Hey all!
Here you can leave feedback, questions and criticism for my new one-short ‘Home’. Be honest but not cruel. Thanks!

Ah, first to review. Cool...

Anywho, wow, I loved this one-shot. It was nice seeing something different here on Veritaserum. I've always liked reading about Sirius' little storm out. It was a nice little touch to have his mum screaming at him the entire time. You came up with some pretty good insults.

The song was also really good; it seemed to fit with the story pretty well. Three Days Grace? I think I've heard of them...maybe I'll go check it out.

I would have liked to see Regulus more, but seeing as it is a one-shot, I suppose there wasn't too much room for him.

Great job! I hope you continue writing...

-Layla-

This was amazing ... honestly the best one-shot I've ever read. I absolutely loved it. I'm basically speechless haha. That's really all I can say is - wow.

Oh yeah and I hope to see you write something else! You're really good!

I love it!! And that's all I can really say! It's brilliant. Sounds exactly like the Sirius I imagine Simply, I love it!!

im-loveli-rli

That was really really really awesome!!!! That was one of the best one-shots I've ever read!! It was very unique and original... I've never read a story about Sirius' parting from his home..... I think you nailed the character's personalities perfectly.... Sirius was exactly like the Sirius in the books that I love!!! I hope you end up writing more!!!


-Kelsea

Hey all who have bothered reading my fic, leaving feedback and returning to see what I have to say to you responses confused? I am a bit… Ah, never mind!

Layla: Thanks for reading, and I’m glad you liked it. I consider it as my job to write different fic once in a while so we can get a bit changes The insults really wasn’t a problem and I’m sure I could have found more as we’ve heard how his mother was in OotP. Three days Grace is my favourite band and from Canada. I should have put the link to the song in the post, so people could go see by themselves. I don’t know why I didn’t. Actually I wanted to give Regulus more room, but I really couldn’t make it fit and then it would have seamed forced and Regulus doesn’t deserve that. I’m glad you liked it, and don’t worry. I’ll never stop writing!
Ladie Lily Potter: Oh thank you! I never really figured I could make people speechless, but it seams like I’ve done it I’d worked at the story for a while before I posted it because I really wanted it to be perfect, and it seams like I did it. Haha. And trust me: you haven’t seen the last of my writing. I’m unstoppable
im-loveli-rli: Thanks! I’m glad you just simply love it! I really put work in it too, so it feels good to be told. And I really tried to make a Sirius which was very alike the person we’ve seen in the books, and I’m glad you could identify them with each other! Thank you so much for the feedback!
Kelso2010: Thank you! Wow, I’ve got the response twice now. But really, I try not to write anything we’ve red too much about when I do one-shorts. I constantly find myself searching for something we’ve not red about, and I guess this was one of the things. I’m glad you found Sirius’ personality perfect! That was really one of the things I was going for because it’s no fun reading a fic about a person who is way out of character and I really had to look through a couple of pages in OotP to get it right. I’m glad you like it and, honestly, I could ever stop writing so it’s not the last you’ve seen from me!

Thanks again for leaving feedback!

- Vicki

I just want to that I really liked this fanfic! It was really good.What I liked most is that it was different from all the others I've read.I could really feel Sirius and his mother's feelings.I could picture it all in my head.I hope to read more stories from you.
>Rosie

Like I said, now I'm into reading your fanfics!

This was an extremelly good one. The story of how Sirius ran away is something that I never give a lot of importance, but you can definetly fill the gap in my mind.

The whole incident was very nicely described, even his mother's yells were easy to imagine!

My favorite part was the one about the mirror. I never expected it, and was very pleased of the outcome. Funny thing is, I was listening to Chris Doughtry's "I'm Going Home" while reading a part of it, and it became so emotional! Hahaha! Silly me!

I loved it. Great work!

Wow, it was awesome. Sorry that I didn't leave feedback before, so here goes.

I think this arguement was very realistic, actually pretty much as I have pictured the way Sirius left myself. Your decribtions were exeptional as always, and it was so easy to understand and feel Sirius' emotions. I really liked the part where Sirius just ignore his mother's yelling, it was so easy to imagine a blanck face

It was wonderful!