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-Lidaya

Yeah, first reply! I just got done reading your story and I love it! I like how you describe the characters fully, but don't go into too much detail. The plot is great; I can't wait to see where it goes! Have you written other fan fiction before? Either way, you should definitely continue! Post soon, please!

I wanted to leave a reply for The Necklace but you didn't put a link on. I suggest for each story you put a link to the feedback form and vice versa for the feedback form the the story. Anyway, Golden Girl. IT started out alright except your writing ability and effort could definitley use loads of work. I excepted you to explain things as I read on, like these new people's names, but only at the end did you sort of unclearly have the characters call eachother by name, so as a result during half the story I was completely confused. I think I am still a little confused. Your desciptions of these people was very good but as you never gave a name I didn't know where to place it so I was trying to ignore it because I needed to put a name to it, so that good aspect lost its shine because of the lack of putting a name. Ill wrap this up by saying it could use some work.
& dont forget to put links, that's very important.

This idea is really cool. Can't wait to see how it turns out. But you should have mentioned DH plot spoilers...

hey,

I don't really remember if I send you a P/M or not but anyhow I really liked it I really hope you'll post soon again cause I can't wait till I find out what happens. that part where James is called Harry is great at first I thought you made a mistake but then I read the last line and I thought it was funny. keep on writhing the good stuff.

Greets Rox

Hello, again! I read the latest chapter and I must say I like it!! Yeah, I thought you messed up when you called him Harry, too. But I like that you did that! It's the kind of thing someone would accidentally do when looking at someone who looked so similar to Harry! It'll definitely give James something to think about... Maybe you should have put the names in a little sooner, but I like that you didn't give a whole paragraph detailing what they looked like, names, etc. I like that it came slowly, even taking a bit of work on the readers part. But maybe a little sooner. I like your style, it's good. No story's perfect, but I really like yours. Please keep going, I can't wait to find out what happens next!!

Hey, I just got done reading your four chapters, and I like what you have so far. It has suspense, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. The only thing I thought was a little..um, weird, was that James, Sirius, and Remus didn't go to the headmaster's office right after they landed in the potions room, instead of sitting down. Although, it had to fit in with James meeting his granddaughter and all. Lol, I can't to see his reaction if he ever finds out.

I hope this isn't double posting since it's been a day..heh. Wow, I am so in suspense. This is so wonderful, I can't wait to read what Lupin has to say on the subject and he found out his future son and everything. I like how you explained about Lily's parents being seekers and her grandfather as well. It seems so obvious because James is right there, and I love the fact that they have no idea. Once again, great job on the chapter.

Really great! I loved it when remus met his son! Im really hoping james will meet Albus!, because hes suppose to look like harry and harry is a spitting image of James Cant wait till the next chapter! Post Soon!!!

Heya

Well your fic is turning out pretty well can't wait to read more I can't help but think that this is going to make your feedback more than my fics but any ways great work


dewet

Your story is AWESOME!!

I have always wanted to read a fanfic where Harry, or in this case: his children, meets James and the others. It is really complicated and everything can happen.
I wonder what will happen if James finds out he's related to Lily, James and Albus.

Great story. Keep up the good work!

Hi, I abslolutely Love this story. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more. Please post soon.

Here's my story if you'd like to read it. A New Beginning

I really loved it! I really want to find out how James Reacts on his grandchildren. keep on writing

Greets Rox

Oooh, I like it! I'd be really freaked out if I met my future son too! I like that you have something that even magic can't cure. That's a good idea. I don't have a lot of time just now, so sorry this is short! But, I really do love your story! Don't rush, but write when you have time! Waiting patiently....

good chapter. Keep it up. I can't wait to see James' reaction when he learns about his grandkids, especially when he learns about Al's middle name. It should be interesting.

Big James and small James. hah. Very alike. And now big James is starting to see it in big Lily's eyes from small Lily. Wow. That's pretty hard to talk about. haha.
<33 post soon.

YAY!! An update. Good job!!! I can't wait to have more of James' reaction about his grandchildren HaHa! Sirius and Lupin will have a field day, calling him gramps I love it!

Dayna

That was awsome! please I want more! I love the plot.

Hello! It is me again. Just checking on stories I read that Nov. night. PLEASE WRITE MORE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!

I luv ur story!!! please keep on writing!
-ashley

[font=Georgia]Hey every one,

Thank you for the feedback, and I am soo sorry that I have not done more posts... I've just been so busy and stressed!

I wish you all a Happy Holidays!

Lidaya