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J-B-L 4 HP
Hello thanks for all the comments thats comming in.


please be honest. biggrin.gif
Padfoot, Prongs and Moony
Yeah, I'm first!! Okay, that was super awesome!! It is so good the Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, Nevile and Luna get to be Aurors!! Also that Dumbledore came back I was like ohmy.gif LOL Please post again soon, I can't wait!!!
Robin A.B. Weasley
hey,
you're not bad you're good!!!
I sarted a fanfic and noone reacted until I left seven chapters.
but hey you're realy good!! don't stop now smile.gif

Greetings Rox twisted.gif
Padfoot, Prongs and Moony
AAhhh... now I'm sad.... I relly like your writing!! Your an awesome writer!!! You have been faking me out for 2 days now!! I see a new update and I get really excited, like "Yes!! I get to read what happens next!!!" And then it's not part of the story.... I don't get many reviews, or comments, on my story either... The first 2-6 post I had no one commetning, maybe like 1 person. I'm partners in a new story with arryha and we only have 1 comment. and we wrote 4 post. So just because you don't get a lot of posts but you like to write, then write! That's what I do, I love to write!! So I keep writing, hopping someone will comment, but it doesn't bother me that much if they don't. You have an awesome beginning of a story on your hands!!! Please write more, if you have one devoted person, isn't that enough??

I really honestly love this story!! I wouldn't say it if it wasn't true! Please write more!! And the next time you post, can you put some of the story?? lol... I love it!! Can't wait to read more of it!!
time turner
I agree with what was said above, you are doing great and keep on writting. I like all that you wrote, and can't wait for more. Post soon and keep up the good work.
J-B-L 4 HP
thx for the nice comments. Chappy 2 will be up on the weekend or early next week. it will be bit shorter but it has a huge cliffy in
Breanna_Justine_Potter
I'm so sorry, I've just been reading the fanfics and not posting feedback! sad.gif I really have not had ANY time! My brothers keep rushing me off the computer! *mutters under breath about stupid brothers* tongue.gif .....Anyways, I love your writing, please don't end it now! wub.gif Also, yay! Dumbledore is back, and I like the little talk between McGonagall and Harry! About Harry still being sad and stiil wanting revenge, and about her also losing people in the war, it was very touching!!! cool.gif Please post soon! biggrin.gif

*Breanna*
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HarryPotterGirl911
If youn ever update can you send me a owl! i relly like your story laugh.gif
Padfoot, Prongs and Moony
You know when something is so amazingly awesome that you get that irresistable feeling and your jaw just drops to the floor, that's what happend.... WOWOWOW!!!! Harry killed Snape?? Uh oh.... I really really like your story!! It is a change from everyone else's, their's are all about dark times (even mine is) but I like your's because it has more happiness to it. It is great!! I'm ssssoooo glad that you posted!! Please post Chapter 3 soon, I want to know what happens next.... Did Harry kill Snape or other way around? Did someone coe up behind them and kill Harry....? Awesome story!!
Alonnet
Well I for one loved this chappy, I must get te name of your Beta.LoL. You did really good on this chapter and I cannot wait to read more just send it when your ready k?
HarryPotterGirl911
I love this chapter! Did harry kill snape? or did snape kill hary or dumbledore? what happened to ron, ginny. hermy,neville, and luna?write fast the suspense is killing me!
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J-B-L 4 HP
thx for the nice comments guys


chappy 3 will be up soon


peace out
Padfoot, Prongs and Moony
That was awesome... a little random... but great all the same!! They all got O's on their exams... 'cept Neville.... but it's only 1 class. Please post again soon, I want to see what happens!! biggrin.gif
Padfoot, Prongs and Moony
Ahhhhh eeek.gif eeek.gif eeek.gif eeek.gif Neville's dead??? eeek.gif eeek.gif eeek.gif And he never got to see his mom speaking again, Neville would have really wanted that.... But that was good, Malfoy trying to kill Harry (like he could win) and then Dudley wanted to go with Harry?? Wow, major twist there, awesome writing, post soon!! biggrin.gif
J-B-L 4 HP
thanx padfoot

well there is still more twists coming in the next few chapters


will post soon
zhpotterfan
amazin fanfic! SUPERB!
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