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-Lidaya

I think that it´s great...Are you going to put in some actinon lika a new dark lord or something?

absolutly love this continous i cant wait to read more have you written any other stories????

Wow this is awesome this makes the epilogue into something really good and I love it!! Post again soon pretty please
Jill

I keep reading fan fics about the epilogue, and while i like them all...this one is by far the best written! I loved it and I am waiting for more!!

P.S. Since this is written as kind of a third person limited P.O.V. through Lily, shouldn't Harry be 'Dad' instead of 'Mr. Potter' when he says things, it's not that big a deal, and it may be on purpose, but so far it's been 'Uncle Ron' and 'Mr. Potter', just a thought...I'm kind of a grammar nerd, lol! Post again soon!!!

It's really good!

Your writing is good and easy to follow which is a plus side for me!

I love the fact that they're Gryfindors and like their parents 'coz in most they aren't and i think they would be!

Post Soon!

-ginny

I loved this fan fic! This fan fic was the reason I joined Veritaserum! (I found it while googleing something about Harry... )
You're a great writer, your story is easy to follow, and it's also easily imaginable. I can see Harry on my mind trying to teach Lily the moves and everything. It's awesome!
I also wonder why Harry is Mr. Potter, but that's just a silly thought, even though it's easier to imagine him all grown up that way....)
I loved it! You did an amazing job!