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Knowitall88
Well heres a brand new shiny thread for those of you who would like to comment on my fic I really hope you enjoyed it! PLEEEEEEZ Comment!
GryffindorBabexhott
Heyy!
This looks good. I like that Ron and Hermione are marriend and had kids.
Yeah! Harry and Ginny together forever.
Post sooN!
This looks like the beginning of a good fic..
<33333
time turner
I agree with everything said by Gryffindorbabexhott. I hope that this fic turns out as good as it has started. Post soon.
Knowitall88
Thanks everyone its great to have such positive feedback right off the bat! HAPPY READING!
luna_quibbler
[font=Comic Sans Ms]really good pls. continue biggrin.gif
Potter_Addict_713
Really good so far. But all these cousins and names... woah! So confuzzling!!! Especially with Charlie, and James, and Sirius, and Lily. Im so used to the other characters not these new ones, its making me dizzy.

Plus I found it funny trying to picture Sirius Black with red hair. haha, now that is funny!!!

Post again soon!



~Kristina

Knowitall88
your right it can be confuzzleing sorry bout that i'll try to make it less confusifying! sorrry i wont be ablt to post unitl after the 25th but please come back after that and check it out thanks! oonce again thanx for the feed back everything helps tell all of your friends
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