

anyway please post again soon i really want to know what happens next!

Hey!
Loving the chapter . I was just browsing and I saw you had posted your story on VT already. It sounds like its going to be really cool, I haven't read any other Tom Riddle fanfictions. Well thats about all I have to say . That meeting between Tom and his dad was so brief lol. I don't think that will fall under 'accidental magic' but you never know .
Post Soon!
XoX, Ginny<33

Ginny<33- Yep, it was breif, and you told me that I had to end it with Tom killing his dad so that was it. And oh my gosh you're right, one whole page on lined paper is actually really short! I was expecting it to be longer. Anyway, yay, I got two readers already!

potterprincess-Thanks for the feedback. Why was it so surprising though? Was it too sudden. Oh well, maybe I should've described it a bit more, but it's already written so heck with it.

Thanks again for my two readers I'll post the next chapter within the next few days so don't think I'm posting like a million chapters a day, because I'm not.

Hey, Three!!!!

Nice story can't wait for it to get exciting. Don't worry, if I wrote on a piece of paper it would be much shorter my writing is brutal and huge. Anyway, I did expect for Riddle Sr. to die. Tom always made me wonder and now I will get to know the true (at least good enough to be real) story.

THREE?!? There's four readers

Awesome first father-son meeting. "I've been waiting to meet you, father." "Fath-" "Avada Kedavra!" Can't you feel the love?

Hey, YAY! two more readers! That makes a total of four. Thanks guys.

alexander-Yeah, it was a good first meeting, although, his dad sent him to the orphanage right? Oh wait, nvm his mom did.. so yeah you're right.. it wwas their first meeting. Okay now I"m not making sense but thanks for reading my fic,"alexander"

Cobra-Yeah, thanks.. so you were expecting him to die? And that's a good thing that I don't have the same writing as you because then I bet my chapters would be like one paragraph long.

Okay so the next chapter will be up probably on the weekend sometime. I have to finish writing chapter three to post chapter two, it's just how I roll.

You? roll? as "Cobra" would say, Oh god! Please update friday, tose gummies were supposed to inspire you to write!

Haha, yeah I'm gonna write up the next chapter right now so hold your horses. Yeah so they'lll be up in the next half an hour. Not to worry. As much as my story is good, don't get over excited

You better, those wine gums have to give you inspiration, or no more food!!!!!!!!

Haha fine, because of that, I'll type it up right now! Youjust wait, it will be the most fantastic fanfic you have ever read in your whole life!!! Joke there, I am not a writer at all.

yay!! nice half chapter lol. Can't wait for you to FINISH TYPING. so far this chapter is intriguing. can't wait for the end.

Haha thanks Kowba, but I just put the rest of the chapter up so now you can read the WHOLE thing. Sorry for the inconvienence. Enjoy!

Yeah, good chap, that's right, i deserve to be cough-mentoined! Hurry up, thosew wine gums have been given to hurry you up, if they don't you wont get any more. And you lied!! you said you were'nt gonna take off your shoes in assembly again, you did it today!!! GRRRRRR!!!! MURGH!!!!

Great chapter, Harold is gonna g like Murgh and die right? So you do know what a smik is huh? THEN STOP SAYING IT"S A SMIRK WHEN YOU"RE SMILING!!!!

Haha, I can say whatever I want to about my smile. Whether it's a smirk or not1 And I"m pretty sure we're very offtopic right now. And 'alexander' you'll just have to wait to see what happens to harold when I write the next chapter. (I bended the rules a bit just to make you guys(my like only readers happy) I ahven't finished writng chapter 3!!!!

Awesome chapter. Tom is already up to his sneaky stuff. Sneaking people into the school. Smart though the little things aren't guarded, that is always so true. Yep the smirk plus the don't worry you won't line=death. Anyway, treye a smirk is different than a smile, Snape smirks Harry sometimes smiles. shoes assembly=good rapper.

Okay, I have just red your two first chapters, and I really liked them it’s not something very common like every other fic and I really enjoyed reading them despise they were a bit short. Keep up the good work

happy-potter -thanks for the feedback, because I'm not really a writer... I'm actually not into my story at all. (snooze) But I'll finish it though, it's not gonna be long, and all my posts are gonna be that length so sorry they're so short but it's all i have time for every couple of days.

Cobra- shoes assembly=good wrapper? I do not understand that one bit. Please explain Yes, I think you have it figured out... Whoops, kinda let that slip. I'm not good at writing cliffys like Treye

Okay next chapter will be up like monday or tuesday, I gotta think of what will happen while at school.

WOw i guess i guess I was really lazy I meant the assembly where you took your shoes off had a good rapper even though I spelled it wrong. No I didn't you did. Anyway, school is deffinetly a good place to think. Tune out things that don't matter (math, school) and think about things that do (HP and Cedric).

Yes Kat, focus on your love on Cedric. I mean... oh thanks, a cliffie compliment If only I had emotions

Haha okay Treye, yes I think Cedric is very goodlooking. So what? So I'm just posting here to tell everyone that chapter three is up although I bet it is no use. Anyway, you can read it if you want.

Thanks.

Wow, the little silver snake... and he is like a genius. IUs he opening the chamber? They said somethign about a girl's bathroom.. I think

Hmmmmm,,,, *surprised face* +ninja =me anyway. WEll chamber of secrets opening never thought of that. Tom is a genius (sp?) Snake i predicted that, everyone should I think. good job. Can't wait for next.

P.S. Don't worry Kat this is a ninja