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Shadowfox99
well this is fic number 2 i kinda let number one die but this one will stay alive for a while cause i like the fact that i havent writen any thing in a while so if youve actually read it leave me some feed back please. thank you


-shadow
zwillo
good job!! Keep it up. Post again soon.


I just posted chapter 2 of A New Beginning Thanks for the kind feedback!!
xholbyxangelx
Hey, I've just found this - it's such a good read, and the flashback was brill! Harry&Ginny romance wub.gif I especially loved this line:
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She screeched and tackled him onto the bed.

Because of the cuteness of it!! <3 heart.gif

Please post the next part soon, I'm really looking forward to reading it and finding out what Hogwarts is like after the Battle.

xholbyxangelx xxx
Shadowfox99
well i have yet to get a start on chapter 2 and i appoligize cuz i just turned 18 and i was partying all week an im so hung over now that i couldnt even begin to try to do much but i will start chapter 2 tomorrow and should have it up before the end of the week
K8Egrrl
Nice job dude! biggrin.gif (if you are a dude, sorry if you're not happy.gif ) I really like it so far! Well yeah, I say that about a lot of fanfics. sleep.gif But I guess that just means they're all good! laugh.gif
Shadowfox99
thank you and i am a dude. an i just want to tell you folks tha chapter four confused me so i am going to re rite it. so if you liked it i will keep it please let me know of your opions thanks.

-Shadow ph34r.gif
lancelot243
Ha, I liked that. I wonder who the new teacher will be?? Anyway, I just read this whole fic, and i really like it. I loved Harry's duel with Michael Corner, I never liked that guy anyway! So, I can't wait to see what Harry's job is, and I really like the fic...

Post soon...
Kaitlyn
This is a very nice story!
I can't wait to see what will happen with Harry and Ginny!
Harry can't be the new teacher, can he? Is Kingsley going to be the new teacher? Nah, it's got to be an animagus, doesn't it?
I really liked about your story that you showed how Harry won a lot of confidence in himself after the battle. It stayed true to the book, and I loved it!!!
Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Shadowfox99
well thank you both. and i must confess i was going to make harry the DADA teaacher but then i remembered that JKR said somewere that he wouldnt become a teacher so i am telling you here he will not be the teacher it will be 2 adults one is already at hogworts and the other should arive in the 6th chapter sosorry for those of you who want harry to be a teacher.
zwillo
I'm really liking this. I think it's so great that Andromeda is a teacher now. Does that mean that Teddy is going to be living at the school too? I guess he must, if his grandmother and godfather are both there. biggrin.gif Anways, I'll keep checking in with this. It's great.

Dayna
Shadowfox99
im in process of writing the next chapter (i acctually forget wat number mm on.) but yea i hope to have it done and posted latter to nite early tomorrow. and thank you all for reading my garbage it realy is nice of you.
lancelot243
It's not garbage... even though that chapter was too short! Haha, Ginny and Ron will be assisting them? How very interesting... and they have to live with Mchael Corner, what a drag. Anyway, good chapter although it was a little short. Can't wait for the next one!
cloe101
Great job. thought the chappys are kinda short, you write really well. oh yeah and congrats on your birthday. 18 is a fun age. anyways keep up the good work.
lancelot243
HAHA!! Neville and Luna are together! That is priceless! Well that was a nice chapter. I love that Snape is there portrait, that is awesome. Well, awesome chapter, can't wait for more!!
Shadowfox99
unfortanitly you are going to have to wait a bit untill i get some more ideas buitl up. consiqently does any wone know


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James, Lily, & Albus Severus
Hey! That was not nice! I wasn't expecting it to end and then BAM! Major cliffy! Post sOoOoOoOoN!!!!!
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Kaitlyn
Hi there! I was gone for a while, but now I came back and found Andromeda Tonks as teacher and all the ships and everything! Nice!
The chicken part was something James might have done! Hahaha! There goes Harry's genes! He's got so mischievous! I really want to know what will happen next!
What I really like about your story is that it's fast, it keeps changing... Keeps me focused. Way to go!
Post soon! Please!
Shadowfox99
unfortanitly i am currently having dificulty with my computor it kinda crashed on me so every thing i had tyed up is gone. but never fear cuz i will rewrite as much as i can so that i can keep you guys up to date. but your gonna have to bear with me while i try to get back to were i was.
hp lover<3
your fics really good. that sucks about your computer crashing. i hope you can update soon, i want to know whats gonna happen!!! cant wait, just keep on typing! biggrin.gif
Shadowfox99
ok folks back by popular demand i have posted both parts of chapter ten. so now you have somthing for the time being. im mad that i couldnt recover the originals off of my old computor be cause these new chapters ive written so far suck somthin aful. but yea im gonna post the second part of chapter 10 tomorrow.

-mike
hp lover<3
There's a new Dark Lord? I wonder who it could be. Most likely someone that was a strong Death Eater, but Bella died and she was his most faithful servant so I don't know who it could be. I can't wait to find out though!
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