Please post any feedback (constructive criticism also!!) about my fan fic The Final Battle (link in my siggy )

xholbyxangelx xxx

Yeah, number 1!! WOW that was awesome, for a short beginning it held a lot!! That was ssoo nice of Ron, Hermione and Ginny to be there for Harry when he needed them most!! Please post again soon, you have an awesome beginning!!

Wow, that was cool! Harry was dreaming right?? Just he didn't wake up yet?? Or did he get killed or something?? You have to post the next chapter to see what happens next!! I love it so far!!

That was fantastic! I loved it! The first chapter, I thought, was really well done. It's hard to put emotion like that into a story but you did it. I can't wait to read more! Please post more soon!

I think it is really good so far. You drew me in to the story with the details, descrptions, and "colorful" words. I'm now anticipating what you will right next. Can't wait to see what happens. Keep up the good work.

Ron??? On Voldemorts' side???????? WHAT???? WHOA!!! Major twist!! But I love it, this story is really awesome!! I can't believe that Ron would turn?? Or did he? Was it just Harry's imagination, or not??.... hmm.... Well, I think that this story is awesome!! Please write more soon!!!

Hermione is dead??????? Cho is dead???? WHAT!!??? Snape is headmaster and he already killed 2 students....???? wow, did not see that coming! Major twist!! So, Ron is a Death Eater, Hermione died, Cho died. Harry will die even if Cho delayed it. What an evil, evil headmaster. WOW!! Post soon!! I want to find out what happens!!!

...........................................That was awesome!Depressing, but all the same awesome!I don't know about you, but I am so glad that I don't go to that twisted school!!!Ron, a death eater, what an idea!I hope that you keep writing onto it, I would love to read more!

WHAT!!! Ginny sin't dead is she???? Please tell me she's not.... Ron, Hermione, Cho, now Ginny??? Oh my goodness, now you really have to post the next part soon!! Only joking, but please post soon!! I want to find out what happens, and who was the second person or the thing/person that was there since she was not alone...?? I love this story so far!!!

Is Ginny dead?? And now Ron's dead.... wow, everyone is dieing.... Oh my goodness... now Voldemort is there??? And Snape??? This will not end well.... Please post again soon!!!!

Thanks everyone for all your kind replies!! I'll try to get the next part up as soon as possible - it's still not typed up, so I'll try and do it tonight.

Thank you again!!

xholbyxangelx xxxx

Sorry I haven't been here in a while ... I've been busy. But wow! Amazing chapters! I can't wait to find out what's next! Post more soon!

p.s.
If you have extra time, feel free to read my first fan fic "You Belong To Me". The link is in my siggy if you're interested. Thanks

WHOA! and YAY!! Snape is now good and treating Harry and everyon else what they deserved to be treated! And Malfoy, Crabbe and Goyle are in dention... for 5 MONTHS!! WHOA!!! That was cool how you described how the Dark Mark was burned off off Snape's arm, very artistic!!! Please post again soon!!!! I love it so far!!!

WHOA!! Snape crying.... whoa. That was cool at the end is all like 'and you'll have us , Harry...' WOW!!! Man, Snape awarded points... LOL!! Anyways, awesome story, I really love it!! Post again soon!

Yay!! That was good!! ah, so no one truly died.... That's good!! That was sssooo awesome!! (Any word that is higher than awesome, then your story is that!!) You're a really good writer!!

Thanks!! I know it would never have happened in a million years, but I thought Harry needed a bit of happiness in his life