Hey everyone

This is the place to put your feedback to my story The Other Prophecy. Please be honest if you say something about it, but don’t be cruel

- Vicki

OMG! That was so sad, but very good! Please write more, I like the way it is going! I have one question though, Is Molly somehow Harry's child? If you can't answer because it will interfere with your story,then don't answer it! Please post more soon, I can't wait!!!
*Breanna*

Hey, I was going to leave feedback earlier but my computer didn't let me. I loved it but it was sooo sad when Voldmort took Ron and Hermione's child, or was it Harry and Ginny's?? I liked it a lot!! You really put some dietail into it and thats what make awsome stories like yours!! Please post soon so we can see what happens to Molly and Ron and Hermione, it is a super awsome story so far and I can't wait to read the rest of it!!


-Sophia

Hey, you were right this is deffinaltly different to any other fanfic i've read, but i'm already hooked after just the first chapter! Firstly it's a different view, as Harry died, not heard that one before. And you put so much detail into your chapter, that it made me feel as though I could picture what was happening acuratly. I loved the charater of Molly, she sounded really cute, and intelligent for her age. Just a question though, you seemed to emphasis the fact that the stranger (Voldy) had a wand, is this because witches and wizards are no longer allowed possesson of a wand, or is it that his wand looked different and peculier, I was just wandering??? Really looking forward to a new chapter, and hoping to hear (read) what happens to Molly
Piglet

Great! As usual!
Why does everyone think that Molly is Harry's child?
Oh well... I can't wait for the next chapter!

Nads

Hey
Thanks for reading and leaving feedback guys And to those who thinks so: No, Molly is definitely not Harry’s child. She’s all Ron/Hermione. She a ‘genius’ and that’s all Hermione, not Harry
Piglet: I’m glad you noticed that wand-thing. I like to explain it After Voldemort had killed Harry and taken over no one was allowed to have wands. That’s why it was such a shock to Molly, and Ron or Hermione didn’t just draw their wands when he came.

- Vicki

Hey, cool chapter!!! So is Mette, Ginny, or another weasley member not mentioned in the books, hmmm...??? You're really amazing me with the amount of detail you use in these chapters, it really sets the scene and i love it! I really love this fanfic and it only has two chapters so far lol!!! Well done and post soon
Piglet

hey,

love your story!
poor Molly. I wonder who Mette really is
and why they have the same eyes.
maybe it's Ginny and is Molly harry's daughter hmmm....
we'll see

greetings Rox

WOW! THat is an incredable story. I love it all, Molly, Ginny, enerything. Please post soon, or I'll die.

Awsome chapter!! I had a feeling that Mette might be Ginny or something, then I got to the end and it said about Molly and Ginny looking exactly the same.... then the eyes.... yeah awsome!! Post again real soon!!!! please..... Love it!!!

NO WAY!!!! You can NOT just end it right there!!! Please please please post soon... I must know the rest!! lol... That was super awesome, they got to know each other and everything about there past, why Ginny ran away, very important. Like I said please, please, please....etc post soon!! I need to read it!! Your an amazing writer!! Looking forward to reading more!!

it's fantastic!!!
wow, Harry and Ginny had a child. what if Voldy hears that and finds it hmmm...
ok stop thinking Rox you're hurting youself.
post soon again it's realy good!!

greetings Rod

Love it! but that cliff hanging is horrible, because I really want to know if molly's Ginny's daughter or not. So please, post asap!

Hey

Padfoot, Prongs and Moony: I actually liked writing ch3 because of the info you get about Ginny, glad you liked it, and thanks for the very nice words about my writing. I’m sorry to end it there , but I like being evil … no , that’s not why , but at least you’ll return to read more
Robin A.B. Weasley: Yeah they have a child , and yeah, stop thinking, we cant have you to go around and hurt yourself.
Arryah. I promise, Molly is definitely not Ginny’s daughter, she just looks like her And I know I was a bit evil there, but hen I’m sure you will return

- Vicki

Luna??
This story is soooo wierd but I love it!!!

im-loveli-rli

Let me guess, Luna Lovegood. That is very cool how smart Molly is and how easyly she'll find out the truth. The only part that was sad was that maybe some of DA died when they talked bak to the guard, or did they? Well, anyway, it is very good and
I can't wait for the next one.

Yeah I agree with arryha... Luna Lovegood. WOW!!! That chapter was AWESOME!!!!! like awesome to a new level!!! WOWOWOWOW!!! Please post again REAL soon!!! I can't wait!! (really I can't...)!!!!!

omg! Luna, I would have guessed that, but when you said the dreamy look, it was a dead give away! OMG, so they DO have a child. Ooh, does the child look like Ginny or harry, is it a boy or a girl! Ok, I better stop before I have an info overload! Oh yeah, sorry I haven't replied in a while, my schedule has been full, and I haven't had time to properly be in front of a computer! Please post soon, I'll be waiting for your next chappy!

*Breanna*

Hey, really cool chapter!! I'm deffinatly thinkin that it is Luna, the dreamy eyes, dirty blond hair, it says it all! I like the developing charater of Ginny. Ooo they are planing a breakout of Voldy's lair, scary but impressive! Keep up the good work and post soon!
Piglet

Hey all 'feedback-leavers' !
Thanks for taking your time to read and leaving feedback. It's very appreciated. And your very good: as you could read it was Luna! I just love that girl, hed to hae her in my story.

im-loveli-rli:It’s weird you think? Haha, I’m sorry, but I needed to get a little away from my L/J fic and write something we haven’t seen before, but I’m glad you like despise that
arryha: Well no one we’ll get to know about from DA died. Yeah, Molly is a very smart kid. Hermione’s her mother, could she then be different?
Padfoot, Prongs and Moony: Wow, I’m glad you have so many nice words to say about the story. And I’m sorry for the long wait, but I’ve been a bit busy lately. I’m sorry you couldn’t wait… You didn’t do anything stupid, right?
Breanna_Justine_Potter: If you’ll avoid having an overload I’ll just keep shut; you’ll get to know. Promise! And it’s okay to be busy. I am to with exams and all. I hate them! I’m glad you’re waiting. (what else could you do )
Piglet: I like Ginny too. She’s matured so much since we left her in HBP… She’s a strong woman. Trust me… Sorry you didn’t get the breakout in this chapter, but as you can read it’ll be there in the next.

- Vicki

OMG this is so good!!!!
I can't wait until you write again.
ok remus just tranformed into a werewolf, wait they're not going to...Remus is in werewolf form that's bloody dangerous
post soon again

Greetings Rox

Oh my gosh I love this story you can't just have another cliffy.... That's not fair... only joking!! This story is really interesting... poor Remus... I always feel so sorry for him.... Please post again soon!!

How many cliffhangings are you going to have? I lve the story! I love how Ginny and Molly are becoming best buds. I wonder, is Ginny's child at Harry's aunt and uncle's house? Well, anyway, post soon.

oooo, i'm liking where this is going!! This is starting to get really clever, i can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter, especially as lupin is a fully fledged werewolf likely to bite!! Well done and post soon!
Piglet

Hey! Thanks for readign my fic and leaving feeback

Robin A.B. Weasley: I’m sorry if you couldn’t wait, but it’s up now. Well, they had to use the fact that they had a werewolf on their side. Thanks for your feedback
Padfoot, Prongs and Moony: Sorry for the cliffy and the one I’ve made again. It’s necessary, so don’t hate me. I feel so sorry for Remus too. It’s not his fault. Thank you for the feedback
arryha: Sorry! Another cliffy, and there will be more, but the worst are over. Trust me. And Harry and Ginny’s child at the Dursleys’ ? I can’t say, but that would just be CRUEL! Thanks for the feedback
Piglet: Good, it wouldn’t be good if you didn’t like it. Yes, the escape, but as you can read, there’s more problems! Haha. Thanks for the feedback

- Vicki

OK thanks for posting it was good and lucky remus had learned to control himself.
Poor Molly she can't go back to her parents. but it won't be a good thing if they're dead.
I wonder who that guy is? Maybe it's my Granddad he's sort of very suspicious about people just kidding
hope you'll post soon again.

Greetings Rox

meany with the cliffhangers!! Great chapter though!

im-loveli-rli

hey happy-potter, great story! it's really fun and the cliffhangers are fun also! keep writting, i hope you write more soon!
Isabelle

Hey, your're right i can't guess, ahhh!!! This is such a dark and imaginative fanfic that's absolutly fantastic!!!! I love it to bits, i thought it was a good idea that Lupin has learnt to control his wolfish side, could help, as it already has lol! Really can't wait for more, well done and post soon!
Piglet

Okay, now you put in clifhangers, but this is the meanest by far!! It seems like it's a muggle if they have a gun, or a wizard living like a muggle.... You have to post soon with the rest of it.... I really love your story!!

Hey! I'm so sorry for the very long wait! I've just gotten the chapter left, I didnt intend to hold you that long, but thanks for all the feedback!

Robin A.B. Weasley: I’m glad yo udidnt think the detail with Remus controlling himself was stupid, it all wouldn’t have worked if he couldn’t do that. I don’t hope it’s your granddad, as I don’t know him. But this guy isn’t that bad after all. Sorry for the wait!
im-loveli-rli: I know I’m a bit evil, but there’s not many cliffhangers left. Don’t worry. Glad you liked the chapter!
h.p.lover13: I’m lad you at least like my cliffhangers. Those are what makes my story interesting. I’m sorry for the long wait, it didn’t mean to.
Piglet: HAHA! Oh okay. You would have been too good if yohu could guess who it was. You’ve gotten your answer now Glad you liked my idea with Remus that he could control himself. Sorry for the long wait!
Padfoot, Prongs and Moony: Am I mean? Haha, that’s what makes people love me. Just kidding, sorry for holding you so long. But yea, it is a muggle, but a good one.

- Vicki

Whoa awesome! Sorry I didn't leave feedback sooner!! My computer was so slow I couldn't go on.... Anyways!!! Hmm.... Wonder what could make Ginny nervous (after all she has been imprisoned and on the run ) That should tell you something! Wow, wonder why Molly couldn't have Harry's wand? Maybe Ginny wanted to use it, or preserve it? Please post soon!! I love your fic!!!

sorry I didn't leave feedback yesterday but I hadn't got the time. Your story is really getting better and better every chapter. I already thought it was good. I loved the Cliffhanger, I can't wait till I find out what happend.
please post soon again

Greetings Rox

P.S.: thanks for leaving feedback on 'Letters to Draco'

Hey!

Padfoot, Prongs and Moony: I won’t tell you why Molly couldn’t have Harry’s wand, but the death eater’s is good enough for her. But Ginny have her own wand, so she doesn’t need two. Think about that! Thanks for the feedback!
Robin A.B. Weasley: Thanks so much for the compliment! I’m glad you at least liked the cliffhanger, most people hate me for it Thanks for the feedback

- Vicki

Hey, sorry i didn't post sooner, just caught up with the fic. Ah-no, jack dead, this almost reminds me of what Voldy did to Harry! Kill all those close to them, break them down. It made me laugh though of what molly did to malfoy lol, where did she learn such behaviours lol! Well done and post soon, (or as soon, as giving circumstance )
Piglet

I really loved it. Pitty Jack died but hey I didn't know the guy that well to cry. I loved the way she beated Malfoy, althoug I'm a huge Malfoy fan, It's still great. He's such a stupid little brat. I said it before and I keep saying it your story is good!!

Greetings Rox

Okay, just one question, was that Draco or Lucius Malfoy? probably Draco, but just thought I'd clear that up. Amazing story!!!!! Your an amazingly awesome writer!!!!!!! And I hate Malfoy even more, if that's possible! And then Molly stopped Ginny, but then hurt Malfoy anyways.... wow, haha... Too bad you won't post for a while (but it's completely understandable) because your story is awesome!!! And I can't wait until you post again (even if it won't be for a while) Love it!!!!

Hey all readers who bother to go to my feedback thread and read! I’m so sorry for the long wait, and hope you all understand I’ll continue my story with my own story line. I know it’s not relevant anymore since I built my story at another outcome of DH. Please understand I’ll not kill of those JKR killed of. I’m really not that evil! Oh, well…

Piglet : Yea. The Death Eaters and Voldemort kill those close to us. And to your question about Molly’s behaviour… hmm, her father is Ron, and, really, she’s related to Fred, George and Ginny. I guess it’s in her genes Again, I’m sorry for the long wait, hope you still stick with it all.
Robin A.B. Weasley : Too bad yea. I really didn’t think people would die just because I killed a person we’d known through two chapters. that was too much to ask for. I’m Malfoy fan too, but thought he deserved as in my story he’s joined the Death Eaters. I think he kind of deserved it. Sorry for the long wait, hope you still stick with the story.
Padfoot, Prongs and Moony : Draco. In my story he’s joined the Death Eaters. Pitty… Oh, thanks for the so wonderful words of my writing. I warms up my little heart I’m glad you liked the Molly holding Ginny part of the story. It was hard to write, but I knew it should happen like that and am okay satisfied with the outcome. Also a big sorry to you for the long wait. I hope you’ve not forgot all about my story

Again, thanks for the amazing feedback. It’s really appreciated.

- Vicki

I LOVE your story and i dont say that about everyones (or do i? ) i read all but the last post all at once and was checking everyday for the next bit! i had been wanting to write a fanfic but had no ideas till i read yours and decided to write a what- if- harry- died type fanfic. but dont worry im not copying! just the basic idea. *shifty eyes* no really.

Hey, just caught up on the latest chapter! Woot Molly can do magic, hehe, like mother like daughter! Hmmm... i just wonder what ginny's plan is??? Well done and post soon!
Piglet

K8Egrrl : I’m really glad you love my fic! even though you say that to other ones. Sorry for the long wait when you checked often. And I’m glad I could give you some inspiration. And really, I don’t care you made something like that. I don’t have rights to this story.
Piglet : Haha. Yea, Molly has inherited her mother’s brain. We’ll see that later too. You didn’t have to wait a long time to find out her plan. I think if you’d really thought about it you could have guessed. I came up with the next chapter as soon as possible, hope it was good enough

-Vicki

Hey, that was a really great chapter! And ginny found her son, how sweet, and he won't hate her!!! He sounds just like harry, like father like son! Well done and post soon,
Piglet

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! (star wars moment) happy-potter, how could you? Ginny.... Harry (oops, that's my story) James just found her! And now she's gone! I hate you... Nah, just kidding. I love your story even though you did that- which- must- not- be- named, and will continue to read it. But why couldn't you have killed Moldy- Voldy or someone who sucks?!

Hey, hmmm... how do i put this politly??? YOU KILLED GINNY!!!!! Oh no i loved her character so much and now Molly and James are left to fend for themselves, oh no so unbearable please post soon i need to read more!!!
Piglet

K8Egrrl : Star wars moment? Haha. Yeah, it all seamed so perfect, right? But imagine, if you’ve red chapter 12, Ginny still being there. It’s kind of the same as why JKR killed Dumbledore. Harry/James has to do his job alone. And trust me, I’d rather kill Voldemort. This was so sad to do, and felt really bad about it. Sorry!
Piglet : It really can’t be put politely, can it? I mean, I killed Ginny. She’s even my favourite character. Imagine how hard it was to me. I know, James and Molly to themselves, but as above. I did it as the same reasons to why JKR killed Dumbledore; they have to do their job alone and they wont ever be able to do that when someone is always there for one. Sorry!

- Vicki

Oooo poor boy, but he just left a younger girl than him alone in a house!!!! Hmmm... wonder where he went? Well done and post soon!
Piglet

Hey, sorry it took me so long to post back, but i just moved house and only just got my internet connection back! So, this fic is finishing soon... I don't really see an endinng yet so its getting really exciting!!! And i'm glad the order is back, but so many are missing, and it don't take a genious to realise what happened to them But please post soon, the disappearence of James is so intriging and yet sad! Well done and post soon!
Piglet

Hey!

Piglet : Thanks. Yeah, it’s easy to guess what’s happened to the missing order members… You can’t see an end? Well, after you’ve red chapter 14, I think you might Sorry it took so long for posting. I’ve been busy, but I hope too have the next chapter up soon!

- Vicki

Eek!! You left that in such a cliff hanger! But my spider sense are tingleing, and i'm seeing a sudden reappearence of James? Please please please say i'm right and that he will rescue Molly. I don't want any more deaths! Anywho, it's out my system now hehe, so well done and i'm hoping for more chapters soon!
I still can't see the ending hehe!
Piglet

Hi! I just wanted to drop a line to let you know that now I'm reading this fanfic of yours (as if it was homework! Hahaha!)

So far, I think it's pretty dark, but still, it has great description of everything: the battles, the places, the people. I quite like it! It's a totally different story and so far, I'm looking forward to a little more spare time to finish off where I left it today (Post 11: Picking up James).

I must tell you, you're very creative and I like how you managed to develop this story. I noticed how you started it before DH and made your very own plot. You gave a destiny to each of your characters and gave them a brand new life. I really like what you've done.

(And I must tell you, I'm not very fond of the Harry dying idea, but the whole Ginny and Molly story is very brave and worth reading. It's very good!)

I'll finish reading it later on, but seriously, it's a wonderful job what you've done here. Keep up the great writing!

Talk to you later,

~ Kat.

EDIT: I just finished reading it all. Oh my! That was... undescribable? Wow! Is Molly going to die? What happened to James? Is the prophecy going to come true? I know that those are a lot of questions, but it's just a great story! Keep us informed! You are very creative! Thanks for another original fic Vicki! ~ Kat.