Hi!

If you haven't already read my fanfic here is the link.
This is my oneshot and i don't know wether to continue!

I would realy like to know what you think and if i should continue it or not!

thankyou for the feedback !

-ginny

YES! You should continue with it! It is too good to be left at a one-shot! Also we don't get to see what happens when the person finds them....is it Ron??

*Breanna*

You're kidding, right? Of course you're going to continue it!! Don't stop there, it was really sweet and cute and...I really like it! Stupid Ron (if that is him) it probably is him. He should just let them be together. And stop being so annoying when ever he sees them kiss. Or I guess it could be another Weasley, but it sounds like Ron. Please continue this story!
DD's-man-through-and-through

One thing I don't get is why not go on? It is as great as Forbidden kisses. Best case that could happen to me would be if you finish both stories! I can't wait to read more. The Third story I got addicted to. Go on and never stop writing!

You guys all seem to think it's Ginny and Harry. In the fanfic, didn't the boy look into "pools of emerald", or some such? Ginny's eyes are brown (I think).

I think it's Lily and James and Sirius (or perhaps Severus) walks in on them.

Yes continue it! You can't leave us hanging on who it was that walked in!?!

~Darkwort

Whoops! Reading it again, I guess it is Harry and Ginny.... heh heh....
~Darkwort

Good News Guys! I'm going to contine it after such positive feedback!

Just to confirm, it was about Harry and Ginny! I don't know why but i'm addicted to writing Harry/Ginny fanfics when im actully a bigger fan of ships like Hemione/Sirius and Lupin/Sirius.

So, yes i shall continue, though i will have to change the way its wrote, ill have to mention names and such like, i'll try not to, but you never know...

Thanks!

-ginny

P.S As Im Continuing Ill Say This, the story is set during Harry's Seventh Summer, currently it's the wedding.

PPS I have posted CHAPTER TWO

More than 3 chapters! Wow, Ron you pratt. I know I said this for Forbidden Kisses too. But the was you portray him makes me so mad. He has to accept it. Wow, post soon! I love how this is going! Hey, and post another chapter for Forbidden Kisses, too.
DD's-man-through-and-through

Are you joking?
You should contiune until Harry leaves the Weasleys
Excellent writing!
Please continue, can't wait to read more

Ps. don't forget Forbidden Kisses

Wow that was great!! I think that you should definately continue it!! That was extremely good writing for not useing their names (only when yelling at each other ) Your story is great!!!!!!!! I would love to read more!!

That was really a nice story, it could have been a one shot if Ron (I think he says 'Blimey!' or 'Bloody Hell!' not 'Ruddy Hell!') didn't appear. But all in all, it's a nice sweet story.

Do you not like Ron? Because in both your H/G stories you have him be insanely over protective of Ginny. Lol, she made him watch! Can't wait for your next chapter! I like this story!
DD's-man-through-and-through

Wow! Thanks For the reviews everyone!

Q. Do you not like Ron? Because in both your H/G stories you have him be insanely over protective of Ginny?

A. I DO actully like Ron believe it or not, i just like the fact that he despises Ginny been with anyone, i enjoy writing about characters when they are angry or upset, (My two favourite emotions incase you lot haven't noticed) and Ron is a perfect oppurtunity.

I like Ron for his humor i just believe he has a nice dark side

I might end the story in teh next chapter as it has been fun to write but it's getting difficult without metnioning names and its starting to bore me.

- ginny

HAHA!!! At the end was hilarious!!!! Major payback because he can't move... he could close his eyes, or yell at them the whole time.... haha!!!! You have an awesome story, but I think it would be hard to write without saying anyones name. Post soon!!!

Bloody hell thats brilliant its absolutely wonderful its better than your other fictions you should totally write more i want to read the rest I need some encouragement to write my own FanFic

That's good, whatever people say, you should continue with it! Ha ha, Ron was forced to watch them. I think you made a mistake though, you wrote somewhere the green-haired boy was thrown back or something of the sort. But nevertheless it was really good.

i'm very very sorry. i just don't like it.

you should definitely continue because is good so far. i would like to read more of your story. go on!!!

I love this fic so far! I love the emotion that you put into it, and I actually think that it is quite funny, and so like Ron to bust in on private moments. Great job, and I definately think that you should continue this fic! It is really good!
Courtney

o this is amazing will you please wite some more i think its a fab fic and i realy would like to see were there relation ship goes and what else ron douse and he is predictabol when it comes to his little sister kissing he acts like shes a 8 year old lol

Hahah. Ginny made Ron watch. Continue! Please! Seriously! Keep on going until Harry leaves to go find horcruxes or something.....

ginevra molly weasley

Hey guys!


Thanx for all the great Feedback, but I'm afraid this fanfic is finished.

I've redone the last chapter so it's worth reading.

-ginny

P.s Pressure is my new fanfic.

I've read Forbidden Kisses, Pressure and now Kisses in the Moonlight. I have just two words for all three of them. ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT. I'm going to read your next fanfic and I bet it's just as great.

Cheers

Namra