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happy-potter
Hey there! biggrin.gif

Piglet: Haha. I know! Another cliffhanger! I’ve made loads of them in this fic, right? Oh, my! You’re spider senses are gooood! No more deaths… well one, but I guess that’s okay? biggrin.gif I hope you’re happy with the ending, (my beta didn’t like it very much, so I’m nervous!) Thanks, yet another time. You’ve really been a great reader I hope you’re not too disappointed with my ending.
Kaitlyn: You finished up a good place. Right before I had to kill Ginny. Haha. Okay, not funny actually. Hmm. Yea, I started out some time before Dh, wanting to write something different, and think I’ve managed it okay. And as you say, I have planned something else for each of the characters as I tried to figure out how it could have gone. I’m not fond of the Harry dying thing, but this idea just came to me, and I had to write it down. It was also because everyone tried to write what would happen after the battle and how good everything was, so I took the other way. (I’ve never thought Harry would die! I was shocked when I red t The Prince’s Tale!) Haha. So many questions! You’ll have them answered!


- Vicki
Piglet
Hey, it's me, hehe! Well, yea i like the ending. I would of preffered a longer chapter maybe, but that could be because i never really wanted the fic to end in the first place! But i can learn to live with that hopefullly, the end of another fic, oh the pain!

Well the death of voldemort came quite suddenly actually, but i loved the sudden twist. At the end of the previous chapter i was certain that it was Molly's death sad.gif and that, Lord Voldy had shouted the curse... but oooo, it wasn't! Hehe, i thought that was really good!

The best thing about this fic for me is that it is such an original idea, and it also really dark, i've not come across another fic like this and it will be sorely missed by me!

Well done for a great effort on this fic, i loved and stayed with fic from chapter 1! But i have to say: All was well??? I never much liked those last three words in deathly hallows, but i see your point for the tribute hehe.

Sad to see it over. but well done!

Always the faithful reader
Piglet
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happy-potter
Piglet : *breathe out of relief* Yeah, you liked the ending! I was so nervous before I posted it! I’m sorry you wanted to story to continue, but really I couldn’t come up with more chapters, and I guess it was never meant to be that long. Haha. Yea, the death was sudden, but I did because of the cliffhanger. I thought it could be fun to make people believe Molly was dead, but it was mean, mean of me tongue.gif That was probably why you didn’t see the ending?
Hmm, actually, K8Egrrl have written one a bit like mine after have red this one and been inspired, maybe you should check that out too?
Ahh, the ending… I laughed when I red your last words. As I hated the ending in DH I found it funny you didn’t either. But really, I just couldn’t stop myself and just wrote it; mostly to end it the same way, but also as my own little tribute to DH. I hope you’ve enjoyed it, as I have enjoyed writing it. Even though it never was as popular as everyone wanted it to, I’m proud of it, and glad I at least could make someone happy. Thanks for your great support!

- Vicki happy.gif
Kaitlyn
It's over and All is well! I never thought James would finish Voldemort! Silly me, but it was such a dark story that I thought Molly would die too! (I liked how you put the same phrase, it was touching!)

I really liked it! Finally the sun was shining and that bit about the death eaters and Voldemort's monsters going away with him... Wow, that was pretty good!

Also, Tonks' and Remus' fight over the same matter... That was good! I love to read them alive again! I love that couple!

You are soo right. I'm not very fond of the idea of Harry dying either, but then again, only a few people thought about that possibility. I thought that was how DH was going to end, I never saw a chance of a different ending and was most pleased when JKR allowed him to live!

Your story is the total opposite to others out there. Most of them are happy endings and that is fine, but reading something different, with different possibilities is a very good change.

I love your fics, and I'm looking forward to reading more from you. You're a very original writer.

Thanks for a nice story.

Your fan,

~ Kat.
The Master of Death
Well done mate...i really enjoyed this ewn though i hated u when u killed GINNY...but all s well that ends well i loved the story and it was nearly as good as other hp books....UR REALLY GOOD....
Lulu-lolo
Wow, well done smile.gif. Very original idea. Though it is a long time ago you wrote this, I am still impressed. Actually, it make me more impressed that you wrote this before the breaking of the Deahtly Hallows (to my recollection anyhow). It is a bit scary though, the as your usual stuff. But I like it so far biggrin.gif. Most of the fan-fic I've read has bin L/J, so it is quite nice with something different for a change tongue.gif

Well done, now I'll read on happy.gif
Lulu-lolo
Well, now I'm done, and I think it is great! Very original idea, flawless writing, actually, all is well:p I am very glad that you stuck to your plan and did not change anything just because JK disagreed with you. You should be proud about that!

All was well smile.gif
MoonFighter
It really was dark...I was very shocked to read that Harry has died and that Ginny had a baby and that she dies too!! O.O I was having a shock at almost each chapter laugh.gif I felt bad for James, he was so little and had a such a weigh on his shoulders - just like his father.
The story was great, I really like it. It was going a little too fast, but I think it was because of their time - they didn't have time to fret over something. But I can say that you could've developed the ending a little more. Don't get me wrong. It was good, but it was too quick - I had to read twice what?who?when?how? shy.gif I was really confused ^^"

But over all, the story was great <333 I enjoyed and I felt bad for Harry and Ginny sad.gif
Congrats and hug.gif
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