The story is about James and the Marauders at Hogwarts and some dark things are happening. Please comment here... good or bad I don't really care but I hope that it is good.

I'll leave a good comment! This is a good start. Im proud of James for becoming Head Boy - and Lily of course. Ah. Lily hates James - what else is new? Hopefully James will takes Remus' advice and change. I wonder whats happenig in the Dungeons?!?! Post soon..This is very good!
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your story is pretty good.
and for the first time, somene actually talked of the WHOLE night of full moon.

I had to put the whole night in because I love thoughs parts, not the part about Remus and all but the rest of it is pretty interesting.... I'll post the next chapter sometime... but I have finals so I'm not sure how much time I'll have. THANKS soooo much for the feedback!!!!!

whoa. that thing with lily is weird. like when she yelled potter and he wasn't in sight. i think she had a dream of the night he and she get killed with voldemort. that's really scary.
and now remus, james, and sirius have gotten to the slytherin common room. this isn't going to be very pretty....

Just want to say thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it!! every comment that you leave changes some parts in the story..... I will put the next chapter up soon, as soon as I get it. So thanks for your comments!! leave more, please.

Stupid Snape and Bella. They must be behind what has gone up with Lily. But what more I'm afraid of now is, why was Lily crying? James brought it up, but then he had to leave, I knew he would've tried to get her to tell him.
hm..

I like it...
except if remus had actually bitten james during the full moon, that would make james a werewolf too... cuts and scratches and attempts to bite are okay...but an actual bite?
Unless you are going to work this into your story.
Looking forward to reading more

I dunno... I never thought of that.... I thought that if your an animal a werewolf can bite you but not turn you into a werewolf. But I could have bad sources... Thanks for the feedback I'll try and get the next chapter up soon!!

Nice one! Im glad Remus, Peter, James and Sirius got their revenge! Bad thing to show Lily beiing evil..bad Dark lord. Post soon! I really like this so far!
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I just read your whole story and I really like it!! It's really good and your a good writer! I really liked reading about their adventures during the full moon and their revenge on the Slytherins. I hope you post again soon!

-Kelsea

That was great! It was probaly my favorite chapter! I like how you had Lily ask James to take a walk with her instead of the other way around. I want to know what happens next, soooooo badly! I want to know why Lily was being so nice, does she like him now? Well, it sure seems like she does. I have been following this fic but kept on forgetting to leave feedback so sorry. I wont forget anymore! But this is really good, your an awesome writer!
Post really really really soon!
DD's-man-through-and-through

Good story.It needs fine tuning.Ever thought of getting a beta?If you want one,I'm avaliable.What was all Lily's sweet talk about?:raisedeyebrow:

It's a great story! What's with James that he is having dreams about things that are going to happen to his son, Harry! Also I think it's cute that Lily now likes James, and is blushing when she sees him!:wub: Also, what's with Moony, he was acting like he was very depressed! Please post soon, I love how the story is going so far.
*Breanna*

Yah! Lily likes James! Lily likes James!*dances around* So, I wonder whats up with James and his nightmares about Harry? Also, Lupin being depressed. But that was another great chapter!
DD's-man-through-and-through

Thanks SO much for the awsome feedback!! I took your advise hedwig_321 and I asked my friend to be my beta. I had to reread my own work because I forgot what I put... owell. Thanks everyone who read my story and liked it, I'll have the next chapter up tomorrow, I hope. Thanks!!


-Sophia

That was a really good chapter!! I wonder what happend to Sarah?? And why is Lily acting so strange?? I loved the snowball fight!! It's always good to see the boys doing something fun! I hope you post again soon!! I love your story!!

-Kelsea

What happened? I was gone for two days and then there were just a million chapters… Okay, exaggerating. But it was really some good chapters. Lily is acting strange and James’s dreaming about Harry’s second year. That’s seriously weird. Please tell me what’s going on? Liked the snowball fight. Couldn’t understand what they said either. And I understand why Lupin is so sad. Please post soon

That was a really good chapter!!! I really liked the snowball fight and the Quidditch match!! I also liked the dream...Poor James, Remus woke him up just before he got to kiss her!! I'm really liking your story and I hope you post again soon!!!

-Kelsea

Yeah! Go Gryffindor! They won - don't they always? Niced dream about himn seeing his wedding day. He was sooo close to ssing himself kiss Lily - so close and then Sirius woke him up! post soon!
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WOW! I really like this fic, loved the snowball fight - I understood qhat they said (woop woop!) James' dreams are really weird! What's going on??

im-loveli-rli

I put in randm dreams of what is to come so that James would be like what the... and that someone is puting dreams there.... not Voldemort since he isn't super powerful yet.... someone else.... I might mention it later on... well... yeah thanks everyone for the awesome comments!!!! I really appreciate them!! And thanks for reading my story! I'll have the next chapter up soon, since I just posted one today...

what does the letter say? who's it from? please don't take too long posting the next chapter - i'm not very patient

im-loveli-rli

Who wrote that letter? Maybe Lily or someone else!?!?!!? Interesting..very interesting..I want to know who it was! Oh. And Lily knows about Remus..cooL! Hurry back!
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That was good!! I really wanna know who the letter is from!! I hope it's not anything bad! I really liked the full moon adventure and It's cool that Lily knows about Remus!! I'm really liking your story so I hope you post again soon!!!

-Kelsea

I want to know who it is!!!Is it Lily??? I like how you have Lily know about Remus. Good idea! Okay, now that you left a cliffy you HAVE to post in 24 hrs. Haha I'm just kidding!
But post really soon!
DD's-man-through-and-through

Another cliffy?! I'm addicted to this fic!! PLease post soooooooon!!!!

im-loveli-rli

Just wanted to say a BIG thanks to everyone that read my fic and left feedback!! Thanks sssooo much!! I'll have the next chapter up soon.... I'm at a little snag right now, but I'll try and get it up soon. Thanks again!!

I wonder what she needs help with?!? That was a really great chapter your story is getting very interesting!!! I can't beleive that Bella wants James to go out with her that's just nasty!!! I really like you're story and I hope you post again soon!!

-Kelsea

Phew, I finally finished the story. I really like how this is mainly from James' point of view. It shows that there is more to him than meets the eye.



yeah, this quote is from the beginning...but I really liked it.

Wow, a lot of people are getting attacked at Hogwarts. It definetely makes things more interesting. What could Bellatrix Black want with James and Sirius??

Anyways, great story. Keep going!

-Layla-

P.S. I heart the avatars in your signature..

Thanks again for the great feedback!!

Kelso2010 Yeah I know that is gross, I was getting sick just writing it, but it is important, but that's all I'm saying

Layla I really liked that line too. I thought it was funny.

Thanks for reading and leaving feedback!!!!

Loved the last few chapters. Bellatrix have some weird reason to want to date James (EWW). And what does she know about them? Tell me now! And why does Malfoy want to meet them now? How could he know that they had meet with Bellatrix the other night since he wrote again? It’s really good. Please post soon.

WOW! Great Chapter! But, I'm confused why Bella would tell James she wanted to pretend to date him because this obviously has something to do with LV (well not obviously but, I've presumed so) I can't wait to see what Lucius says to them (if they don't hide from them). Maybe he wants to date them too!! - No only joking but, would be funny.
Keep posting

im-loveli-rli

OMG! Ew.. Bella wants to go out with James to hurt him so Lord Voldemort accepts her into the Death Eaters??? ANd I still don't know why Sirius is going to be so much help. And. Lily accepted James to go out with him! post soon!
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That was a really good chapter!!! Lily and James are finally together!!! I really wanna know why they need them still?!? But anyway....I really really like your story and I hope you post again soon!!!

-Kelsea

Well now I’m confused. Shy does Voldy want Bellatrix to go out with James? And what has this whole thing to do with Sirius? I seriously want some answers! And James fought the imperius curse because he thought of Lily. Sweet post soon.

oh no!!! oh no!!!! i can't believe that bellatrix has to go out with james!!! well, post soon!!

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timeturner

Yeah, I know the last few chapters were a little confusing... maybe a lot confusing, let me just say this, and it is probably obvious, Bellatrix doesn't want to go out with James... Sirius is Bella's cousin so she knows all about him.... okay, I'll post soon. Thanks for awesome feedback!!!

That was a really good chapter!!! I really wanna know why the Slytherins were talking about Sirius though..... James and Lily are cute together and Remus asked Sarah out!! This is getting really good!! I hope you post again soon!!!

-Kelsea

Interesting... They're all talking about Sirius, but why??? And trying to get James in detention. I really liked that part. HA! Snape couldn't do anything... great! post soon. I want to know what they have on Sirius.

oOo. James and Lily are together. Sweet. Ok. Sirius is freaking out on Wormtail. So many questions are waiting t be answered...post soon!
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Get James' self control!!! I don't think I could have handled that!!! Great chapter

im-loveli-rli

That chapter was so sweet!!! All the boys went off and did something special with their girls!!! Sirius finally asked her out!!! How cute!!! I'm really lovin your story so I hope you post again soon!!!!!

-Kelsea

And 2 points goes to siius for asking his girl out!!! It really is cute on how the boys are trying to keep their ladies happyt. And. What James did for Lily.an 'aw' moment right there! Im glad Remus told his gal..Sarah I think...Post soon!
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Hey everyone!! Thanks for the nice feedback, I should have the next chapter up tomorrow, it gets interesting... Thanks for reading and leaving feedback!!

Haha I love truth or dare!!! James and Lily both love eachother and had a moment under the tree... how cute!!! Wow Sarah knows everything!! That was a good chapter and I hope you post again soon!!!

-Kelsea

Ha I love that game and they had a special moment!!!
Im really loving this fic.
Post sioon!
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Awww, that was so cute! Now, if something bad happens like Bella puts James under some spell, I will be very very very angry with you. Okay? So do not. Anyways I thought the truth and dare was very sweet. Sirius and Briana, James and Lily, Remus and Sarah it was all cute! Post soon!
DD's-man-through-and-through

Great new chapter!!! The James and Lily moment was cute and that new move of Sirius' was really cool!!! I wonder why James keeps getting flashes of the future?? Are they being put there by someone or are they just dreams?? Hmmm Anway I hope James is ok!!! And I hope you post again really really really really soon!!!

-Kelsea

Oh no! Is James ok?!?!?! Im worried. And that dream - definitley the future. He really should think about telling someone else - *cough - Lily- cough*. They kissed again! Adorable! Post soon!
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