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HPFan792
Hey! This is the feedback thread for the beginning of the end! I hope you can all drop by and leave some feedback. It will be much appreciated! Please dont be so hard on me seeing as Im relatively new at this. Thank you all for your time!
miss granger
First post! go me!!!
I love this fic! Harry's still doing chores for the dursleys eh?
There's no feedback link in your fan fic - either put it in your siggy, or in every chapter.
I think it's good that you got straight into the action, I wonder what Prof. Mcgonaggle's protronus will be.
Really good, well done!
Can't wait for you to post again

Nads
HPFan792
Thank you miss granger for posting. I just put a link in my siggy. Ya so I wanted to get to the action right off the bat. I appreciate that you like that. The next chapter sould be up soon and you will get to find out what Mcgonaggle's protronus will be.
gorgeous_granger
hey hun!!
Ok i'm leaving feedback like i promised!!
I love your fic although im going to like it as i beta it!!
It's great...keep up the great work!! you might want to take my name off the bottom of it...hehe
lovin it!!
send me your next chapter as soon as you can...you're doing great!!
love,
x-x-x em x-x-x
Padfoot, Prongs and Moony
That was awesome!! (I think I use that word too much...) It was great how you had McGonagall pick Harry up like how Dumbledore picked Harry up in the sixth book. Too bad the darn Dementors came... Owell, Harry and McGonagall can take 'em!! YAH!!! WHOOT WHOOT!!! lol! Keep on writing, it's super awesome!!!
HPFan792
Thank you. The new chapter is up and I hope you enjoy it. Please keep reading. All of you!I would like to thank all of you again for the feedback.
arryha
I love the new chapter! I am very sad, though, that Ginny is dating someone else, but it is for the best. I can not wait for the next chapter and to see what he finds at the sight. Please post soon.
HPFan792
Thanks for reading. I am glad that you liked the chapter. I have no idea when the next chapter will be up but, I will try to write as soon as I can.
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