Okay, here's my feedback thread. I'd really love to hear what everyone thinks about it. Constructive criticism is great but please be kind. Anyways, thanks again for reading and I hope you enjoyed it.

Laura

That, was, so, so, COOL! It was totally awesome! I imagined everything, and it looked really cool in my mind too! You're an awesome writer! I don't see any way to critisise you!

Wow. I will never critic someones imagination like that and you have definately imagined this well. I had a difficult time picturing Dean and Luna...but the bit about Neville working with Hermione on the potions to restore his parents memories...that was awesome. I also really liked that Lee and George were continuing the Joke shop.

Good Job...really excellent to read how others would have finished off the book.
~Amanda

Hooray! My first ever feedback! I'm sooo excited.

taterchris-Thanks for reading my one-shot fic. I'm glad you liked it, and I appreciate your kind words.

Amanda-Thanks for reading my fic as well. I understand where you are coming from about Luna and Dean. The only reason I put those two together was because of the events in DH. JKR seemed to have been throwing those two together and they ran off to battle holding hands. So, I just went from there with it. If she hadn't done that, I would never have thought about the likelihood of those two. Anyways, thanks for your kind words.

This story is AMAZING! I love how your writing more about what happens after the final battle. J.K. Rowling didn't give us enough information and its great how you're doing that! Thanks so much for writing this! Post soon!!!

Laura that was great!

I've thought of asking why you don't write any fan fiction, and then I came across this and clicked immediately!! It's very well written and highly believeable! I myself am not a preferred cannon shipper (for when I read fics) although I really enjoyed this one!

I would really love to see you divulge into a longer fic! *gets on hands and knees* I bet you'd do great!!

~Ashley

LOVE IT!!!!! after reading...ive been wondering what could have happened to each character...i love hearing other people's perspective on it, too

Ashley-thank you sooo much. Coming from you, that means a lot. As for writing, I don't really consider myself a very good writer. I'm too straightforward. I have a hard time adding color and depth to give the reader a good visualization. I had a college English professor tell me that she really enjoyed my straightforward writing and that I should become an English teacher. But I noticed that she didn't say an English Lit. professor. It just takes a lot more effort to add the more descriptive and colorful words. However, I have been thinking about doing something else along the lines of a fan fic but it will take some time to work it out so I make sure it is enjoyable and the readers can "see" what I "see" in their minds as they read. Thanks so much for the encouragement. It helps to put a fire under my rear to get me motivated!

wait_siriusly411, thank you as well for reading my fic. I too enjoy reading other people's views as to how they would like the series to end and what happens to each character. Unfortunantely, now that JKR is starting to reveal more of the details, I have realized that most of mine have been incorrect so far. Although, I was right about one thing in particular. Ginny does go on to play professional Quiddich (I was wrong on which team though) and decides to retire early so she can start a family!!

Wow! That's genius. I also wanted to know what happened to all the characters, and you made up the most fab futures for all of them. And I'm so glad you gave Neville such a important job and let him cure his parents. Neville is my favourite character and so I think that's totally fabby =]

Well done, I hope you do another one soon

This is so good! I agree, there were definitely some things that needed clearing up. You made some really good decisions and I liked how everyone ended up! Congrats, you've done well!

Wow. That was pretty good. It was a bit too neat though. I kind of liked how J.K. Rowling left it all open so people could imagine whatever happened. I can't really picture Dean and Luna and I thought it was a bit too predictable that everyone had to end up married but other than that I enjoyed reading it.

This was really good. I also think George and Angelina end up together. They start out comforting each other, and it ends in love. Dean and luna, I can't see them together. Neville and Luna definitely.

wow I really liked it. You're a great writer, and that was the kind of epilogue I was hoping for. I really like Dean and Luna and George and Angelina. I was kind of disappointed with the epilogue, because I have no creativity whatsoever and I need people to just tell me what happens. I'd like to imagine this happened