This is my first fanfic so any and all critism is welcome. Compliments are good to. But I would rather honesty than compliments. This weekend I won't be able to post I am too busy I will try to get another one up by Wednesday.

I love Neville...hence the username. I was just saying that there weren't too many fanfics about Neville and within a week two pop up-fantastic!

I hope that as the story progresses that you make Neville more confident. He seems to be developing that way from year five and six, so it seems to be a step back for him to be so timid come year seven.

I like that you had the trio and Luna present when Neville learns about the Horcruxes. To me this shows that these will be the major players in your story and that they all trust one another. Cool.

Looking forward to your next post on Wednesday. I'd like to see where this story is going.
~nevillesgirl

Yeah it would be a step backwards.This fanfic sucks. no Kowba i'm just kidding it's pretty good, Neville should have more confidence and I have'nt seena battle yet

Nevillesgirl- I agree he should be more brave and confident because as you said he has been gettingmore and more as we went along.

Alexander-Treye you do realise I was joking about the battle in every scene right? and well, you need an introduction didn't you see the story/plot line things we did in class?

Hey!
Lol, well first off nice comment Treye . But I can't agree with you - I think the intro was totally kickin. So Dumbledore left the task for the 5 of them? Can't wait to see where you make this fanfiction go. Nice idea to make it in Nevilles point of view. Hes not a very popular character.
Sorry, but I have to ask what happened to Ginny , are you going to make it so that Harry and her don't hang out anymore?
Post soon I can't wait!
XoX,
Ginny<33

Well you will have to wait and see what I do with her. Some people may already know. Anyway, I think my estimate was delayed, I may have another one up by monday.

OOooo Oooo pick me, I know. Well, if I remember correctly from today,you said that you don't like Ginny right? I"m sorry nat, but that's Kowba's hidden identity. Haha that was great but you didn't tell me you started a fic! Oh wel, and kowba, nice avatar... NOT. Boo to the senaters. That's right.. I just said that. Anyway, that was good so far, and whoa, Harry told everyone about the horcruxes? Right out of the blue? interesting...

Hey!
Nice chapter! lol sorry I didn't review earlier. So Harry's Quidditch Captain? And what about Head Boy & Head Girl? ..or did I miss that part . Anyways whats this about Ginny not being part of your story?! !! Hahha just joking with you. You don't have to have her in if you dont want too.
?And lol hidden identity?
Post soon!
XoX,Ginny<33

The head boy head girl thing I didn't really feel like putting in. Stupid laziness!!! I also have an excuse though. McGonagall thought it would be too much for them since she knew they would have to do a lot, not exactly what but a lot.

well, Neville is cool... but i have a question for you cobra.... do you like that they fixed the whole Bella-Barty thing or no..... i didnt really like how they cleared it up because it was kind of confusing....
Neville i think is awesome and he is cooler than harry potter...i loved in movie 5 how when he got the spell right a load of girls walked over to him! yay neville!