Hey !

If you haven't already read it, here is my fanfic !

Forbidden Kisses

Let Rip !

Ill be glad to know what you think of it !


- ginny

I think it is an interesting fan fic with a nice cliffhanger end!. The only small critiscism I have is, the building up romance between Harry and Gnny seems abit abrupt and sudden. Other than that it's really good! I'm really looking forward to the next update and how Ron reacts!

A totally different approach to things.

I never would have come up with such an idea for that you should get a prize!
Hope you contiune writing and finish the story. It is lovely

Thanks for the reviews ! They made me smile !

If you want me to send you a message when i post a new chapter, 'send me an owl' and ill send you a message and the link !

- ginny

We all saw the ron reaction coming. If you didn't well tehn maybe you sould read the real sixth book because it is very ovbuios that would happen but i like how harry promises to be there for ginny and how you actually have more to harry than his feelings for ginny, like him feeling the pressure of being the chosen one and all
well until later
Erin

writin'is4me
in answer to her feedback i would just like to say, i have read the 6th book several times, and i did put a note in saying we all know ron's reaction was predictable, but i was debating wether to have Ronbe accepting but then i thought no. i included that part about harry telling ginny he'll always be there for her because i think there is a lot more to the charracters than Jk shows, plus it becomes fairly important to my story.

anyway Thanks for the feedback!

Thanks for the feedback everyone! ill probly be updating all week so keep checking back !

if anyone has any ideas feel free to say !

Hey! This is really good! I like it, even if it is just 3 chapter so far. I think it has a lot of potential. I loved the part with them playing Quidditch, it was so cute! This is very good, and I cannot wait for some more chapters! I am a huge Harry and Ginny shipper, and your story is very interesting, like how it's their 6th year. I like it!
DD's-man-through-and-through

i like the new chapter and i love that sirius is alive (yippeee!!!) and i guess like all the harry ginny story it can't all be love and romance and as a friend i think harry is doing the right thing but as a girl i have to say i think he didn't think this through... but anyways
tell later
Erin

QUOTE

“Thank you for saving me Harry.”

How sweet!!! That was cute, I loved this chapter! What is Harry going to do?? Well anyways, yay!!! Sirius is alive, and well! I'm glad! I miss Sirius! Well, please post more soon!

*Breanna*

Yeah! You updated! Why doesn't Ginny just break up with Dean? Wouldn't that just solve half of the problem? Well, another great post! I especially liked the ending! Okay, now that is 3 reveiws so you better post! Lol, nice story!
DD's-man-through-and-through

Keep on writing a great story. I can't wait to get more. You hit the character well. It is as if you knew every character's personality. Why don't you include some R/Hr stuff?

Great story!

Wow, I have never seen or read anything about a Hermione and Sirius having a relationship. I have to admit it was very surprising when I read that, I thought for sure it was Hermione and Ron! Okay, I can not get that out of my head, it's so strange! But I like it, don't worry! Yeah! Harry and Ginny are together...for now, at least. So, I wonder who those two unhappy people are. Nice chapter!
DD's-man-through-and-through

A lovely story! it is completely refreshing in comparision to all the seventh year fics( as mine is). Your story runs favorite next to Paddfoot, Prongs, and Moony's L/J story. I hope you contiune writting.
I can#t wait for the next chapter!

wow ! thanks for alll the reviws everyone.

I thought i would just give some information that is fairly important in my fanfic.

Uncle John. Remmeber him ? He has nothing to do with the plot. I just used him so Ginny and Harry would share a room.

SLeping arrangements when Hermione and Sirius showed up.

Ginnys Room: Ginny and Harry

Ron's Room: Ron and Uncle John

Bill and Charlies Room: Bill anmd Fleur

Fred and Georges Room: Sirius and Hermione

Percy's Room: Remus and Tonks
beacuse of the timing as they arrived that is where they ended up all sleeping.
it certainly explains the Sirius/Hermione ...

Just thought i'd add this ! Well thanks again for the reviews!

-ginny

Wow, Ron is a pratt. I'm glad he didn't act like that when they got together in the 6th book, or I would have had to beat him up. . So is Ron threatening her? That seems totally un-like him. Poor Ginny, I don't know why she is lying but I am dying to find out so just post the next chapter! PLEASE!
DD's-man-through-and-through

Hey just to say i've just re-wrote chapter 7 part 2.

I didnt actully plan for most of it to happen, but as i was sat writing this, i got idea's.

HINT
Two people Kiss.

I want two more reviews before i post it though!

So get your fingers typing and thanks to everyone for such great reviews - they made me smile !

- ginny

omg, omg, omg, omg, omg!!!!!!! that did not just happen sirius and hermione are not making out!!! that is so not right, poor ron. this is not supposed to happer. god hes like as old as her parents, oh god dirty!!!!!

Chapter 7 part two is up.

Harry did say it was against the law didn't he ?

I couldn't resist adding a Hermione/Sirius so i am very sorry if i have offended any people

-ginny

Ummm... it was OK... their relationship was a bit abrupt, you could have done other events leading up to their romance, all in all, it was good... poor Ron though...

This is a wild **** guess but could it be that Ron is under the Imeprius curse or somebody is an imposter to Ron.
I think number one that he would never threaten his "baby sister" and number two Hermione cried because of him. So write on soon can't wait to read more!

i really think the whole hermione and sirius thing was freakin hilarious, it was just very surprising, i wonder how it all started. oh poor ron!!

What the heck? I don't understand why Ginny is doing this? Ughh, it's making me so annoyed! Why would shi kiss Dean if she still liked Harry? And why is Ron acting like that? Post soon, I need to figure all this out.
DD's-man-through-and-through

Wow awesome story!! I really like the original way of making Harry and Ginny get together!! Very cool And Sirius is okay!!!!! YAY!!!!! You fic is really good, please post soon!!

Okay, I'm about ready to jump in your story and beat up Ron. He threatened Hermione and Sirius? That's taking it a bit far. Aww, now I feel bad for Ginny, what could Ron have said to her? Oooh, they will probably meet in the Room of Requirement to get away from Ron. Please, post really really soon! I love your story!
DD's-man-through-and-through

I can't believe Ron is such a prat!!!!!!!!!! I want to punch him.... okay, so I obviously get that Ginny likes Harry since they kissed haha, and then Ron is a prat (duh) because he broke up Hermione and Sirius... loser.... haha. I love your story!!! Post soon!!!

wow ron becomes a bad guy didnt think of that but its great
i really love it pls. continue and finish it

I know the meaning behind the title: Harry and Ginny want to be together but have to be in secret so that Ron won't find out, and they try not to like each other so that Ron won't get mad, so it is forbidden to be with each other. Either that or Hermione and Sirius, Ron wants Hermione but Hermione wants Sirius, so it's forbidden that way also.

That was really good, that you had Harry be mad like that, 'cause if he just gave in easily then who knows what could have happened... This story makes me hate Ron (which is fine ) Ron is the biggest prat in the WORLD!!! Man, braking up Hermione and Sirius and then threating Ginny and Harry's relationship... But what does Ginny want to tell Harry but think that he will get mad?? Well you please tell us soon so that the suspense won't be the death of us?? I love your story, it is very well writen!!! Please post soon!!

Here is my guess on why it is called Forbidden Kisses- Well, Harry and Ginny love each other, but Ron won't allow them to be together. And to make sure they don't get together he threatened to tell Harry something that Ginny did in the past. But they can't stay away from each other and they meet in secret (haha kind of like Tristan and Isolde, best movie in the world, have you seen it?) I'm guessing they will meet in the Room of Requirement. This story totally reminds me of Tristan and Isolde, forbidden love, so forbidden kisses. Great chapter, post soon! If you haven't seen that movie, I suggest you do! It's my favorite movie!
DD's-man-through-and-through

Hi! I read the story, and here is what I think! As for Sirius and Hermione, wow. That really freaks me out, no offense. I mean it doesn't make sense why Remus wouldn't be in the same room as Sirius, and Hermione with Tonks? That would make more sense, but It could make a Remus/Sirius thing happen Lol. But It's your story. That is just weird. Becasue I can't help but feel that Sirius is like a dad to Harry, and Hermione like a sister to Harry, so yeah... But I loved how Harry protected Hermione, that's sweet!

Hmm, I can see Ron threatning Sirius, but Hermione and Ginny?? I dunno. And as for H/G, I'm a huge shipper! But I agree with Harry. What the heck is Ginny doing? She needs to pick Harry or Dean, most likely Harry. She can't just play Dean along like that. She can't go kissing Harry when she's with Dean. I've never been upset with Ginny like this before. Lol. That sounds really weird for me... (Ginny is my name)... And I hope Ron stops threatning people. And Hermione and Sirius figure this out. I mean it is illegal. Seems unlike Hermione to do somthing illegal. But then again the heart wants what the heart wants. But I hope she makes the right choice.

I have no idea about the title, although I'm leaning towards the whole Hermione/Sirius situation... But I dunno. As for this story, I hope I didn't come off rude, or harsh. I like the plot, definately original. And I can see a lot of potential. I like your writing and can see some real talent. And I love the idea of Sirius being alive. I was so-so sad when he died in book 5. I got tears all over the book. Him alive is awesome! Once again, sorry if I seem harsh, I can be opinionated... Great Job! I'm looking forward to reading more!

Pottie Peace,
Xx-Ginny-xX

P.S.- This might be one of my longest reviews! I had a lot to say! Lol...

Your writing is nice and creative, I love it! Ron IS a prat, if he's going down, everyone else does. By the way, I think it's called Forbidden Kisses because I don't think they're even supposed to be kissing, they're like cheating or something. Ginny's cheating on Dean, and Harry is cheating Ron's friendship by kissing her. Anyway it's just a guess...

RON-IS-A-PRAT!!! Yet, I can't believe the next post is the end. it was so well written and sweet. I loved it all, it was so sweet. Though - Hermione and Sirius - was a little weird for me but I love this plot line. Post soon!
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Next chapter is the end?!?!?! Oh well, good things must come to an end, I haven't read the Deathly Hallows yet because my parents are still reading it...

The Moonlight Kisses, I checked it and it's still the same, Ron was forced to watch Harry and Ginny, what do you mean by it's finished? Like they locked the topic or something? Just wondering, but about me not reading the 7'th book, it's ok. The anticipation is part of the pleasure (of reading that is).

Amazing writing and write some more, your the only one helping me to keep it together until I can read DH.

this was good!
WHAT DID THEY DO? did they really deleted your Remus/Sirius fics. they were so good
well I understand you when you say that the next one is the last. every story has to end just like mine, only don't do it as cruel as I did
I still have to wait until my book arives. I'm longing for 'Deathly Hallows' that stupid bookshop didn't had my book in time and now it has to come all the way from England pfff(Ok I maybe asked a little much because they had the childrens edition and I wanted the adult edition so it would look better next to my other one, I'm such a Brat )
thanks for this story it helped me getting over the day because I read all of my Grandma's pulp novels and nothing was left. but tomorow I'll get my book (well I hope for the bookshopkeeper becaus eif she hasn't got it jet she'll pay!) and then 10 hours of Chips, coke and book and I'll be no longer a Harry potter outlaw. but whatever that's my problem
I'm seeing forward to your next chapter.

Greetings,
Rox

A bit strange, i'm not used yet to the idea of hermione/sirius love story but i'm keen to find out what's going to happen to harry and ginny

I didn't expect this from ginny because she is always the one who doesn't care about ron's talking and now...this. a twisted end. very good

Harry should had talk to gonny about dean and the forgiving was too short yet I don't understand ron but Iìm still reading

are forbidden loves in the story, harry and ginny because of ron being such a pratt and sirius and hermione, the difference of age and it's against the law. that's my opinion
p.s. at the finish of the story please tell us the reason of the title!

hey,

Ron is a LEWZER!!! he's anoying and a jerk! trying to split up his (ex)bestfriend and sister it's like my brother only Ginny didn't try to kill him like I did
fantastic ending! I just loved it
I really really loved your ending (much better than mine 'dead main character' )

I hope you'll post your new story soon

Greetings Rox

Forbidden Kisses.

Finite Incantateum =( Finished.

Oh Well.

I have two brand NEW fanfics if anyone is interested!

Pressure
How does Harry deal with been the wizarding saviour?
(one chapt. at moment)

AND

The New Marauder's!
Harry's son James restarts the Marauder's with his own group of friends! =P Chaos. Ginny annoyed. Harry trying not to laugh.

Hope you all enjoyed Forbidden Kisses, i know i did!

-ginny

[size=7][color=#FF0000][b][i][u]now i know that the all good things come to an end is true.pls write more fan fics coz u are a great writer. you could become famous with these!!y dont you write a book about harry after the war you can call it harry potter and the days after war!!!!anyway you can write a fanfic about lily and james childhood that would be a good fanfic

OMG i cant belive that u have made hermiony and sirious kiss it was so unexpected and omg i couldnt stop laphing at the image of them kissing but apart from that upto that part its ace and i will keep on reeding and once again OMG OMG OMG OMG

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yes its absoluterly fab

awww that fanfic was soo sweet and good! you had me wishing it was longer! but it was still absolutley amazing!

soo im gonna read your other fanfic pressure, and im positive it will be just as good as this fanfic!
Great writing, and keep it up! lol

XOXO
katie <3

That fanfic was so sweet. I loved it completely it was cute and I'm going to read one of your other fanfics. Actually I'm going to read all of your fanfics because this one was amazing.

Cheers

Namra