I feel so bad for them. Hermione is so courageous for saying those things!! I loved the gallows part for some reason, i just rele... liked it lol. Will anyone believe them? Will anyone except them? What will Snape say to them? How will the battle go? I cant wait to read more! I'm on the edge of my seat!!!!! Post soon!!!

I'm glad to see the next chapter is up. By the way things are going, it looks like the end is fast approaching. *tear*

Excellent as usual! I can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep up the great work.

Laura

Reading your fanfic just makes my day! It's so intense! Now Severus has to tell the Order all about him being a spy and prove that he's on their side. How's he going to manage that? He could barely show Hermione, let alone everyone else. Or is he going to try to leave out his love for Lily and somehow scoot by it?

When is Harry going to get there? He's not going to be happy. Has Ginny sent him an owl at all, or is she just waiting until he gets there to tell him about Hermione and Severus?

McGonagall's reaction was a bit harsh, but not unexpected. I think that's probably how she would react. She hasn't ever really liked Severus, and she probably thought he was a DE-until DD convinced her-, so it makes sense that she react that way.

I feel bad for Mrs. Weasley. She probably thought that Hermione would end up being her daughter-in-law, and now Hermione is saying she's in love with Snape. Yikes.

I can't wait for the next chapter to see how Severus explains himself. This is an awesome story!! Thanks for taking the time to post all of this and reply to our replies!

I still LOVE it!!! Ohhh. . . I can't wait to see how love conquers Voldemort. That would be really funny if Harry did kiss him to death . I can't wait to see the battle, but I'll be sad at the same time, because that will mean that the story is finished . I can't wait to read more.

Oh no! oh no, oh no, oh no, oh no, oh no, oh no, oh no, oh no, oh no!!!OH NO!!!!
WHY does mcgonagal have to be sooo rude! severus is risking his life for them all, does no-one but hermione see that! i mean you'd expect mcgonagol to understand, because she knows the truth about severus! but no!, she doesn't even help them explain to the others! and she doesn't even back up severus when they are accusing him!
oh and don't get me started on remus!! i thought he was nice, i thought he might understand! obviously i was wrong! he's just as shallow(is that the right word?) as everyone else! you'd think they'd maybe consider that if hermione has fallen in love with him, then maybe, just maybe, he is a good guy! but again! they are accussing him of murder!
oooo but don't you think i'm complaining!! because that is far from what i'm doing! all of the above is what makes your story so brilliant!
the struggles for understanding, the "forbidden" love, you could call it! the war, the sadness, the strife, deaths of ones who thought they were loved by someone!(which sadly wasn't true!)
i mean how much better could a story be!!!
i love this relationship you have made between them! and i really love there conversations they have together in there minds! it's brilliant! such a beautiful way to bring each other closer together!!
and i was wondering how you were going to make love into some form of enegy for a weapon! sounds interesting!loved the bit with that and severus shoting just before mcgonagol!
but now they just need to tell harry about ..them... and show him the love!!
i soooo loook forward to it!!
so you have to post as soon as you finish writing this chapter please!!!
which, i might add, has to be very soon!
kc

Another marvelous chapter! I'm getting rather antsy for more, and I'm hoping that the end isn't drawing nearer? Do you have an outline planned for the rest? I want to be sure to prepare myself for the ending... .

I can't wait to see more reaction from the Order members, it's keeping me on my toes.

Ashley

drhpluvr4l, again and again and again I must praise your writing. The time you now take writing really shows and it seems to me that you must be working so hard as you really are getting better with each new chapter! You are so much able to create tension which is, thanks to the pace of the chapter, nearly tangible this time. You can really set the pace of the story so well, neither rush it nor have it drag on, just the right one for what's happening in each scene. I very much like that you elaborate on the scene of the Order meeting in such detail as I think that this is one of the crucial scenes on which Severus's future life depends. If he manages to persuade the Order members or not. And what and how is he going to tell them? I simply couldn't believe my eyes when the chapter ended. Such suspense! And I really wanted to read on so much.

What is your strongest point in the chapter is characterization, particularly of McGonagall and Lupin. You make her so harsh and him so gentle. Well-done! I don't quite agree here with x_kc_x that Lupin is shallow. Yes, in his reactions he might be, but his characterization is simply great and not shallow at all. But I know, x_kc_x, you probably meant it rather for his reactions. As for McGonagall, I think that in the movies she is portrayed much too leniently but in the books she can sometimes be rather harsh, which you capture in your writing so well. Just one question about McGonagall: Is she really using a pen? I would think a quill to be more appropriate Sorry for the comment, but I've just noticed it and thought I would ask.

And.. I love Severus in this chapter; not that it was otherwise in any other chapter or in general. But his monologues are so interesting and revealing of what is going in his mind. And how well you manage to capture the change he is going through - I like when he empathizes with the characters and then immediately shakes the thoughts off. His inner struggle is so apparent.
And in addition, he behaves as if he was one of the Marauders. You make him so mischievous and boyish when he makes the scorch mark on McGonagall's carpet. I think this incident again eases the tension of the scene. But on the other hand, I take it as a strong indicator of the great power Severus now possesses, because the mark cannot be removed by any of McGonagall's spells. This reminds me of the effects of Avada Kedavra which cannot be undone either. So do you equal the might of the Killing Curse with the ancient power of love? Well, let us wait and see how Severus will use the power in the end. I'm so eager to know what happens with "Voldemort’s big black knight." By the way, I think this way of referring to Severus is simply great!

I want you to know that the gallows idea is really original! Particularly, the way you approach it. That Severus all of a sudden finds the thought in his mind. I only want to ask, is it a sign of his mind being still connected with Hermione's or has the idea been in his mind since their first connection many chapters ago? In any case, it serves its purpose and reminds the reader that they are still connected and thus deeply in love.

You do really so well, just keep taking your time and, please, keep writing. And as for the week-long waits, they are really ok, if the chapters you post in the end are so good as they are. Good luck with the writing and school and all other of your responsibilities.

~Jana

Ima_LoOnYLoVeGoOd - I'm so glad you enjoyed the gallows part! I was a little worried that that bit would be too...out-there, you know? I'm so happy to know that it was the opposite. Hahaha, I'm working really hard on teh next part, so try to stay on your seat until your questions are answered (which will be soon!!) Thank you!

LittleRed7771 - Don't woory, the end is...well I haven't actually counted. At least 5 chapters away, but proably more. Thank you for posting, and I'll do the best I can do to make sure the chapters stay up to par (which, incidentally, is getting harder!) Thanks!

Silver Doe - Aw! It makes my day to know my fic makes your day ! I of course can't answer your questions (that would ruin it!) but I can say that he is going to try to leave out his love for Lily. How awkward would that be! As for Ginny...we'll wait and see...! You got the same impression I did about McGonall and Snae - that they really never liked eahc other, and things were bound to go over the edge. Thank you for commenting, your replies always bring me such confidence!

zwillo - Haha, I'm glad to know your still LOVEW it! I too am very excited to write the battle bit - that will be some intense writing on my part. Oh,, and I can guarantee that he won't kiss Voldemort to death, funny as that would be . The story won't be over for a while yet, though, at the rate I'm posting, so you have a bit to go before you can be sad. Thanks for posting!

x_kc_x - Your enthusiasm in your comments always makes me smile. You are so into the story, I'm amazed (and that's a compliemt!) I sort of understand what you mean about Lupin being shallow, but I wrote it in the sense that he has never gotten past the boyhood grudge with Severus, and therefore suspects him (just wanted to clear that up). Haha, I liked the part about Severus shooting the magic at McGonagall, it made me laugh to write. Anyways, thanks for commenting, as always!

workaholic_1231 - Again I say, the end is at least 5 chapters away. Maybe more, I don't know what I'll do after the battle (meaning that I do not have an outline yet , but I'll let you know when the end is near ). I have several ideas, but there still processing. Just keep balancing non those toes, and I'll have the next chapter up as soon as I possibly can. Thank you!

Potions Mistress - again and again I must say thank you! Your detailed feedback really means alot to me, but sadly I don't have time to comment on everything. I'm so happy you thought the characterization plausible, that was another thing I was particularly careful about. Ahh, and you caught me with the pen thing! I just thought 'writing letter=write with a pen'. A quill didn't even occur to me at the time, thank you for pointing that out !

I really enjoyed writing Severus's thoughts on other characters, and then writing his retreat back to his normal state of mind. And yes, I too conncted the ancient love power to the killing curse, for they are opposites, but sometiems opposites have a strange way of becoming alike . That's all I can say on that for now. I had almost forgot about the knight bit; I really liked fitting phrases together to come to the last sentence. And you also likethe gallows thing! I was seriously debating thaking it out. Oh, and it is a sign of how connected their minds are, since it was Hermione's thought. I'm out of time, but thank you for posting, and I'll post the chapter ASAP. Thanks!

*drhpluvr4l

Haha, You always have something that makes it real. I mean it was kind of humorous and of course, Tonks is the one that laughs first.

There was so much going on in this chapter. Well, not really. But a lot of talking and stuff. Lupin, I think you captured his calmness pretty well. McGonagall is so rude. And poor Hermione. It was really good. It's so serious but it's like a perfect amount of seriousness since youv'e got fred and george's humor.

I don't really even know what to say anymore which is weird because usually I have a lot to say.

So just. Post soon!
OH and I can't wait to hear how Snape is going to tell them. Or What he's going to tell them. It'll be good though.

krazy4kreacher - Thank you for posting! I think it's funny that you really thought Tonks laughing out loud was real. That part almost got cut, because I thought for some strange reason that it was extremely unreal, I don't know why. Hmm..apparently not - I think my brain's going a little with each passing chapter . I'm glad that you think that I captured the mood well, that was partiularly difficult. And it doesn't matter if you only have one sentence in your feedback, I still love to here it (well....don't do that, because you'll get in trouble ). Again, thank you!

*drhpluvr4l

Oh, yeah, another chapter! This is so intense, I love it!

Yes! That's it exactly!! I love your description about how is a true Gryffindor and everything!! It fit him so well!

Yikes, Harry's reaction was expected, but still! Yikes! That'd be so scary to be Hermione and have to face him like that. But, then again, to be Harry would be awful too! I love all of your descriptions, they are so perfect! Severus acting angry to hid insecurity, Harry's expressions, and the Orders' reactions. Simply amazing. Well, I have to cut this short. But, don't worry about being a while between posts, just don't stop all together! And, yeah, this was deeper than the rest, but I really loved it!!

Silver Doe - Wow, I just posted it and you commented already! Kudos to you. "Intense"...I really like that word as a description of this chapter. I"m so glad you liked the Gryffindor part! I love writing that - it seemed so obvious to me that it had to be written down. I agree, yikes definitely fits the situation. I'd hate to be any one of the characters now, even members of the Order (I mean, first a battle...now Hermione and Severus?!). Anyways, thanks for commenting, I love hearing from you!

*drhpluvr4l

Better late than never!!

I have to say you caught me off guard with Hermione seeing Ron in Harry's mind. That would definitely be a blow to the mind and body. I wonder how long it will take Hermione to recover from this? Hmmm?

I wonder what Severus thinks of Hermione's description of him-Gryffindor! Hee hee.

Excellent work as usual. Can't wait for the next!

Laura

awh!!! what a sad ending to that chapter i thought!
you might have done that unintentionally but to me, it confirms that even though hermione didn't love ron in your story like she loves severus, it shows how much she cares about him and loves him as a friend! it's a shame harry doesn't realise that!
is that a hint of...what was it.. pity, remorse? from minerva...but who was it for? was it for hermione, that shes suddenly realises how hermione and snape truely love each other?(awh! they are so sweet together!hehe)
atleast everyone at the meeting didn't start arguing or shouting at severus once he finished the story! that would have made it a lot worse!
but harry! OMG!!!now he is angry! not surprising really! how is he going to show harry the truth eh? oo that could be a good part!
ooo and i agree i loved that gryffindor part! it really showed how different severus is to what everyone thinks about him!
well, i have to honestly say, that was another brilliant chapter and i can't wait for th next one! so please post is asap!!
and as much as i want to find out how this story ends..(hopefully it will be a happy ending..please but i don't want the story to finish too soon! i'm in such a pickle!so i guess i'm saying, finish it quickly so i can see the end! but NO don't finish it too fast,i dont want it to end!! haha! try and get yourself out of that complicated situation!!so finish it, but don't finish it please!)
looking forward to the next chapter!
kc
(p.s. sorry about that shallow bit i said about lupin, i knew what i meant i just didn't know what the right word was to use, i'm guessing it wasn't quite right..woopsie, forgive me?!? hehe)

LittleRed7771 - Better late than never, haha, that is going to have to be my life quote, since I am terminally late! Honestly, I think I caught myself a little off gaurd with that one, too. I hadn't planned on writing that, but sometimes my fingers type more than I plan, and I didn't completely realize what I had just written until Hermione was sitting on the couch. Creative minds, I guess . You'll just hae to wait for the answers to your questions to come up in later chapters! Thanks for commenting!

x_kc_x - I agree, that was a fairly sad ending, but I wanted it to be that way. And yes, I did do that on purpose - I sort of felt that we hadn't really heard much from Hermione about Ron in awhile, and I wanted to show that even though she's in love with Severus, there was a different kind of love between her and Ron that just fell apart with his death. You'll find out abotu Minerva in...I"m not sure possibly two chapters? And Harry, oh poor poor Harry, always the tempermental one. *Rubs hands together eagerly while planning his next outburst* Haha, just kidding. Don't worry, as I think I've said before, the story is at least 5 chapters from ending, but probably more. Thanks for posting! (P.S. - I wasn't offended by your use of the word "shallow", but thanks anyway!)

*drhpluvr4l

What a fantastic chapter! While reading I felt like I was on an emotional roller coaster ride alongside Hermione. Your descriptions are really starting to place me in her head.

The bottled up tension between Harry and Severus is finally being released. Oh how I hope that those two can work something out. Afterall, Ron's funeral is approaching! I'm not worried though because they are in good hands.

Keep up the excellent writing!

Ashley

Wow, Severus is so brave!! I cant believe he actually opened up like that! I like how Hermione thought that Gyriffindor (sp? i never knew how to spell that, lol) was the word that described him, that was brilliant. AHHHHH, Harry was so mad! Im on the edge of my seat again! Post soon!!!

workaholic_1231 - Ahh!! I love it so much when reviewers say they are so into it that they feel what the characters feel ! That's what writing's all about, anyway, I think. I'm glad you liked the chapter, as always, hahaha. And don't worry, I'll try to work everything out with these "good hands", but I can't promise anything . Anyways, thanks for commenting!

Ima_LoOnYLoVeGoOd - I love writing about the bravery in Severus through Hermione's eyes because I think I might be putting some of my own opinions in there. Fortunately, they work into the story very well, so I can't say that I'm damaging the story.....right ? Hmmm I don't know why, but your comments really prompted that thought, haha. I know, my mind is strange. I'm so glad that everyone enjoed the Gryffindor bit (and that's how you spell it, lol). Thank you for posting, and I'll update ASAP!!

*drhpluvr4l

drhpluvr4l, thank you for posting your last chapter so soon! And please accept my apologies for feedbacking so late, on the other hand. It is not that I did not like the chapter. Quite on the contrary, as it was again another chapter full of tension, action and well-depicted emotions which I loved reading. My delay was simply caused by the constant lack of time.

I am going to say some words about the characters this time because you manage to portray them in such a believable yet natural and easy manner.

What surprised me in your story the most this time was that Hermione contemplates the possibility of Severus being a Gryffindor (after having read all the other feedback I can see that I'm by far not the only one who likes it). Actually, when I read it for the first time, I thought the situation rather odd, but then I reread the paragraph and all of a sudden it all fitted together. The way you portray Severus throughout the whole story is really highly Gryffindor-like! It is really painful when you make your readers realize what all Severus is brave enough to do in order to prove his point and most importantly to save innocent people from danger. Though it puts him in a danger of mental hurt when he has to reveal his motivations; (I'm actually wondering whether it will come out in the end that he was yet again lying to the Order). You make him so brave and you are totally right when you say that a Gryffindor might have a brave heart but at the same time some negative traits to his personality. And that is a thing people sometimes keep forgetting when referring to the Gryffindors as simply the "good" ones and to Slytherins as to the "bad" ones. Your chapter just intensifies the fact that nothing is black or white and it gives another element of real life to the story and to the characters.

I really love what you do with Severus this time. I adore him being brave so explicitly! From the books we of course know that he is brave but always in a clandestine manner. And I would say that it favors his personality so much when he decides to show how brave he can be even in public.

My totally favorite two quotes from the whole chapter are:
and
The first quote is a great example of how minimalist yet extremely strong your story sometimes can become. In that one word there are so many emotions and unsaid words, but at the same time it is perfectly understandable what Severues means by it.
The latter quote, then, made me laugh out loud. I can only too well imagine Severus's reaction when he learns that one of his least favorite people on earth is descending to his own rooms. He must understand it as a huge breach of privacy. And acts of course accordingly and so much typically of himself. I must say that your portrayal of the characters is simply great. You make them so consistent in their approaches and so much believable. Really, for the hundredth time, well-done!

As for Hermione this time, I think she is a grown up woman now. I love when she is leaving the room with the Order members and has to pass each and every of them. The scene shows how determined and brave she can be. But this is a different bravery from the one she displays at the beginning of the story. At the beginning her actions are undoubtedly brave but at the same time rather rush and thus still adolescent-like. But now, you portray her as a confident young woman who plans what she wants to do and sticks to her plans and decisions. I think you manage to capture a certain development in her character. And this is always a sign of a good piece of writing.

And what really hurt me reading was your description of Harry. It is so painful to see him in the ragged clothes, dirty and so much physically exhausted. And in addition he is now so agitated! You manage to capture his state of body and mind so well. I could nearly see him while reading. Well-done! Actually, it seems to me as if with the entrance of Harry your story got another dimension, that of gravity, bleakness and sadness, of all of which Harry is an embodiment. And I think that it only too well illustrates the whole atmosphere of the final battle to which your story is heading.

My last remark is dedicated to Ron as I see it as a very good idea to dwell a little bit on him. After all, he was Harry's and Hermione's best friend and it is only natural that they are torn by his death. By remembering Ron you avoid the thing done by Ms. Rowling when, in the final book, she leaves the dead ones without being properly mourned, though they deserve it so much for their actions. So, thank you for remembering Ron.

Why is Harry attacking Severus? And don't tell me that Severus is not able or willing to protect himself properly? Or does he not defend himself in full strength because he knows he might hurt Hermione by any such action? So many questions and the answers to them still so many days ahead. In other words, I am eagerly expecting your next post

And as always, I wish you the best of luck with writing.

~Jana

Potions Mistress - haha, I think this is the longest post you've given, but it's one of my favorites of yours . I certainly don't care how often you post feedback - I'm just glad you post it at all! On that note, I'll try to comment on your comments for as much time as I have.

Upon reading what you wrote about Severus and Gryffindor, I had to reread my own chapter just to see if it was as good as you say it is (which I really think you are giving me much too much praise, haha). It was just one of those things I felt that had to be said for Severus, I always thought it was obvious that he was Gryffindor-like, but apparently it wasn't as obvious as I thought.

Honestly, I didn't think that those quotes were so...Severus-y for lack of a better word, until I read what you had to say about them. I guess I don't always realize why I put things in my story until someone else tells me ! I'm glad you caught the difference in Hermione. I thought it was an important thing to see her mature as she became more inovlved with such a mature man, and according to you, I guess I portrayed it ok! Thank you!

I know exactly what you mean about Ron and the other dead characters. I too was very much expecting more to be said about them than was actually in the final book. That was my main reason for bringing Ron back into the plot even though he's gone. I think it is much more realistic, also. As for your questions, let's see. Harry is angry with Severus because he is sort of "taking" his other best friend from him, not to mention he just plain hates him. No, Severus is definitely willing to defend himself, as you will see in the next chapter. I guess that's all I can say now - you'll have to wait for the next chapter, which I am over half-way done with. Thank you for posting, as always, and I'll update soon!

*Lex

That was by-far one of my favorite chapters! There was so many great things in it, i dont think i can even remember all of them!!!
here's a line that i rele liked:

I just rele loved those words describing their eyes! It rele envoked something in me, lol
Here's another:

Great description! That rele caught my attention and stuck in my memory!


Ahhhhh This shows how much he truly loves her That touched me And i rele liked how you described it with the words around her lips thing


Hehe, i just rele like the way you described that


Sorry, but when you say "His legs buckled" are you talking about Harry's or Snapes? That kinda confused me...


That also rele touched me Its another quote that rele shows that he truly loves her

Ok, sorry about all the quotes!
The tension between Harry and Snape is unbelievable! But i can understand, seeing as they've hated each other for 7 years. Poor Hermione! Now, Harry's mad at her. But hopefully her believes her now, or maybe he isnt as mad at her now tat she's shown him wat Her and Snape can do lol But anyway, I hope things work out!!! Cant wait to read more!! Post soon!

YAY!!! another brilliant chapter! i have to say i loved this one alot!!!
Harry actually listened to EVERYTHING hermione had to say(well eventually, after so many duels and a silencing spell !!)!!!
and not only that he's been forced to believe it because... well she proved it! hah!!
awh! poor hermione has really put so much on the line for all this! she is truely having a hard time! and i'm sure that time hasn't finished just yet! i would like to say that maybe the worst is over.. but we still have the battle to come! ow and i'm not looking forward to everything that happens during that! (but i am looking forward to the brilliant way i'm sure you'll write it!)
i have to say i absolutely adored the ending! he can't be without hermione! how amazingly sweet is that!
i love your endings to the chapters! sometimes theres a cliffhanger.. and others there's a beautiful line that reflects how much hermione and severus feel for each other! and i find it so beautiful!
so now... how are they going to prepare harry for the battle and duel between him n voldemort? and how will hermione teach it to him? well, i suppose he already has the "love" so he doesn't need to be taught that, he just needs to learn how to use it i guess... but doesn't he need someone to use it with?...(like hermione does with severus) so does that mean ginny will be getting involved maybe? or will he just use thoughts..ooo i wonder!
i can't wait for the next chapter! so post asap!
kc
p.s.take as long as you like to write it! i wouldn't want it to be rushed!(even though i'm sure it would be brilliant if it was!)
and i'd never be mad if it tooks ages to be written up! as long as you post it eventually i'm happy!
but once again i look forward to it!!!

Another great chapter! (of course)

The tension in this one was brilliantly written. I love that interaction between Harry and Severus! It follows Jo's writings perfectly, only with the fact that they're both older, and Harry has, at least some, self control.

I'm extremely curious about Severus 'leaving the room too soon'. Hmmm....

Well, I can't be mad at you for the delay... afterall, just look at how procrastinating I am when it comes to the same matter! Your timing is perfect, so you're allowed a week off.

Can't wait for more, and I send you some extra muses with the upcoming chapter!

Ashley

I loved the descriptive words you used in this chapter between Harry and Snape and Hermione and Snape. You could feel the emotion coming through the screen at all angles. Not that your writing wasn't good before, but it seems to be growing as the chapers keep coming. You left me wanting more as usual.

Don't worry about the delays...we know you'll post when you can. At least your posting updates regularly unlike someone I know. *coughAshleycough* LOL Just got to pick on you Ashley because it's been far to long since you updated. Hee hee.

Anyway, as usual, keep up the great work! Look forward to more.

Laura

Ima_LoOnYLoVeGoOd - ooh I'm so glad this was one of your favorite chapters! I don't have time to relpy to each one of those quotes, of course, but I was somewhat surpised as I read them again. Honestly, I didn't think those were particularly great ones, or maybe it's that it didn't take me long to think of most of them, besides the final one. I loved the ending when it came to me, and I was like "Yes! That's it!" Oh, and by the way, when I said "his legs buckeled", I was talking about Harry, since the spells that bound him had just released. And no, I don't care how many quotes you put into your feedback (that's actually my favorite part of reviews)! Thank you for posting your comments, and I will update soon!!

x_kc_x - Hahaha, I love your enthusiasm in your posts (I think I may have said that before, but it's so true)! I too am looking forward and yet not looking forward to the battle. I'm not sure why - probably because it will be a great task to describe it with justice, but it will be rewarding when I finish it. I am also very happy that you notice the endings of my chapters! I always spend a lot of time in writing the ending, because I think that sets up the want to read the next chapter. I think you'll just have to wait for the answers to your questions for later chapters ! And thank you for understanding about the time it takes to update. I love your comments!

workaholic_1231 - The "of course" made me smile quite a bit for being such an off-hand statement . I'm so glad that you think the interactions are following Rowling's writings - that is a high form of praise for me! And for seeing the tension beneath the lines...I think that is a main theme in this story - tension, since it is in almost every chapter (some more than others). I'm quite grateful that you aren't mad about the delays (and on that note, I do hope you update soon !) , and I am actually half-way done with the next chappie.It will be coming relatively soon, and I can't wait for some of those muses! Thank you!

LittleRed7771 - Hmmm, everyone seems to be saying that my writing is getting better and better with each passing chapter, and, upon re-reading the story, I am beginning to see that. In the beginning, I really wasn't that descriptive, but now I am playing out the emotion without even really thinking about it. Thank you very much for noticing. Oh, and I am very grateful to all of you who make it so clear that you understand about my time constraints, it really means a lot to me. As always, I love your feedback, thank you for posting!

*Lex

Wow, I've been away too long! I haven't gotten to this site in so long, I missed two of your chapters! I know it's sad, I'll try to do better! But, honestly, these chapters were amazing!! As usual, though! Yay, McGonagall is finally OK with them being together! It's nice to have someone on your side. So, how is Harry going to harness this power of love.....these next chapters are going to be really good, I can tell! Has anyone ever said that your writing just keeps getting better and better? You make it possible to, well,, how do I say this...get inside the characters minds, you know? You feel what they're feeling, you can imagine how they look and what's running through their thoughts. It's just really cool! Well, this short reply will have to do for now! Happy writing!

Hmmm...too much information? How can I answer that... Ummm...NO! That wasn't too much info at all. It seemed just perfect to me.

I really enjoyed Snape's memory section. It almost felt like I was reading it directly from the HP books themselves. I loved the details, and your choice of words was splendid.

Hooray for McGonagall finally understanding. That gives hope that others will as well. Unless you are just lulling us into a false sense of security? Hmmm...

Keep up the great work! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Laura

Wow, I just read like 6 chapters. I've been so busy that I haven't been able to read in a while. You are an incredible writer even though, I say again, that I am not a Snape/Hermione fan. Amazing story and I cant wait to read the rest. Now its time to finish my homework and go to bed!

Silver Doe - Do not in any way scold yourself for missing my chapters! I'm just happy that you read them at all!! I am so happy that you liked the chapters. Personally, this last one may have been my favorite, but then again the next few should be pretty good as well. Though, if you are comparing it to what I have been writing, the action scenes will probably be very different because they are...action scense, haha. I'm usually playing up the emotion and not the action, but we'll see how that plays out. And yes, I've been told that my writing gets better before, thank you so much for saying it again, though! I love how you described my story, it made me feel amazing. Once again, thanks!

LittleRed7771 - Hahaha, I'm glad that you don't think there is too much information. Personally I was really worried about that, because I know that I don't like it when I read things that seem too condensed. Aw, you really felt like you were reading forom the books when in Snape's memory? You don't know how good that makes me feel, to be even remotely compared to J K Rowling (who, by the way, is so many many times better than I). Oh, and don't worry, I'm not leading you into false security with McGonagall - even I couldn't do that to them . Thank you for posting!

hpgeek - Thank you! It means a lot to me when you say I'm an incredible writer even though you aren't a SS/HG shipper. That shows that you can see past the outward appearance and look at the actual writing - haha, it's a very good thing! And who knows, maybe by the end of the fic I'll convert you into liking Severus and Hermione! No, just kidding, I"m not writing this to try to force my ship upon others, only because it is so fascinating to write about. And speaking of homework... I have to get to that. Again, thank you for leaving feedback!

*Lex

YAY!!!YAY!!!YAAAY!!! another brilliant chapter!!!
i was feeling rather glum today...until i read your latest chapter!
and a very nice ending it had to it today!...but before i talk about that i want to say how pleased i am that severus opened up to hermione!
the memory!...how he loved lily! i always find that so very sad, to have loved someone and to never have felt the love back! but now...he has dear hermione to love him! and she does!
she said so! and i'm guessing they are hoping to get married after the battle!
hmm how very sad it would be if either of them died! i am hoping you won't kill either of them! although i could see a point where either of them could be near death OR they both loose the "connection" for a small amount of time and they think the other has died...or the can't find each other at the end, again thinking the other has died! now there you could create some form of cliffhanger and you could have everyone on the edge of there seats wondering what's happened to either severus of hermione!
as long as you don't kill either of them i'll be happy!
so please, please, PLEASE! don't kill severus OR hermione! i wouldn't be able to live with such a sad ending!!!
now on to the ending!..one word! BRILLIANT!!!
i knew macgonagol would come to her senses..you could tell her mind was changing in earlier chapters...the looks she gave hermione etc.
all she needed was proof, and a little shove in the right direction to see what hermione was feeling and she got there! she realised and apologised!
awh! so brilliant, so happy, so wonderful!
although the battle looms, getting ever closer!
finding out whether harry will live to tell the tale, whether voldemort will finally be vanquished... and will hermione and severus be together for the rest of there lives or will one of them be unkindly taken from the other, to leave them roaming the earth, alone, never to want to love again?...
well... i know the answer to those questions... wait and i'll find out!
so this means you'll just have to post the next chapter asap!..but don't finish the story too quickly, because i don't want it too end!
i look forward to the next chapter!...i always do!
can't wait!
kc

x_kc_x - I know I've told you this before, but I love the enthusiasm you show in the feedback! And you had some very good comments, so let's see.... I must say that I think that memory sequence was one of the most fun to write (well, not in the sense that Severus was suffering, but in the sense that it took a lot of imagination and emotion - my two favorite things!). I'm glad you enjoyed that. And yes, you are right about them planning on marrying after the battle! I'm surprised you were the first one to mention it, or maybe it was too obvious...or not obvious enough, haha.

As for your questions, you were right again: wait and you'll find out! You had some very creative ideas though, though I can't say which one I'm using (if any !). Hmm I really don't want to say anything else about that, as I'm not completely sure what I am actually doing there. I am in the middle of writing the battle, and I usually let my ideas wander, so I'll just let them and see where I end up! And for deaths...oh, how tragic that would be, but I might be sly and throw in something unexpected (cliffhangers=totally my thing). Don't worry, though, I couldn't bear making any more misery for them, once again...wait and see ! Well, I've said all I can say here. I will definitely post as soon as I can, and thank you so much for your comments!

*Lex

Hey I just finished reading the entire fic yesterday and I love it!!
Honestly I have read a lot of Hermione and Severus fics before and I have to say that this is one of my favorites. You capture the essence of each character really well and keep me on the edge of my seat with every post, not to mention the way you brought the past back to haunt the future was a true stroke of brilliance.

please post again soon

~Emz

Emz - Hello, welcome to this fic! I love it when new people start to read it (but I love it even more when they like it!). I'm honored that you think this is one of your favorite Hermione and Severus fics, because there are a lot out there.



^ I really liked the way you said that. I had never thought about it that way before, but I suppose that's what I am doing - bringing back the past to make the future a little more interesting. Anyway, thank you for your thoughts! I am just about one with the next chapter, so you'll be receiving that soon. Thanks for posting!

*Lex

You hit the nail on the head when you said, "Oooh, suspense." I'm not sure if I can wait another week to read an update. *sigh* But if I must, I will. Hee hee.

As I've said before, your writing keeps getting better and more detailed every post up make. The images in my head keep getting sharper and clearer as a result. Keep it up!

I look forward to your next installment. Could this be the end of LV? Hmmm... Ha ha...

Laura

okay, i've got a little story to tell myself... last night... in a land far, far away, (well okay it was last night for me and i don't know how far i am from you?) i was sitting at the PC about to come off the internet and go to bed! when a thought struck me! "I no lets see if theres been an update to that amazing SS/HG story" you see, i had this tiny little nagging feeling that i should check, and low and behold once the page was loaded theres the new post for "That Which Does Not Hurt Us, Only Makes Us Stonger" i couldn't believe it! AND i checked literally minutes after it what posted! how odd was that?!?! so i printed it off quickly, got into bed and read it straight away! i couldn't wait till now to read it, i had to read it there and then!! i mean i couldn't go a whole day at college, knowing theres a new chapter but not being able to read it till i got home! i wouldn't have been able to live with myself!

anyway, to the story!!! how CAN you leave it at that! i don't think i can wait a week either!!! everything that has been written is all leading up to one moment in time! WILL HARRY DESTROY VOLDEMORT! and along with that comes the point, WILL HERMIONE AND SEVERUS SURVIVE!... i'm holding on to the idea that you wouldn't be too cruel or evil and you, yourself would want them both to live! so i'm holding on to the fact you wouldn't to kill them off! well i've just got to wait a week! honestly, talk about torturing someone!!!
looking forward to it sooo, sooo, sooo very much! please post ASAP!(within a week would be even better! )
can't wait!
kc (for future reference, kristie )

p.s. yes, you have told me on a number of occasions that you love my enthusiasm, that is one reason why i keep it up! but i do truely love your story! and what better way to show it than giving you a wonderful bit of feedback! full of excitement about what could happen next! so continue in letting your mind wander, because that seems to yield some great results in the story!
OH and what better way to create a huge amount of suspense by finishing the chapter with
until next time!

Laura - Hehehe, I love suspense! I don't like making people wait for updates, though (trust me, I hate waiting myself!), but it's just that I have so many things going on. I'm actually very surprised I can post as often as I do. I get so built up whenever someone tells me my writing is getting better . I"m so very hapy that you can really see the images in your head - that's what I'm going for. the next chpater is sure gonna be a good one! Can't wait until I post it to see what you guys think. Anyways, thank you for the feedback!

Kristie - Your story made me laugh . Want to know why? Becuase I had been seriosuly debating posting that chapter that night or not. I almost didn't, but then I thought "hey, what if someone wants to read it tonight?" Haha, I guess women's intuition is always right! Anyways, I am really sorry about ending it with such a cliffhanger (well, no, I'm not sorry I put the cliffhanger, I'm just sorry that you guys don't like it . I just love suspense!) As I said before, I can't really say what I'm planning, and even now it is still not official. It won't be official until probably tomorrow night when I type up that scene. Don't worry, though, no matter what happens, I will make sure everything turns out all right . Thank you for your thoughts!

*Lex

P.S. - I abosutely LOVED that last line. When I thought of it I was like, "That's it!!!" I'm glad you liked it!

Major gasp!! For two reasons: (1) It's taken me wayy to long to review the last two chapters, and (2) Cliffhangers!!!

I agree, there would be no better last line for chapter 25.

The detail you've put in the battle scene is epic. As I read, I pictured the scene to a tee.
The emotion is amazing, and the characters are perfect.

I'm practically dumbfounded at the level of excelence this story has reached.
Just to let you know, I've made this story my Fic Pick of the Week' again over at Portrait of Insomnia.

Keep it up! I promise I won't dawdle so long between the next post!

Ashley

workaholic_1231 - first of all, don't even worry about how long it takes you to review. I know what it's like to be busy. Second of all - thank you! I am sooo unbelieveably happy that you thought the battle scene was so descriptive. I was actually extremely worried about it, because I didn't think it was vivid enough. That's one of my major problems; I know what is happening at a certain part in my head, but I have to work very hard to make sure it is that clear to the readers, also. Apparently I did a good job, though ! Now that I've posted, I'm ecstatic that I did make the last line "He is here." I couldn't think of anything better.

Finally, I am blushing from your praise of my fic. Your words have brought me oh so much confidence in my storytelling (which has been getting better and better since I decided to start this fic). I am honored that you picked my story to be your Fic Pick of the Week again! Once again, thank you so much. I'll post the next chappie as soon as I can.

Everyone- I just wanted to say (in case any of you are looking here) that I am not sure how long it will be for the next chapter. I'm not very far *hangs head in shame*, and to top it all off, there is homecoming tonight. I've been running around all week trying to get everything settled, so after tonight I will be more free to write. Please be patient with me, I'll make it worth your while.

*Lex

That chapter was amazing (as always, lol)!!!! You described every emotion, feeling, and surrounding so well!!! The battle has begun! AHHH! I hope harry can pull of the love thing!! What is Voldy planning to do!! And the last line was amazing also! lol Cliffhangers... ya love 'um, ya hate 'um. lol. Cant wait to read more, take your time to post, but i hope its soon! lol

Ima_LoOnYLoVeGoOd - Thank you for leaving feedback, your comments are great (as always, haha)! Once again, I am so ecstatic that everyone thinks I described everything well. I know I've said it before, but that is one of the things I am most meticulous about in my wrtings. Lol, you summed up cliffhangers very well, I'm glad you liked the last line! As I am typing this I have another Word document open and I am writing the showdown with dear old Voldy , so I hope to have that up for everyone as soon as I can. Once more, thank you for posting!

*Lex

AHH!!! Sorry I haven't reviewed in such a long time... I have been really busy and I just read this chapter about 5 mins ago.

Anyway, that was a really good chapter. It was extremely exciting and I really liked the fast pace. I can't believe Harry and Severus are going to have to do that love thing together!! That is going to be awesome! Well, I can't wait for the next chapter I really hope it is up soon!!!

Lex, shame, shame, shame on me! You have posted such beautiful chapters and I got to reading and reviewing them only now. Well, but at last, here I go.

Chapter 23
I really love the way you write; how skillfully you can balance the amount of tension and action in this chapter. And as I’ve already said earlier, your writing gets better and better with every new chapter.

I really like the picture of Harry and Severus dueling, or rather how they are so eager to beat one another and just can’t wait for the one to give another the slightest pretext for a hex. Actually, this very chapter reminds of "Occlumency" chapter in OotF. When at the beginning of it, Severus and Sirius face each, their wands drawn ready to strike. But in the book it is Harry who finally flings himself in between them to prevent them for any fights. I really love the image you've created.

But what really makes this chapter for me is Hermione and her actions. You make her so brave and selfless. Though both Harry and Severus are capable of altruistic deeds, when it comes to dealing with one another, they forget everything else, see red and their only motivation for actions is to hurt the other. I like that Hermione, despite being terribly distressed and saddened, is still able to act in such a cool and matter-of-fact way. And what I simply adore about her is the way you describe Severus sees her.

or


And poor poor Severus, again.


PS: Reading through other people’s feedback on that chapter, I can see that majority of what I’ve written here, including the quotes, has already been mentioned by the others. Sorry, for the repetition, I just wanted you to know what I think about the chapter. And it also proves how good your writing has become!

Chapter 24
Oh Lex, what are you doing to your readers? You should have warned us about the dangers in this particular chapter. I didn't mind the new information in it, and I certainly don't think there was too much stuff. But I definitely was not ready for the Godric’s Hollow episode. I am positively convinced that this part is your best descriptive piece of writing yet. It was so highly elaborate with many details, beautiful, sensitive and intensive. Maybe it's just the autumn mood I am in at the moment, but while reading this part I felt the well-too-known burning sensation behind my eyes. It was so well-written and so moving! For the hundredth time, well-done! And the suspense with which you introduce the memory - three whole paragraphs! Really, my favorite part from your whole story yet.

It's completely impossible to pick the best quote from the memory passage, as I would have to quote the whole of it, but I think the following are really great,

and


On the other hand, and now I hope you don't mind, there are parts in the chapter which I don't like much. One of them simply doesn’t suit with the mature Hermione any more. I’m talking about the hug Hermione gives McGonagall. You have pointed out many times that Hermione has matured with Severus immensely, and I definitely agree with you, so I think it would be more appropriate for her to appreciate McGonagall's apology in a more subtle way. You know, it's just a suggestion. But then, I am so happy McGonagall understands them and admits to her mistake.

The second part which I see just a little over the top is Hermione saying/thinking to Severus how much she loves him. I am perfectly aware that your story is also a romance and such lines are simply inevitable. I just think there might have been another way of putting it. I'm sorry, I really do hope that you don't mind me saying it.

Actually, at one moment it seemed to me that in the paragraph both their voices are being heard, which of course, would change my opinion of this part considerably. That Hermione starts it

and Severus finishes it,

But this, I suppose, is only my reading something which in reality is not in the text, right? But being it the way I read it, it would be a perfect way of showing how Severus and Hermione are connected, with their ideas being voiced one after another without any breaks in between. Sorry again, just a suggestion.

But on the whole, this is a very good chapter (yet again) and the Godric’s Hollow episode makes up for any minute flaws in it.

Chapter 25
I really like the opening paragraphs of this chapter. They are so intense, and honestly, I trembled with expectation reading them. It is a funeral service, so everyone and everything is so calm, serene and tranquil, but then there is this undercurrent of tension and anticipation. Two such different things and yet you manage to combine them so well and create the atmosphere of the scene.

For me, the whole scene is represented by this image,


And then the actions! You really make your readers see and feel the turmoil of the fights, with all the spells being cast in every possible direction and the sounds resounding everywhere.

I like that you play with the idea of love. That not only the intimate love between Severus and Hermione is powerful, but also other kinds of love, such as the deep friendship between Harry and Hermione, are capable of the magic. I would say the whole love concept is very original idea.

As for this part,

I know that Severus sees his help as a sacrifice from his side, but then on the other hand, he can still look once again into Harry's eyes. They might remind him of the love of his life and then it wouldn't be such a sacrifice any more, because it would be as if he was performing the magic along and for Lily and not with Harry. I'm really keeping my fingers crossed for this solution, as you've mentioned earlier that Severus hasn't looked into Harry's eyes for a long time, so maybe not it is time. I know, I will have to wait and see, right?

And just by the way, I envy you your discipline with the "one post per week" thing - I will have to work on this scheme a bit myself as my posting habits are simply inexcusable.

Keep writing and posting as your story is simply great!

And…ehm…sorry, for the length, but as double posts are not allowed I had to squeeze the three chapters into one post. Sorry, once again.

~Jana

lancelot243 - Hey, don't even worry about how often you post - I'm just glad you do it at all! I'm very happy to hear that you enjoyed the fast pace of the chapter. I am constantly worried that I am moving TOO fast...or too slow. And I will do my very best to make the showdown "awesome" . In fact, I hope to post the next chapter today or tomorrow! Thanks for commenting!

Potions Mistress - what can I say, what can I say? I so look forward to reading your reviews! *Rubs hands together excitedly* I'll reply to what I can, now, though there is so much (and I love that!) First of all, after reading your replies, I had to go and reread those three chapters so it would be fresh in my mind .

When you compared the duel between Harry and Severus to the one between Severus and Sirius in OotP, I realized that I completely did not make that connection. I guess it's one of those things that your do subconciously. Ah, and I too really enjoyed writing about Hermione the way I did in that particular chapter. And I never get tired of hearing those quotes, for they were my favorites. Oh, but the last one it made me want to cry for Severus as I wrote that one.

I am honored that you think the scene in Godric's Hollow was my best writing so far! I am pretty sure that that was also my favorite thing to write so far. It seemed like something that could have actually happened, and exploring his emotions at that time was close to exhilarating. And I certainly don't mind you pointing out things you didn't like too much - that helps me! I see your point with the hug thing. I think while I was writing, I was picturing her to be so extremely happy that she couldn't help retrogressing to a childlike thing, even for a moment. But I do think you are right.

Hmm...I looked through the story and I don't think I know the line you are talking about when Hermione tells Severus she loves him, other than the part where they are hugging which you pointed out. I applaud you for inferring what I was intending in that part - Hermione starting, and Severus finishing, yet neither truly speaking or completely thinking. I loved that particular part.

As I have said before, I was very worried about the last chapter. I thought it wasn't descriptive enough, too rushed, just altogether not my best effort, but apparently I was wrong . Ah, thank you for remembering the love concept and acknowledging it. That was one of those things that I had never planned for the story; I never was intending on making that he central theme, but it just took off (not that I'm sorry it did)! But that is all I can say for now. I don't want to tell you about the next chapter, but it seems like you've got a grasp on my creative mind, anway! Haha, speaking of the one-post-per week thing, I need to go and finish the next chapter. I expect it to be up extremely soon.

Once again, thank you for posting!

*Lex

Oh, what a wonderful chapter. I felt so bad for Severus when he thought Hermione had been killed. I love this

I can't wait to see how this ends, but at the same time it makes me sad that there won't be much more. You are such an awesome writer. I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

And oh what a climax it was! Great job as usual. You had me worried there for a little bit, though. I was getting fearful that Hermione might not come back... but she did! Do I hear wedding bells in the future?

I'm looking forward to seeing how you decide to wrap things up. I know whatever you do, it'll be great.

Laura

Lex, I have to say that with this chapter you've really done justice to the story's climax. This being the near ending of the two main story lines - that of Harry/Voldemort and Severus/ Hermione - I as a reader had had high expectations about it. And I must say that you've done beautifully!

What I'm particularly fond of in this chapter is the way you handle the Dark Lord. You do so very well throughout the whole chapter; from his appearance (by the way, I love the wind imagery and the way he keeps disappearing - it is so menacing), through the actual duel accompanied by highly believable dialogues, to his very end.

And I'm happy I was right with Severus looking into Harry's eyes while performing the love magic. What again caught me nearly on the verge of tears was when you refer to Harry's eyes as Lily's. On the one hand, it is so moving to see that Severus still perceives the eyes as Lily's, and then it only shows how much you've matured in terms of using literary devices. Your work with the characters' perspective and point of view is really very good.

Have I already told you that you are good at setting the pace of the story? I think I have, but anyway, I can say it again. I like how you make Severus move ever so slowly towards Hermione to join her and thus away from the Death Eaters and the Dark side in general. The action is so slow but at the same time it perfectly illustrates Severus's gradual revelation of his true and final alliances.

And Severus.. oh, our good old Severus. When you make him resists the Imperius curse, you show how strong he actually is. And this line,

simply made me laugh; it so nicely eases the growing tension. You know, I really very much like when you voice Severus's inner thoughts. It adds such complexity to his character. One of the strongest elements of this whole chapter, at least for me, is this:

Everyone who cares for Severus at least a bit must be touched. Your work with words is so good.

There are so many details I would like to mention, but then I don't want to bore you to death, so just quickly. This is a beautiful example of foreshadowing and I’m pretty sure you haven't used this device much yet,

It is a really useful device, and you make most of it when you present the person first as a voice then as a speaker, then you reveal it is actually a woman and only in the next sentence you say it's Hermione. This might look like a tiny insignificant detail, but believe me, such things make up good stories.

Out of the whole chapter, the most intensive part for me is when Severus and Harry actually, and at last (how long have we been waiting for this to happen even in the books?) act as one,

This is the image I would love to read in the books. So thank you for creating it.

Well, and this one,

was simply an icing on the cake. In one word, beautiful.

Great job, Lex! I don’t have to tell you to post soon because I know you will. And I'm so much looking forward to it; to learn how the story will continue, yes, but primarily to your style as it has really improved so much!

Ups.. another longish review. Hope you don’t mind.

~Jana

This is just what my day needed! I good, satisfying chapter from you and your amazing story!
the start of it was brilliant! How could something so gentle as wind, bring something so evil! But i suppose all big storms begin with the calm, and soft breeze don't they?
And I deffintaely liked the part when no-one knew where Voldemort was, and therefore the part when Harry showed up! Oh and when Hermione showed up! with there lines and everything! I would put in the quotes... but... sorry, it takes too long!
And you used the " they loose the "connection" for a small amount of time and they think the other has died"! I knew you wouldn't kill Hermione, but you can't help but think! "Oh No, Please don't be dead!"
Then the bit when Severus was imperiused! It truely showed how strong Severus truely is!
And like Hermione said
She was brought back by love! the love for her!
But I love the way Voldemort was destroyed! Destroyed by his biggest fear!
I'm totally looking forward to the next chapter! they should be getting married shouldn't they? I'm sure that one will be written just as well as this one! I have to say that this chapter was written exceptionally well! I only wish I was this good at English(and I'm from england!) and then maybe I would have had a little bit of a better english GCSE result! But i've never been good at languages! not even my own!
so again! it was a wonderful chapter! i loved it!
kristie!
p.s. sorry i haven't been as enthusiastic as usualy, my brain seems to have been turned to mush! i wish i could have written more, but i can't concentrate anymore! sorry!
looking forward to the next chapter! can't wait! yay!

This chapter was amazing Lex! I felt like I was placed inside of Severus' head for most of it, and for the rest it felt like I was following him; picturing every detail of what was going on around him. Your detail was perfect, and I'm extremely impressed.

The fact that the end is nearing frightens me. On June 22nd when you first posted, I was the first one to review, and to see this story come to and end makes me want to crawl through the screen and hug you! It's been a great ride, and I look forward to more!

Ashley

Oh, wow everybody, this feedback is so awesome !!! I can't describe how much I love coming over to the computer and reading your thoughts. All right, well I don't have as much time as I'd like to review, but I'll do the best I can.

zwillo - I loved that part also - I mean, there are certain parts in a chapter that I really like, and others that I don't like, but I definitely liked this part. Thank you very much for you thoughts; it means alot that you think I'm an awesome writer. I think I will be sad, too, when the end comes, so I'll be sure to prepare you for it .

Laura - Hahaha, I am actually glad to herar that I had you worried for a bit, because that tells me that I built up the suspense well! That part was challenging to write, I mean the parts where Severus thinks she is dead, but altogether interesting. And don't worry, you'll find out about wedding bells soon enough . But thank you for your comments, and I will do my very best to make teh following chapters up to these standards.

Jana - I don't maind at all about the lengthy review, I just hope you don't mind that I don't have the time to reply to all of it, but I'll try. Let's see...Iam so beyond ecstatic that you thought Voldemort's character was believeable, and that I handled the climzx well. Also, there were some parts that you mentioned that I had not realy thought about while writings, such as the "towards and away" and the "voice and speaker." I think that says that I'm a much better writer than I thought (most likely not), or that you are a fantastic literary analyst (very likely ). Oh, my very favorite quotes from the whole chapter, you pulled out - the second and the last ones you mentioned. I think that this may have been my favorite entire chapter to write, but it'll be hard to follow up! Thank you, as always!

kristie - aha, you caught my wind analagy - the calm before the storm; in this case, the calm wind before the huge battle. Oh, and again, I'm pleased to hear that you were a little worried for Hermione there - I guess I covered that a bit better than I thought I had. And trust me, I am really not good with English. I have horrible slang, and my speaking had much to be desired - things just fall into place on paper. If you set your mind to it, you can be much better at English than I. Anyways, thanks for commenting!

ashley - oh, I so love your feedback when you tell me you feel like you can picture everything! As I"ve said before, that shows I'm doing the right things as an author. And believe me, the thought that the end is coming is seriously scaring me too. I remember the first time I put pen to paper for this, and now 26 chapters later it's almost done! Thank you so much for sticking with it so long, and I hope you'll continue to like the final chapters. Thanks!

*Lex

Woe, that was amazing. That chapter really blew me away, the way that Harry and Snape finally managed to come together to beat Voldemort. I loved it!! Man, I really thought Hermione was dead, I am really glasd you did not kill her, and I can't wait to see how this fic ends!!