Hey, this is my second James/Lily fanfic called Live in the Moment. And thanks to my beta Dead man walking. I appreciate any comments, good or bad. I hope you like it.

I just read it and I like the beginning.I like that they are friends.I'm not good at giving feedback sorry.Well, post soon.I want to keep reading.
>Rosie

Hey,
Nice start. Interesting to see them start out as friends.
Are their going to be Deathly Hallows spoilers in this story? I think I saw a hint of one coming with the certain appearance of a certain person. -wink wink-
Good Luck continuing!

-Layla-

I agree with Layla, which I do quite alot. Its a nice start and seems like your putting in the DH infomration in the form of a slimy git...lolz. Im glad theyt are friends.. what james does to mes it p..I can't wait for. Post soon!
<33333

Aww. You're back!
Agreeing with both Layla and Lizzie here and also I'm so glad they're best friends. And they got so sad when James might not go to the same school as Lily and they hugged. =] I find that cute. Most kids don't really hug if you know what I mean..
Love it. Post soon!

Great beginning! I love that idea. Aww, they hugged. I want to see how James will mess up their friendship. Which will be sad because they've been best friends forever! Great chapter and post soon!
<3-Kaley-<3

Heya!
Nice start to your fan fic. It's quite original ... I don't think anyone's used the idea of James and Lily being friends before Hogwarts before. I like it! Can't wait to find out what happens next! Please post more soon!

Marie-Helena♥

love the beginning to your new fic! i can't wait to read the rest! and see what happens between lily and james before they finally get together!
please post soon! can't wait to read more!
kc

it is a good start. i like how you threw in snape (kind of funny). Making them friends in the beginning again i liked. i can that this will be good.

Hey, I don't blame Lily for being fascinated with wizard stuff, I sure would be too!
Their advertures in Diagan Alley and learning all the ropes to the wizarding world for Lily. And it's just the beginning of a very long journey.
Love it. Post soon!

I would be fascinated by wizard stuff too! It was adorable how Lily was so fascinated. Poor James. more and more and more wands until he got the right one. I liked this post. Post soon!
<33333

Great chapter!!!!!!! If I were Lily I would have gone crazy looking at everything too.WOW,that was a lot of wands James went through to finally find the right one.I can't wait to read more.Post as soon as you can!
>Rosie

i like the scene in diagon alley. its good how you are making lily soo excited about her becoming a witch. good writing

Thanks a lot for all the wonderful feedback!! I have finished typing chapter 3 and I'm starting chapter 4. Since it's the weekend and I have a little time, I'll try and write a lot!! Thanks again for the feedback!!

Why have I not yet left feedback here?! That’s clearly a mistake. Sorry. It was a really nice chapter! I liked how they all met and HA! Sirius was fighting with his cousin. I loved that. He really hates his family and I understand. At first I thought you had written the song, but as I red I thought it looked a lot like the one from the books It’s fine, I liked it. But the best part was definitely when Sirius didn’t want to go to Slytherin. Great job and post soon!

Yay. They're all sorted and they're going to have an amazing year.
But what's behind that door interests me the most....
Love it. Post soon.

Great Chapter!!!!!!!!I liked how Sirius was fighting with Bellatrix.I can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!Post soon!! Love it!
>Rosie

First: i have the books by heart and recgonized the song! Hehehe. Im guessing Sirius was fighting Bellatrix...that takes guts. And Lily meet some people. Its fnny how Lily wouldn't stop reading the text books. Post soon!
<3333

Wow! It's a really good story so far! Keep writing and please post more soon!!!

Aww. Poor Remus. He needs to think of better lies and not show up in school right afterwards...
But James loves Lily if his heart was in her hands. Aww... he really likes her that's why he was upset with Sirius. Sirius likes her... but what about Lily? Does she like him?? Weird much...
Love it. Post soon.

Great Chapter!!! Remus for a smart kid you sure have stupid excuses.lol. WOW!!!!Lily likes Sirius or is she just saying that?I mean come one.I feel so bad for James I could tell he likes Lily and he was defending her.OHH Lily don't over react please.Post soon!
>Rosie

wow a lot has happened since i last read the first chapter! lily was very excited about hogwarts! but i would be like that if it had been me! and they were all sorted, no mention of snape yet though? and remus "was attacked by a werewolf" hmmm, how long until they all work that out, lily is very clever you know! ooo and shes had an arguement with james! o the start of a beautiful relationship isn't it! haha!
can't wait for your next chapter!
please post soon!
kc

Thanks for the awesome feedback!!!

- laughingirl_92 -

He can't be too brilliant his first year, haha!! Was Lily just saying that.... did she mean it.... OH look! A butterfly.... pretty butterfly.... you'll see soon....

- x_kc_x -

It is the start of a very beautiful relationship And yeah... Remus was 'attacked' by a werewolf.

Thanks again for the great feedback!! I'll post... sometime, not sure when yet.

my first reaction:

WHATT!?!?!?!?!

Second reaction:

WHATT!?!?!?!?!

Third reaction: I cant believe she did that. She killed him. She likes Sirius? Eh. But its young love. Post soon!
<3333

Oh typical. Lily pretends to hate James when she really likes him. but James still likes Lily a lot. Proved when almost kille dby the Whomping Willow... What's he gonna do now wthout Lily?
Love it. Post soon.

Aww. Poor Remus. It's so sad...
But what in the world is behind that door? And dormitory at nine? Should get interesting with the Invisibility Cloak at hand. What will they do next??
Love it. Post soon.

Thanks JSB 073 for reading and leaving feedback!

Yes, the next chapter should be pretty long to cover... almost ... everything.

Uhh. This will be exciting… it’s really kind of PS… I bet there something like Fluffy on the inside haha. No, actually, it’s not funny. I’m really a bit anxious about what will happen. Great chapter, post soon!!! Please?

Hmmm... i like it but it gets dull when james tells lily about being a wizard. great start though!

Wow. Great idea on what was behind that door. I loved the whole forest thing. It's errie(I can't spell today, bare(???) with me), yet, it was nice. And the little boys had fun, I remember when we got to do that... =[[I miss it. But what's with the dream of James? I completely confused on that. Am I aloud to be?
Love it. Post soon.

Is that suppose to mean that she likes him or not? It sorta fits, you know. But it's amazing how there's drama, they're only in first year!
<333 Post soon.

Thanks JSB 073 for leaving feedback!! haha, yeah, a lot of drama, I don't know, when I went to school there always seemed to be something going on.

Thanks for reading!!!

OOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooOOOOOOO! He knows... dun dun DUN! And why is Lily acting so strange? Love it! Post soon!

-Jasmine

Hmmm. Hmmm. Hmmm.
*thinking very hard*
Does that mean that Lily is lying and she really does like James but doesn't wanna tell him? And what will change Lily's mind?
<33 Post soon.

Thanks for the feedback!! I'm going to post 1 more chapter and that's the end of Part 1. I will post as soon as possible. Thanks for reading!!

Exams are hetic, but they survived.
How will the summer be between James and Lily? They are neighbors after all...
Behind the door, someone had gotten past all the obstacles with no.. how can I put it? Reward I suppose? Anyways, how will it all be?
<33 Post soon.

Summer is as it should be. Relaxing. Remus and Sirius are there and failed attmepts to speak to Lily. What more is there to say?
<33 Post soon.

id have to say you have a great story going on and i really love each of your chapters. i feel uneasy for remus when he is being questioned by james and sirius for looking peaky and when they ask him why lily said hi to him. i wish remus had just told them though it would make things way simpler but that wouldnt be very remus like.
i sort of feel bad for james since he wants lily to like him so bad and all she is doing is ignoring him! i cant believe their friendship could have been ruined with that chapter earlier on but i suppose it was needed.
cant wait for your next chapter.
-nicky judge

like this chapter i was going to wait till you were done with all seven parts but i just couldn't so i started to read it and so far i like it......... hiii Sophie were you here last weekend or this weekend???


Solana (aka the Jonas Brothers fanatic)

Mod Edit: I edited out some excessive characters.

I started reading your story couple of days ago and I love it,
poor Remus,and Sirius obviously is giving ideas without realizing it
very clever
keep on the good work

Thank you all so much for reading my story and leaving feedback!! I appreciate it so much.

Since it is summer, I can write more chapters faster, so it won't be so long between each post.

I am so sorry! I didn't post chapter 5! How silly! But I got it right, so if you read chapter 6 and it didn't make that much sense, chapter 5 is now up there. Thanks so much for reading and giving me feedback!

So, it's the end of Part two! I'm going to write seven parts, for the seven years. I should have Part three up soon. Tell me what you think of the story so far!

Whoo! Part 3!! So, tell me what you think of the story! I would really appreciate to hear your opinons or sugestions on how to make the story better!!

I love your story I can't wait to read when the boys fully transforme into they're animal form. I also would love if you can have them started a band or something that would be cool. They can play in muggle schools in the summers, and when the have balls at Hogwarts they can perform as well.

Look forward to your next installment. Peace.

Thanks so much agriggs6 for your feedback!! That would be funny if they started a band! Thanks so much for reading my story!

i think this fan fic is really good when is the next chapter up because it is awesome

Thank you wrighty07 for your awesome feedback! I have the next two chapters done (which is amazing) so I should post more often. Thanks for reading!

That's crazy...what he did to Remus. I hope he's okay. That was wrong on so many levels what they all did. They all need to be in detention. I am glad to see SNIVELLUS hasn't moved on to dark magic yet. James and Sirus are about to get this fool for that. If you don't know anything about James and Sirus then you should know no one mess with they're friends.

Thanks agriggs6 for leaving feedback! Well, this is the end of Part 3. Part 4 will be up soon. Thanks for reading!