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harry and ginny
wub.gif well here is my feedback thread enjoy
GryffindorBabexhott
I like this story. I see some speeling and grammar mistakes but those are easy to fix! Im glad they got back together!! And Ron and Hermione are together too! I have no ideas for fights - cuz I dont want them ina fight! Post soon!
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harry and ginny
ya i dont want them to fight ither but it really is not a real relasinship and i really want it to seem real and everyone fights

and sorry about the spelling and grammer my word program is way out of date

it might take i little bit for the next chapter cause i can only do it after my parents go to be and that is like 12:00 cause they dont like me to read harry potter stuff they hate it and if they knew i was righting a fanfic they would kill me lol i no im bad but i cant resist righting wub.gif
GryffindorBabexhott
Sorry I havent posted! Im glad they are back together! Its really great! It was cute how they feel asleep together. I can't wait to read about the wedding. Oh and you spelled Quidditch wrong - just for future refrence. Maybe you should get a beta - someone to fix easily common mistakes. If you are interested..PM me. Otherwise - post soon!
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laughingirl_92
harry and ginny i like this story its really good my favorite thing about it is that harry and ginny get back together wub.gif. sometimes i start laughing but its really good.oh yeah when they fall asleep together that made me laugh and how ron was mad(cute).post soon!
writin'is4me
ok i like the story and how ginny and harry just kinda fell back into the relationship so easily. I love how Ron is still not comfortable about them being together but the one thing tha bothered me through out the entire story so far is you spelled till wrong you spelled it like tail like my dog has a tail but that is ok i just wanted to point that out so you could fix it but i do love your story it is good and you can expect to hear more of how great it is if continue with it
Erin
harry and ginny
thanks and i will try to start spelling things better like i said before my wprd is way out of date and thanks for the feedback i will post on saturday but after that there wont be a nother one tell the july 3rd or so cause i am leaving to go to mexico on a missions trip with my church on sunday.
No.1_HarryPotterFan
I really like your story!!!!! It rocks! wub.gif
Flutterbye
How could you????????????????????????????????????????????? mad.gif mad2.gif shocking.gif

She better not be dead!!!!!!!!!!!

I bet it was Ron who sent the spell at her

She better still be alive!!!!!!



Flutterbye


P.S Very good Chapter smile.gif smile.gif
laughingirl_92
You can't kill Ginny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please tell me you ddin't kill her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great chapter!!!Post soon!!!
>Rosie
George'sbabe
There are A LOT of typos... sad.gif but other than that it was written very well. Good story. I like the twist where you don't know if Ginny is dead or not. I can't wait for the other chapters. But the typos hurt me even though I know what you mean. But over all I like it happy.gif
VoldemortIsEvil
i like it i like a lot of fan fictoin but y did u kill ginny that was mean lol anyway when is the next chapter
jonathan5248
This story is so good.... I can't believe you killed Ginny...I wonder if JKR will write someday an adult scene...i mean, harry and ginny and their first time....

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