This is the feedback for my first fanfic. I'll write it when inspiration strikes. It tells about Albus beginning his school at Hogwarts. I don't have time to write the whole year so it's beginning only ;d

The Fic itself is readable here.

Give feedback and advice. Do note that I'm not a native english speaker.

Thanks

I just read your fanfic an it is agreat so far. I enjoy thhe way you followed with what JKR wrote in the epilogue. as in,

I read it a few hours ago,but I'm posting now.Sorry.Anyway I really like how you started were JKR left it. It's a good start.I really don't know what else to say.Liking it.Post soon.
>Rosie

I enjoyed it. :]. Great work, especially how you carried off from Rowling. It was interesting to read! Keep it up :].

Thanks a lot everyone You just gave me a reason to put up chapter 2 which is soon finished. Be tuned!!


EDIT: SECOND CHAPTER IS UP. Enjoy : )
EDIT2: Yay we have a name. (first contained spoilers)
EDIT3: Fixed a major mistake in the second chapter. I mixed up some names as some might have noticed. As I've created already 8 characters it's kind of hard to remember who's who once in a while. Well hope ya can forgive me tho. The mix up has been fixed.

Wow! I love it! It's just the way I pictured it to be. Of course, that is a good thing. Very good, continue as soon as you can, the suspence is killing me!