Tell me what you thought. I hope it wasn't too dark.

im-loveli-rli

Hey there. That was really really good! At first, I thought you were writing about Lupin and Tonks and then ... wow Hermione and Ron. That's so sad. I really like your writing style. Keep writing!

Wotcher,
Marie-Helena♥

Wow! Thank you. I'm glad you didn't guess strsight away, I didn't want it to be obvious who it was

im-loveli-rli

I love your writing! As I've said before, it's got a certain style to it.

It wasn't too dark. It was depressing though. At first I thought it was Ron speaking, but then when he said like a sister she became, I realized it must be Harry becasue Ginny's already Ron's sister.

I think I'll probably read all of your one-shots. Maybe you could write a not so dark one? Just to see how it goes. I'm only kidding. Although that would be fun to read.

Keep WRiting!

I might try to write a lighter fic but, I'm not sure how it would come out I'll have a go sometime Thanks for the feedback again

im-loveli-rli

That was so extremelly sad, but jet, it was captivating.
I also thought at the beginning, that you were talking about Tonks and Lupin.
It's a totally different twist, which is nice!
I liked it a lot, not every story has to end extremelly happy, right?
Anyways, it was really good to see Harry's point of view!
I liked it.

Thanks, I always write sad, its just my personality

im-loveli-rli

It wasn't dark, it was a little sad. But that's life. It was well written, as always.

Keep it up.



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