Hey guys!!! Please let me know what you think about my newest fic here!!!

-Kelsea

ooooh!!! great chapter so far!! i wonder how james will save lily!! can't wait for you to post!!

timeturner

*squeals*
Oh my gosh. Kelsea is back and she's hotter than ever!! Haha. But I'm so very glad you're back.
How could I ever hate it? But I really do like it. The golden memories. And I really like how you started it out of school. I think that's something no one has done before (on this site at least), I like it. I like how it's Lily's point of view and how she's mourning and how you already brought the sadness in one chapter. I already feel sad. And then the one person she doesn't like, James Potter, saves her? Interesting. I really wanna find out how he does it. And that she maybe fall in love??
Love it. Post soon!

Yay you have your new story up!!!!!!I just love how it started and the way you described everything was really great.I,like Jessica, like how it's in Lily's point of view.I wonder what James does.I honestly can't wait to read more.Oh I finally have a new distraction for school. Loving it.Post soon.
>Rosie

oh I love it


can't wait to know the rest
please write again soon

Oh shoot! I'm sorry, I just posted on your story! Ah! sorry, won't happen again! haha

timeturner - Glad you liked it!! You'll see how he saves her later... actually much later.. I'll post soon!!

JSB 073 - *takes a bow* Thanks sooo much Jessica!! Well I thought I'd start this one out a little differently than the last... gotta change things up ya know!!! I'm sorry that it makes you feel sad... but I hope that it's a good kind of sad (If that makes sense ) because that's sort of the edge I was going for!!

laughingirl_92 - Thanks for the compliment Rosie!! I thought it would be fun to make it from her point of view... it's a bit of a challenge but I've been able to chanel some of my own thoughts and feelings through the character.. it's fun!! Yes! My story is once again your distraction!!!

Beater - Thanks sooo much!! I'll post soon!!

iheartdan1110 - Don't worry about it!! It's not the first or the last time someone's done that!! And to answer your question... yes, when she says that he saved her she means figuratively.. but he could save her physically... I might have that in a future chapter!!

Wow I feel so relieved!!! I was afraid that everyone was going to hate it!! I'm on top of the world right now, because on top of people actually likeing it... my Best Friend has joined VTM!! *squee!* Ok I'm good... I'm calm... lol Anyway Thank you all sooooooo soooooooo much for reading and leaving feedback!! You've brightend my day!!

-Kelsea

p.s. I thought I'd add that I probably wont be posting as often as I did with Love and War once school starts because I've got one heck of a schedule this year and I'll be pretty busy!!

its soo great!!!
i love it i like the fact that its in a persons view so you get her feelings and thoughts

i liked the stuffed stag it was a great idea well i thought so any way! I also liked it when lily was calling her sister a horse as she is always described as a horse but no one has ever said it to her face!

thanks for the PM by the way!


hope you post soon cant wait to read more!Lovin it soo far!

Connie
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Haha. Yeah. The good kind of sad was exactly what I meant, I thought I put it in? Oh well.
Okay, Kelsea? I've seriously fallen in love with your story! It's simply amazing and only two chapters!!
What Lily said to Petunia was funny, but what Petunia said back was really mean. I mean all Lily did was insult her (hahah) Petunia could insult her back instead of making her feel bad. And Petunia didn't even act sad about her parent's death. Emotionaless piece of lump.
And then Lily left, and she had a stuffed stag, James's Animagus, from James himself. She kept it. But then later we find out that she likes him all along. Since second year, but she just wouldn't let herself fall. And she wanted to go and hug him and such, but she didn't want to finally fall for him because she didn't want to lose him like everyone else in her life. So she loves him, and he loves her back. They just don't know it. And I thought it was so cute and sweet and nice of him to tell her "If you ever need anything you come to me"
Absolutely Love It! Post soon!

OMG James is sooooooooo sweet

and she loves him I like it that way

and he was there for her listening to her and comforting her, he is just so adorable

as usual " can't wait to read the rest, and post soon"

oh and good luck with school and everything

Is it possible to love a story so fast?I know I do.It's absloutely amazing!!!!Some people might think that since there are only two chapters you can't say that much,but you can.Ok can James be any sweeter?HE was listening to everything she said.Guys usually don't like to listen,so that was so cute.It kind depresses to think that they are so young and have to go throught,so much.Don't worry my feeling won't make me stop reading.Post as soon as possible.
>Rosie

OMG!! KELSEA!! Your back better than ever!! Yupp its me!! I love this. Its so adorable. I feel bad for Lily and that moment with James and Lily...Kelsea...that was an awwwww. And you know how much of a sucker I ma for those moments!! And Jasper. Cutee!! And its a stag!1 I picked up on that!! Post soon!
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Kelso, another great story in the making i see!!! i'm so excited to read the rest of the story and i can't wait until you post again!! make it soon!! talk to you later; love you bunches!!!
~*~F&GLover~*~ ~XoXo~

Wow, you're up and running again! New story, new plot, new characters. It's all going to be so much fun!
Ah, I love James. He's such a sweetheart. =]
As for Sirius...his sense of humour has always been questionable, but it's hilarious nonetheless.

Great story. Hope you update soon!

-Layla-

ConnieBoo03 - Thanks for the compliment!! Haha glad you liked the humor with Petunia... I really enjoyed writing it.. because that is something I would have said to her!!

JSB 073 - I'm so glad that you've fallen in love with my story Jessica!!! Yes Petunia is quite cruel.... but that's just who she is!! Yes Lily has liked James since second year (You'll find out why later) but she absolutely refuses to act on those feelings.. she doesn't want to lose someone else she loves... but she'll come around..... eventually!

Beater - James really does love her... and he'll do anything for her.. she feels the same but she wont let herself fall for him... it's all really sad!! Hehe thank you for wishing me luck.. trust me I'll need it !!

laughingirl_92 - That is SO true.. guys never usually listen.. but James loves Lily enough that he wants to know what's bothering her and when she's in pain he's in pain.. so basically he's the perfect guy.... *sigh* I wish they made them the same way you think them up.. lol! I'm so glad you love it!!

GryffindorBabexhott - Lizzie! You're back!! Awww thanks... is it really that good? lol you make me blush!! Yes James got her a stag stuffed animal.. but she doesn't know why it's that specific animal... yet!!

F&GLover - SHELBY!!!! My best friend.. Thanks so much for the compliment... But now that you're a reader, I'm sorry to say, you're not going to find out what happens in advance so hahaha! Talk to you tomorrow!!

Layla - Yeah James is a sweetheart.... I thought since you can hardly ever find a guy who is actually that awesome, I'd make one up!! And Sirius.. he's quite a character.. I love coming up with the things he says!! Thanks so much for the compliment!!

Wow I'm in such a great mood! I come home from the reunion (which was not as fun as it could have been) and find feedback!! It makes me happy!! Thank you guys soooooo soooooooo soooooooooo much for reading and leaving feedback!! I was really afraid that no one would like it and I'd have to shut it down !!! I have Chapter 3 written... but right now it's Nappypoo time in Beddyby land so I'll post it first thing tomorrow!!!

-Kelsea

Hey Hey hey!! Im holding you oon that 'yet' about the animal....now..the war does change people. Its sad and depressing. But I must comment a little something I loved!



I would feel the same way!!! Post soon!
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First thing: post soon
Second thing: i love your story, it's sensitive and it shows the real world when voldemort come and kills people. But that's not the point i'm looking forward to see how james saves lilly. it's just a figure of speech that he saves her from her owns nightmares and weaknesses or he saves her from something dangerous. i'm keen to find out. so far i loved your story and the way you have done it. it shows the sensible part of everyone.

Cute. They're able to get along.
It was nice they were able to laugh. Lily made a fool of herself for the third time that day. ANn all time record. Oooh. Haha.
But then she was like I have to share a bathroom with a BOY! I'm exactly like that. I'm suppose to share a bathroom with my brother, but I don't. I use my parents. Much cleaner. Haha.
Love it. Post soon.

she has to share the bathroom with a boy

oh my god that's awful , I pity her

if I were her I would make sure that his door would never open while I'm inside
and of course this is going to drive him crazy because I do take a very long time showering, I love water

anyway it was nice chapter

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“Potter?” “Who’d you knick that badge from?”

that was hilarious

i would hate to share a bathroom with a boy! but it brings them that little bit closer!!!

put they are so cute together!

i really cant wait to read more, so post soon please

Connie
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She has to share a bathroom with a BOY gross!!! I hate sharing it with my sisters.When Lily made a complete fool out of herself she reminded me of me.I do that so much it's become a habit.I know what you mean when you say your chapters are horrible I sometimes feel the same,but the difference between you and me is that your chapters are GREAT!!!!!! I love them!!!!!!! So I should never catch you writng that again Kelsea! Are we clear? Sorry that was stupid haha.I'm a little hipper.Post soon!!! Loving it!!!
>Rosie

GryffindorBabexhott - Yes I know you'll hold me too it.. I promise she'll find out!! And yeah the war does change people... but they find comfort in other things that make them happy again!!! Hahaha I enjoyed writing that part!! I share a bathroom with my brother but he uses mom and dad's!

alessutza - Thank you so much for the compliment!! I was trying to show more of the emotional side of the war and I'm glad that you like it!! James ends up saving her from a lot of things.. but you'll just have to wait and see what they are!!

JSB 073 - Yeah her record is three... mine is like ten !!!! I make a fool of myself constantly!! I share a bathroom with my brother too!! But he hardly uses it because I take it over... so it's pretty much mine!!

Beater - Haha yeah she makes sure that he can't get in when she's in there.. but he's matured enough to not walk in on her.... on perpous anyway!! Glad you found the "Badge Knicking" part funny!!

ConnieBoo03 - Yes James and Lily are cute together.... and they both really like eachother... But since Lily is afraid to lose him she wont act on those feelings... well for a while at least !!!

laughingirl_92 - Haha I make a fool out of myself all the time too!! Oh they're not that great!! But I'm glad you love them all the same... and don't worry.. you should see me hyper.. F&GLover knows all about that ...hahaha!!!

I'm sooooo glad the avatar's are back!!! I've missed all the colorfulness!!!! Anyway thanks a bunch to all of you for reading and replying!!! I have to start school on Wednesday so posting will probably start to slow down around that time!!! It's going to drive me absolutely crazy to not post everyday.. but I'll deal!!

-Kelsea

he consider sirius his brother
that was really nice


but he is overreacting all this because sirius and lily smiled at each other
i don't want to think what would happen if they did more than that



post soon, and good luck

That was cool how you made this chapter in James' point of view.I love how Sirius and James get a long it's great!!! How could James think Sirius likes Lily?At least everything is cleared up.Lily heard the whole thing dundundun.I can't wait to read more.Post whenever you can.LOVE IT!
>Rosie

hey! i loved your chapter!! sirius and james are so brotherly!! i wonder what lily is going to do!!! i bet she likes james!! post really soon!! oh and by the way i really like your avatar! i would of had it but you already have it!! well post really really soon!!

Yes! I’ve just read your whole fic and I love it already! But I like when you write of Lily’s point of view the most. The James thing seams wrong to me. But really good and I really loved your first chapter with the whole introduction. I LOVE IT! Keep writing and please post soon

Oh my GOD!!! I 'm in love with this fic already. I can't believe I haven't found it before now! I love the way it started and the way its going. I really want to know where its going to go.
Keep posting.

im-loveli-rli

New twist putting it in James's view. I thought it was all Lily's but that's still cool.
Sooo. Wow. James loves Lily. He told Sirius, and Lily heard the whole thing? Whoa dang. I seriously have no clue what she's thinking and how will she react. But Sirius also likes someone... I almost think it could be Lily.. but I don't want to and I'm probably wayy off. haha. But you better post soon! I want to know how she reacts!!
Love it. Post soon!

Oh and awww. James cried over girl. He's sweet. =]]

AWWWW!!! James LOVES her!! ANd Lily heard it ALL!!!!What she gonna do? ANd Sirius likes...I have no idea. But I cant wait to find out!! But Wortail's comment atthe beginning. *shakes head sadly* Does he have any dignity?Post soon!
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i really liked the way you wrote it in james point of view this time as we get to know why he had been so down and how he actually felt.

ooo lily heard the conversation well she cant act that badly about it can she i mean he didnt say anyting bad he just said he loved her which is soo cute!!
i thought it was kinda sad when he thought about he had cried!!

but i cant wait to read more so post soon please,

Connie
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Beater - Glad you found it sweet that James and Sirius are like brothers!! Yes James did overreact a bit... but that's just James!!

laughingirl_92 - Glad you liked how I changed the POV! Yes Lily heard the whole thing.... you'll find out how she reacts to it in the next chapter!!

timeturner - You'll find out what Lily does in the next chapter... Thanks for the compliment on my avatar... I thought it was cute and I wanted something with Lily and James!!!

happy-potter - I'm glad you're liking it so far... I kinda had trouble with James' POV but I wanted to do something a bit different and that's the first thing that popped into my mind!!! I had fun with the introduction... I'm glad you enjoyed it!

im-loveli-rli - Wow.... I'm glad you love it! I'll post soon!

JSB 073 - Yeah... I like writing it from Lily's POV better too !!! No Sirius doesn't like Lily... he likes someone else who is the complete opposite of himself... if that makes sense!! You'll find out how Lily reacts in the next chapter!! And yea James is sweet!

GryffindorBabexhott - No.. Wormtail is just pathetic.. he can't help it !! Yes James loves Lily.... and Lily.... well you'll just have to wait and see!!

ConnieBoo03 - Glad you liked it from James' point of view... I wanted to show what's been going on with him without actually having him tell people.. if that makes sense!!! You'll see how Lily reacts in the next chapter!!

Hey guys.. sorry my replies are really short but I'm not feeling to well today!! Thanks soooo sooooooo much for reading and leaving feedback... you have no idea how much I appreciate it.. it keeps me going!!

-Kelsea

TATTOOS!!! OMG!!!! OMG!! Thats cool. And they sounded pretty too. And James skipped the fun..why...so he didnt choose truth or do somethig? weird ts not like him. But the draes sounded funny. Post soon!
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oohh!! great chapter!! all those dares were funny!! but james skipped all the fun....i bet he didn't want to do something wierd or stupid in front of lily!! and the tattoos...haha!! that part of the chapter was so funny!! haha!! well post really really soon!!

timeturner

Tattoos? Wow. Haha. That was a thing I had never seen coming! But what was up with James? I don’t like him being sad and boring James. Wow, Remus and Lydia? Haha. Great I loved the chapter. Post soon!

Whoa dang? Tattoos huh? Pretty interesting. And so were the dares. And now we finally know that Lily has totally fallen for James... I think. She wanted to snog him silly.. haha. And Remus adn Lydia? Different people much? Also Evie and Sirius.. different as well. But Sirius did say she was different. I bet he so likes Evie.
Love it. Post soon.

That was really funny. I love it you made the girls get tattoos haha. I also like how you had lydia go for the smart man of the group. you protray lily character very well in this chapter. cant wait to read more!!

That was cool when you said they had tattoos.I liked the dares.Why oh why is Lily so you know.So Sirius likes Evie that's a change in things.I like it.James don't be sad be glad.haha.I'm sorry that was stupid I'm in hyper mode.Great Chapter.Love it! Post soon!
>Rosie

GryffindorBabexhott - lol yeah tattoos!! I thought it would be fun for them to have them.. I don't know why... but no James just got skipped over!!

timeturner - Glad you liked the dares!!! No James just got skipped over in all the excitement!! Haha Yeah they have tattoos... or "Tramp Stamps" as my friend says!!

happy-potter - I'm glad you didn't see it coming!! That's kinda how I wanted it !! No James was not being boring or sad.. he just got skipped over in all the excitement!!!

JSB 073 - Yeah Lily has pretty much fallen for him.. she's just in denial!! Yeah I wanted to pair those two couples up because they're completely opposite and I've always been told that opposites attract and they can bring out different sides of eachother... you'll see that in later chapters!!

iluvviktorkrum - Thanks for the compliment!! I thought it would be fun to pair the wild-child (Lydia) with Remus... she can bring out a different side to him and he can do the same for her!!

laughingirl_92 - lol I love hyper mode!!! Yes Lily is in denial... but she wont be for long !!!! Sirius does like Evie.. glad you like that change!!

Thanks soooooo soooooooooo soooooooo much for reading and replying guys!!! I know that my chapters kinda seem all over the place right now.. but I've got the next ten planned out in detail so they should get better !!

-Kelsea

ooo tattoos or 'tramp stamps as lily called them
i wonder why james skipped the fun??


i really cant wait to hear more so hope you post soon,

Connie
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p.s lily has soo totaly fallen for james!! yay

ConnieBoo03 - lol yes Tramp Stamps.... I love that phrase... it has a nice ring to it !! James didn't skip the fun... he just got skipped lol I'll post very very soon!!

-Kelsea

That was kind of sad with what her mother had said… but really, she is stubborn. Shocker Lily hadn’t heard about her friends ‘relationships’… You would think one’s friends would tell one, wouldn’t you? And just so you know, I don’t think the chapter was boring. I liked it post soon

I'm going to say this,I really stink at giving feedback.Anyway I liked this chapter well I love all your chapters.I kind of found that mean of Lily's mom to say.I'm not sure if I just didn't read very well I was wondering what did James do?Unless you said I'll go back and read the chapter.I know my feedback has been better,but I'm getting over a humiliation.After it happened it reminded me of your story.I guess it follows me everywhere.Love it! Post soon and good luck in school(I'm supposed to be doing homework)
>Rosie

I like how you tied in the stubborn word to her parents death. That was very creative. But i dont think that Lily should have blow up about it in James's face even though later on she got better wihich was good.

Thtat was sad about her moms last word being stubborn. I would have knocked James ut if it was me. Shesh. Lily knows how to blow up lright. I cant believe you start school tomorrow. I ahve another couple of weeks. Post soon!
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oh that was cruel
I mean James didn't do anything wrong, it wasn't his fault that she is having hard times
but I feel sorry for her too,

I didn't write anything about the previous chapter, I'm not home so I don't log on often, but it was really nice

and the girls are having tattoos, I can't believe Lily is having one


Good Luck with school, I only like the first week at school then it turns to be hell , so good luck

AWE that was so sad, sorry ive been busy so today was the first chance, i really love this fanfic, i love how it has a totally different story line from your last onee. Its so sad James' dad is dying, i wonder why lily has never asked james about whats going on with him cause its kind of obvious.
cant wait till the next chapter.

awww poor james he must feel quite bad as he thinks it was all his fault that lily is upset!!

i wonder what the letter actually said

i cant wait to hear more

have fun at school

connie
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Aw. That was so sad. The last word... stuborn. I would've been so sad and hurt. It's a horrible memory. And then James is thinking like what did I do to make you cry?? Aww... at least he cares for Lily. He's so sweet.
Love it. Post soon.

happy-potter - Yes it is sad that that was the last word her mother said to her!! And like Evie said... Lily was in super high stress mode.. I wouldn't mess with her either !!!

laughingirl_92 - James called her stubborn and that made her remember that day her parents died.. and Lily's mom's comment was suppose to be more exasperated than mean... but it can be interpreted in that way!!

iluvviktorkrum - Thanks for the compliment!!! Lily didn't really blow up at James... he just upset her.. and she was stressed so all of it just kinda wound itself together and BAM!! Conflict!

GryffindorBabexhott - Yeah it is sad... but James didn't know what he did.. or else she would have knocked him out!!! I just got done with my first day of school and I've never been so stressed in my life.... the power went out.. and it's 105 outside... in fact I was so frustraited that when I got home I cried... I NEVER cry!!!

Beater - It was kinda cruel... but she didn't really mean it... just stressed... trust me I know!! lol yeah.. they have tattoos.. I thought it would be fun if Lily had something that wasn't expected of her!! Thanks for wishing me luck... I'll need it.. (Read GryffindorBabexhott's post if you want to know about it )

Lily+James=Forever - Thanks so much for the compliment!!! Lily has had her own troubles to deal with... and even if she did ask James what's been going on with him.. he probably wouldn't tell her because he doesn't want other peoples pitty and doesn't need to worry her with anything else.

ConnieBoo03 - Yeah James was really confused about what he did!! The letter... well I had my own specific wording for what it said... but it didn't really fit in this chapter... so I guess I'll leave it up to your imagination!!

JSB 073 - Yes she was hurt by it.. and that's why she lost it when James said that to her!!! Yes he does care for Lily!!!

Hey guys!! Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback!! I feel really bad that I havn't updated in a while.. but i will as soon as I post this!!!! I've only been to school for one day and it's already really really really stressful so I don't know how often I will be able to post from now on... and I feel really aweful because I don't like to leave my reader's hanging!!! Thanks again!!

-Kelsea

Shes afraid of James!?!?!? How will james respond to that. Poor Sirius. I felt bad for his boggart. Samantha. Im going to hate that name now. Thank you Kelsea!! I cant believe he is seeing someone else! Idiot!! Post soon!
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