I would love to see what you have to say about my fan fic.
I am going slow,butr it is coming along.
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Good very good, just make it longer, and add more characters as I am sure you are planning to do. And you might want to add more detail. It makes it very intriguing. But a super start. Keep Up the good work. I believe in you! 
Kaili
Kaili
Kaili I am going to add more and thank you very much!I want to say that I have a beta and she is sadly not here right now,but even so I need to post soon so I hope she comes!
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