I am really surprise Lily helped. I loved the new addition, but boy is Siruis right his mom is going to go on a murdering spree...that woman is crazy. Can't wait until the next addition.

Great chapter. The train part was funny. I am glad they made it in time. I look forward to the up coming chapters.

Thanks so much agriggs6 for your wonderful feedback!! I'm trying not to take so long between chapters... thanks for reading!

No problem with the freedback I love your story . If you're low on ideas I'll be glad to give you a few. I believe the boys are still trying to transfigure themselves.

So in the next chapter you can talk about that for a while, then have a Quidditch tryouts. You can also add a prank in there that involves all the Slythens having pudding or jellington in there shoes or book bags. Then a Quidditch match to end that chapter

The following chapter you can have a trip to Hogmeats, a detention and a new discover on the map and a couple more trys with Transforming.

Then a final transformation to animgas a dueling session in Defense against the dark arts. That leads to a muggle fight in the corridors. Another detention one into the dark forest. Where they confront Remus about being a warewolf.

Then have the next chapter starting off with the murauders telling Remus what they can do...why they did it. Then showing him. Then follow that with a Quiddits match a prank about lost shoes and hole in the shocks of the Slythens.

You can follow that chapter with a Murauders adverture into the dark forest as animgas. You can have Sirus get hurt. Then fast forward to a new moon and nothing bad happens. However, Snape follows them he don't see anything. Then have a Sirus and Snape argument. Where Snapes use his spell the one that lifts you into the air upside down on Sirus. Then Sirus makes the plan to show Snape why he shouldn't be following them and trying to learn Remus secret. You know the plan James was against and Remus didn't know about and James and up tell Snape about to stop him from going, but Snape wouldn't listen and James ends up saving him, because he didn't want Snape death to be on Remus consciousness.

Then you can do the scene where there all taking the OWLS test and the big Snape & Lily fight. Then its over the year. You can add Lily and James fight in this chapters to make them longer.

Then for that summer you can have them going into a muggle mall or something, playing Quiddits, and another adventure into aminal form. Sirius moving into the potters house. Finally they getting their OWLS and James has the highest number of QWLS follow by Remus then Siruis.

Now its Six year and they all have the talk with there house administrators about there future and pick they're classes. Then weeks later they can find the final hidden spot and add it to the map and beginning using the map to get around Hogwarts. They can have a couple of parties in the common room. A few pranks and I believe J.K. Rowling said Snape Sectumsempra James 5 or 6 year. You can make it six year. Then have a couple more night into the dark forest, Quiddits, and a couple more Lily and James arguments. Then have them studing for their N.E.W.T.S. Then the school year is over.

Then have Lily say something really mean to James on the Platform while leaving. She thinks he's about to ask her out again, but he's not. Have James heart fall apart right before her eyes and she sees it and have her regretting what she said by seeing his emotion. Then have him hand her, her hat she drops without knowing and walking away.

Then you can have him and the Murauders making life changing decision after talking to his parents about the death eaters and the rise of HE- WHO MUST NOT BE NAMED. Then have a real heart to heart talk with James and his Dad about Lily, and being an Amor and just growing up. Then his parents die, while he and the others are out keeping Remus company. After he bury's his parents in a private cermony with only him, Sirius, Remus, and Peter. I am sure because of who his parents were they would have made front page and I don't think he'll would have like that just yet. They recieve there letter to Hogwarts and James sees he has the Highest N.E.W.T.S and has been made Head boy and Captain of the Quiddit team.

He'll have his doubts about why he's head boy, he'll think it's because Dumberdore knows about his parents, but Remus will ashore him that he was given the title because he had the higest grades in the year, even with all the detentions he's racked up. That he can't know becuase the James letter to the Minister of Magic about his folks being ill and the Polly juice potion Remus and Sirius took when the Minister stopped by to make sure they were ill and haven't be capture by death eaters worked.

You can have everyone go on Christmas break and then have it make headlines that his folks died five or six months depending on when or if you kill them. Then have James give his statement about the issues and why he covered it up.

If this don't keep you from going into writer's block for a while then I don't know what will. I look forward to read your next installments whether you use any of my ideas or not. I love this story and your writing. Keep it up.

Wow, thanks so much for all the great ideas!! That was amazing, I will definately incorporate some of your ideas into the story. I have a basic outline of what I want I just have trouble with the inbetween stuff. Not any more though!

No problem I love your story, and of course I happen to love James and all the Marauder (well maybe not peter, but the other three). I love reading stories about them and how James might have been like from what J.K has told us about him and interviews and the books. There is a reason why everyone loved him and Lily so before their deaths. I haven't realize I wrote so much until I read my post again just now.

I am glad you have an idea now for the in between stuff now.

I love the new installment. at James screaming most of the chapter from excitement. I have faith in them that they can do advance magic they're the Marauder of course.

Oh man! I missed three new installments. I though I had you on autor alert here...I guess not. I am going to add you now and hope it works.

I have one Question about Frank Longbottom.

Q: Is he older then the boys or is he the same age?

I love how he pushed them to succeed he sounds like Wood. Go figure James and Sirius would love practicing all day and night for Qudditch. Or at a chance to bet the Slythens.

James at 1:00 in the morning still excited over a game that took place hours ago. I bet he had one hell of a good dream that day.

I love, love the chapter when they finally learning the finale steps to be animagi. James moment of transformation was really beautiful in your storyline.

Poor Moony, I can't wait until he's no longer lonely on his outtings. I am glad James found humor in Remus batter appearance, or else he probably would have felt guilty for not being able to help him out.

Here is my last question. I know I only said one, sorry it couldn't be helped.

Q:What year are The Marauders?

Thank you for the feedback!! I'm really glad you like my story. Your first question, Frank Longbottom is 3 years older than James. So he is in his 7th year. James is in his 4th year. Each new part, is one more year. When I'm done there are going to be seven parts.

I will have chapter 8 up once I'm done with chapter 9.

Nice new installment. Awww, poor Sirius it had to be tough living with his family. At least he had his brother until he though he betrade him and with to the dark side.

Mooney heals his own wounds. I though he'll at least let Madam Pomfrey heal them.

I am glad they're not concern at the moment with Lord Voldy. Siruis is going to be in heaven when James tells him the news, about him being able to spend the entire summer with him. However, I doubt his forks will be pleased.

Great chapter. I look forward to more. I hope the spell that hit James wasn't dangerous.

Great add as always. I loved the pranks they were funny. I am glad James is okay, and that he was only knocked-out for 4 days and not more. I am looking forward to the next chapters ahead.

If only I can get over this cold, and it stop snowing here then I'll be fine.

Thank you so much for reading and leaving feedback all the time!! I'm sorry you have cold, and that it is snowing, even though it would be cool if it snowed here (it never snows here).

Part 5 will be up sometime this week or next weekend.

I would say lucky you, but I can deal with the snow for alittle while. It become a bit of a problem after three months of it and it's suppose to be Spring. It stop two days ago. It's suppose to be 70 degrees tomorrow. That's good, and my cold is almost gone. Thanks for your concern.

I like the new add. I was a bit surprise by it. However, you did a great job.

The background on the page is wicked cool.

Great add. Siruis mom is a mess for bringing him to the train station that early. Don't worry James you'll learn not to ask her out.

I hope you have a great spring break.

Thanks so much for all the feedback!! I hope that you are having fun with anything that you are up to. lol. Thanks for reading my story!

I have this big groofy grin on my face right now.lol. I love your story. I love how they changes and into animal form. The fight scene was wonderful. I am looking forward to more.

i loved this fanfic its one of the best there is. i think i will let my friends know how good it was. great job keep up the good work.

Great added as usual. The boys are so fun, and funny. Talk about your bummer day, 4 hours of quidditch practices than you have to go and do homework. Love it...haha. Keep it coming.

I just read it, I absolutely love it! I can't wait for the next chapter :] It's good so far...keep it up!

Thank you so much for all the amazing feedback! I hope to be done with Part 5 soon. Thanks so much for reading!

Wow can I say that I felt like I was actually there. I love how James was hell bent on geting to Sirius before he hit the ground. Talk about loving your friend and welling to do anything to help or save them, James is the best.

Now, when are we going to get a little Lily & James or James & McGonagall action .

Wonderful add as always.

I really love your story! It's really good, can't wait for the next chapterr!!! =)
post soonn!!

Thanks agriggs6 and DEMENTORSKiSS XOXO for the feedback! lol, I might throw in a little Lily and James sometime.... Thanks for reading!

Dead. At the fact that Sirius can remember everything, but the fact that he had amnesia. James must be thinking pranks on the Slytheins.lol I can't wait. Nice add, can't wait for the next installment.

Love the story! You are a really good writer, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the amazing work!
~Kate

You are wicked amazing with the pen. I love this story so much. That prank was very funny, I would have never though of that scene as a way of James and Sirius discoving that curse. Good job.

Thank you so much for all th wonderful feedback!! Now that I'm on summer vacation (yah!) I can write more often (I hope)! Again, thanks for all the nice comments!

Man, I freaking love you. Really good... those were bleedy brilliant. haha I love the part when James is like I think I am making progress with Lily. Remus actions were like Prongs you're not even close....not even close. .

Then the part when James does the cool summersault on the broom and knocks the Quaffle out of the Slythein hands. Totally awesome.

I can't wait for the rest, keep it coming you are an amazing writer.

Really good add. I don't know what Siruis was thinking when he turned into a human in front of Lily. She could bleedy well tell on them. Then to ask James for help was such a siruis move.

I hope she don't tell on them, even to her friends. I don't think anyone knew they were animagus’s but Ablus, McGongall, and Lily. Plus, her friends might not be able to keep secrets.

Keep it coming Padfoot, Prongs, and Moony

Nice add. Ummm I have to see about this Cameron girl, but I am glad James is talking to another girl beside Little miss Fireball. I can't wait to read what Moony, Padfoot and Wormtail thinks about all of this.

Thanks for all the awesome feedback agriggs6!! I hope I'll have chapter 3 up... sometime. lol. I will say, there will be surprises. Thanks for reading!!

it was soo good! i just read the whole thing today, and at first i thought it was totally inaccurate, but i read it anyways, and i'm glad i did(:
i love it!

i really love your story! (: i really can't wait to see what happens nextt!

I think she might be a mermaid. I just hope she is not about to break-up with him, but then again ignoring someone who's your girlfriend is not the best of moves Prongs.

I love the new add as always.

ahhh! cliffhanger! but i still loved the chapter, last year in english, we read the greek myths, and i think cameron's a siren(: but, i doubt anyone else really knows about them, so maybe her mom's a mermaid? not too sure, but i'll love to find it out

WOW! I love this Fan Fic. I just read the whole thing tonight and I can't wait for more! I think pretty sure Cameron is part or fully Veela.. or maybe Mermaid?! Wow. Amazing.. I could have never come up with that... Oh Please write more soon Padfoot, Prongs and Moony I AM NOW OFFICIALLY OBSESSED!!!

~Bronwyn

still no information on cameron
i would have liked more information on the midnight run, but hey, it's filler chapter, and it's still good, keep writing(:

Brill. Love it to pieces! I wish I knew what is up with Cameron.. Keep posting!

lol, that's the mystery. Don't worry, everything will be explained at the end... I promise. Thanks for all the awesome feedback! Again, sorry about the long stretch between the last two posts. I'll have the next chapter up really soon.

ah! i may not have hated you for not updating, but i might for this cliffhanger!
haha, jk(:
that was a really good chapter, now i'm under the impression that cameron is working for someone who wants james dead, hmm, but i still don't even know if she's human! well, i guess i gotta wait,
happy writing(:

OH MAN. I don't understand this girl anymore. She's sketchy and mysterious with a voice that can make James kill himself?? Gosh, I am so... intrigued! KEEP WRITING, MASTER.

I'm first to review(:
you already started school? I've got another 17 more days, but I've got to be at the school at 7.30 starting wednesday, for sports, anyways, review time!

what is with her voice? why doesn't it affect Lily and Sirius? will we ever find out?

It was really cute how the walked all the way up the stairs like that, and I actually LOL-ed at Snape was green with envy, haha, good job!
keep updating when you can!

Wow, I can't believe you already started school. I don't go back until September 16th! Really good chapter, I really hope we'll find out what's up with Cameron. Keep posting as often as you cann!!
Kirsten

Haha nice prank...three guess of whom Snape is jealous of. I am sorry I haven't post a reply in a while. Love all the new adds, and what is with this Cameron girl. I could cause her bodily harm for sending James to his death twice. Well look at Miss Fireball talking to the toerag.hehe. I love it.

p.s. don't worry about not updating as offen as possible. I am sure most of us understand that school is demanding.

Yay! A new chapter! It was really good! I really liked it! Post again as soon as you can. Can't wait to see what happens during their summer vacationnn
& don't worry about not posting very often, I think everyone understands.

dude, I was right from like some amount of months ago (about Cameron being a Siren)
I had a little victory dance once I read it(:
yeah, so I was excited to read this, but I believe everyone understands if you don't have time
cheers and happy writing

Great chapter can't wait to see the mischief the mauraders get into over the summer! post again soon!!!