It's my first posted fanfic. Hopefully it's good, because there are many dodgy and scribbled drafts with different starts, endings and characters in varying levels of disintegration somewhere in my bedroom...

Yeah, first to respond! First, consider linking your fic to the feed back thread, it makes it easier to find and post responsed.

Okay, I am not really a huge fan of Lupin although I do enjoy his character, I wouldn't say Im obssess or anything...Im not even in SPELL *hangs head in shame* But, I do love Severus and this is what had me reading because he is not linked in cliche with Lily, James, Voldemort or Hermione...this is truly a creative fic!

I love your attention to detail and description. Your first chaper is totally engaging and makes the reader want to continue into your story. Please PM me when you have posted chapter 2.

Your beta rocks by the way.
~nevillesgirl

Hey Your fic is amazing... I love your attention to detail and your version of Snape because I think he's good too! I can't waite to read more.

~ginnypotter

Thank you thank you thank you for posting chapter 2. I loved it. First, consider posting a feedback link at the end of every new chap. It makes it easier to respond if we don't have to scroll to the top of the page.

I love the tension you have built between Remus and Severus. I think it is wonderful that Remus has taken on the protector role and Snape has begrudgingly consented to "follow" Lupin's lead. You capture Lupin's loathing for the situation he is in perfectly, with just the right amount of confidence and fear meshed within the character--excellent!

One small detail. When a charcter is speaking, I do believe the appropriate key is the "quotation mark" key. The 'single' quote key is used for something different.

Anyways, good fic, I wonder what is going to happen once Severus actually encounters a group of tired, hungery, outcasted wererwolves. And who is this mysterious Juan and why is he hating on Remus?

Post again soon...
~nevillesgirl

No no, you can use single and double, it doesn't matter which you use. The only thing to watch out for is that you use your choice consistently.

I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO glad people like this story! THANK YOU ALL!

EDIT: a week later...

The fourth part is up. And some were wondering about Juan...he is just a random. Y'know those people who seem to take an instant dislike to you? he's one of them. (I have experienced this before...it is both confusing and annoying!)

~Baz