After reading my story Back From the Veil, let me know what you think!

All types of reviews are welcome, just please be gentle with constructive criticism!

-- wait_siriusly411--

Shannon

As you know... considering I beta for you ... I love it!

You've been working so hard on this story and pouring your heart and soul into it, and you've done a great job! It's become very personalized with the way you write, and it's written extremely well! The plot line has really kept me interested and wanting more!

I'm excited to be the first one to post! Yay for me!!

Glad to see you've finally posted it! Keep it up!

~Ashley

Sirius is back!!!!????? That..... is....... AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Wow, your story really caught my attention, very good!! Your writing is so awesome, I can't wait to read more!! Please post soon!!!

I'm sssssoooo happy you posted again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Sirius is okay!!!! And impatient, good old Snuffles... Your fic is amazing, I love it!!! Please post soon!!!

Wow, I really love this idea! I bet this story will be so amazing when it's done! I really like how it is Harry and Ginny, too. This was very well written, and I really enjoyed it. Post soon!
DD's-man-through-and-through
OMG! I love your siggy! That is my second favorite book! Those are all my favorite quotes too. I love the "stupid shiny volvo owner', one! I cannot wait for Eclipse! 'And so the lion fell in love with the lamb,' is by far my most favoritist(is that a word?) quote in the world.

thanks so much you three...your support is greatly appreciated

Padfoot, Prongs and Moony--

dont worry...ive definitely decided on thursdays now....that includes this coming thursday, so my story will be updated weekly

DD's-man-through-and-through--

yeah...this story is really all about Harry and Ginny reacting to Sirius's return rather than only Sirius returning......if that makes any sense (it sounded alright in my head)...
and thanks twilight makes it on the same list as HP for me, and favoritist can be a word if you want it to be


Thanks again for your support...at first i wasnt sure people would actually like the story, but i guess i'm just too close to the project

promise to update on thursdays

--wait_siriusly411--

OMG!!! This was soo good! I can't wait for more! I love Sirius as a character! So...any story that brings him back, gets a 10 in my book!! Simply amazing, except, he doesn't know what happened?? That's just weird, but still a great story so far!

*Breanna*

thanks breanna , sirius is one of my favorite characters (which is how and why i came up with this idea)...and him not remembering what happened will be explained later in the story, so dont worry...any questions will be answered

--wait_siriusly411--

Wow, okay this is actually pretty good! I love Sirius as my favourite character, and love this story already! Sirius doesn’t remember he ‘died’? Okay, but just one question; how and why did he get back? I like the fact that Harry and Ginny doesn’t have more children, it seams perfect for them! I’m really excited about this story, and I’ll definitely keep reading!

harry-potter--

all that will be explained in the next few chapters of the story, so it will ruin it if i tell you now...but thanks

hey excellent story so far i love it cant wait to read more you have had a very good idea with this i read the first chapter like all of the fics on this site usually if I'm not in to it by the first chapter then i stop reading or maby i go one more chapter but this one i just had to read on lol you hade me after the first few paragraphs

Anyway PLZ post more cant wait

Shannon

Me likey! I must admit it's making me laugh reading how others are so anxious to read what happens next... and I know! *evil laugh*

I should get you chapter 6 and 7 later today... hopefully.

Great chapter... keep posting!

~Ashley

Hey, i have to say that this is an amazing fanfic, i've never read a story with this plot before!!! I like the fact that you are doing the story 10 years into the future, it's different but it works well, and i just have to say... SIRIUS!!!!! lol sorry i just had to get that out my system! Well done and post soon!
Piglet

Wow, I was nearly crying when I read that (considering I just watched OotP and I was near crying then would have something to do with it...) Ahh... you can't help but love Sirius!! And now Ginny is pregnant again, so she will tell Harry, and the rest of the world Your story is so amazing!! I love it!! Post soon, I can't wait!!!

Yay! Yay! Yay! Ginny is pregnant! Aww...Lily and Alexis were so cute! Post soon, this is a really great story! I love it!
DD's-man-through-and-through

Awww i actually really love this fanfic!It was such a great chapter but it nearly brought tears to my eyes!! And then Ginny is pregnant again awww!!!! I'm soo excited hehe, please post soon!!
Piglet

I'm so glad everyone likes it...I was afraid to post for the longest time because I thought no one would want to read it, but I guess you all proved me wrong

And thank-you, I'll post up chapter four in a couple days

"My Daddy says you're his friend," Alexis told Sirius, standing in front of him. "So you can be my friend, too." Aww, that was just so cute! When I read this I was just so… happy! They’re reunited, and Harry got Sirius back! I could cry. When they all were in with Sirius, but it could have lasted longer it had just begun, and then they all had to leave, sad. But Ginny's pregnant! YEAH! Loved it, post soon

Hey, i really liked that chapter! So Harry is fine with having another baby, that is soooo cute! And they are going to help out with sirius' case, hmmm thats interesting? But the best bit is that sirius is going to come and live them, yay!!! Well done and post soon.
Piglet

i really like this story - probably because sirius is in it and he's one of my favourite characters! its an interesting plot and i really enjoy reading it. i loved the bit when harry introduces lilly to sirius - it was really cute and harry finally got sirius back yay! please wirte more soon i can't wait!

bookworm~hermione

p.s. i also really like your bella/edward pictures i love thoose books too and can't wait for the next one

Hey, for another chapter! I was surprised they never brought sirius along for the meal, but i suppose he will still be at the hospital for awhile? I loved the weasley meal, all those weasleys under one roof hehe, it usually spells trouble, though it seemed to go quite well! Well done and post soon!
Piglet

for this chapter, yes, sirius was still at the hospital...harry and ginny had to tell the family what happened

and thanks! ill post again in a day or so

HAHA! Man, I loved that line! Actually I loved you latest who chapters. Everything seams so… perfect They’re all happy and everything is fine. I really love this fic and YEAH Ginny’s pregnant! WUHU! Post soon, please!

I'm offically in love with your story! Its different and thats what makes it stupendous! KEEP ON WRITTING

i just read your story and i'm loving it! it's great to read a story with Sirius back in because i just loved his character! but it is kinda sad when you think about how much he missed and how much went on when he went through the veil!
well i can't wait to read your next chapter and the rest of your story! keep it going!
post soon please!
kc

Hey, hehe their all under the same roof as a family, how great is that!!! I do love this fic, and Harry sounds like a very protective husband and thats great, i can see that he will be determined to do right by his whole family! Well done and post soon!
Piglet

I just loooooove your fan fiction! It is soo creative! please do not stop writing, i'm hooked on it!

-Lidaya

Awww, that last paragraph was so wonderful, and yet it nearly brought tears to my eyes, and now Harry, swears to bring his parents peace, i only hope it doesn't distract himself from his family? Well done and post soon!
Piglet

awh! to think his parents could have seen everything that has gone on in his life even though they know they can't have been there to help him, they were still kinda there to watch and support him! so in effect even though sometimes he may have felt alone, he never actually was! and now he swears to help them! i wonder how he's ganna do that!
can't wait for your next chapter!
post soon please!! (i need another before i go away on wed. to tide me over for 2 weeks haha)(only joking, i look forward to reading the next amazing chapter!)
kc

AWWW! I just read your entire story and I thought it was great. The fact Sirius returned is ondeful. lily is such a sweetheart. The fact Harry might see his arents again is amazing. Im so happy for ginny about the second baby. Harry being ddrunk was funny and cute. post soon!
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Thanks everyone, so much, for reading and sticking with my story! You have no idea how much i appreciate it!!!

and i only have 3 more chapters to write before i finish the story completely (but 5 more to post).....then im going to be working on some other fics (plots have been attacking my mind for awhile)

again, thanks! chapter nine will be posted up in a couple days!!!

oooo they're going to go into the veil! i can't wait for that chapter! but somethings going to go wrong isn't it? oh no!whats happened to sirius!? we havn't seen much of him recently! owell!
well can't wait for you next chapter! and only 5 more to go!!!
post soon!
kc

Oh no the fic will be ending soon!!! I do really like this fic, its different to others, i liked Harry drunk that was funny hehe, and there going to go into the veil! ooo lets hope that goes well??? Well done and post soon!
Piglet

i know! i dont want this story to end, either! its my first fic and everyting...but i think it will be good when it ends cause itll have closure and then youll find out what happens and wont always live in wonder

and thanks again for sticking with the story! ill post soon

~waitsiriusly~

Its ending soon? Oh no! I really like this fic!! There trapped. I feel bad for Harry. I want them to be free!! But thank goodness harry returned. At first i was like STOP BEING NOBLE! And then he almsot didnt return. That scared me!! But hes back and hes sad. Post soon! Great job!
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Hey, i didn't think harry was coming back then, or maybe it would of lasted a week their time, merely a few minutes for harry! But if their trapped their till harry truly finds happiness, i cant see that happening till harry accepts that his parents gone! Awww, i feel sad for even mentioning it, hehe! Well done and post soon!
Piglet

Hey awesome story i loved it! The plot was awsome the spelling was really good. I hopr you post soon

really good!! I can't believe that Harry's parents are trapped... forever... You have an amazing story, sorry that I haven't posted feedback, just want to say that I have been reading your story, and I love it!!! Post soon!!

Thanks again, everyone!!

and i just wanted to let you know that for the next week, ill be on vacation, so the story wont get updated until i get back...but dont worry!!! ill still be writing it, and hopefully ill have the rest of the chapters completed by the time i return!

~wait_siriusly411~

First of all, I woulkd like to say that I am soooooooooo sorry to everyone who has been waiting for the next chapter of my story...I know it's been two weeks, but after I got back from vacation, I started school, and there were a lot of mix-ups with my classes, and it was really a very trying week. But I'm working on typing up chapter ten and I am hoping to have it posted in a day or two! Thanks so much for being patient with me and sticking with the story!

~wait_siriusly411~

Well, that certainly was a very reminiscent chapter hehe! I loved it, and this way we got to hear all of the characters backgrounds and so on, keep it all up, its well thought out, and very entertaining! Well done and post soon!
Piglet

Awwwwwwwwwwwww. They are finally at peace. The fic was great and i enjoyed reading it. I loved it.

awh!!! what a good ending!!! harry freed them!! awh! and he's happy! awh!! that was a brilliant fic! i hope you write another one! and i really hope you write an epilogue! it's always great to read an extra bit of the story! well i loved the story!1 thanks for a great read!
kc

Hey, its such a shame that the fic has ended! I loved that Harry finally realised the answer to the veil, or that Ginny told him hehe! Did you say there was another chapter, an epilogue? Please do it would end the Fic amazingly! You should be proud i've been hooked from start to end!
Piglet