Well, this is the feedback thread for "The Champions' Academy" I hope anyone who enjoyed the first chapter will leave a review. Or even if you didn't, let me know why, it should help me be a better writer. Thanks to anyone who does either of those.

Wow. I have to say, I loved it! You seem to have great control over your writing. You know exactly where it's going and how to get there. I like the descriptions you have, and I think it could do with some more. I'm really intrigued with this plot, too. Having the champions set up a school is a really good idea! I like that you have characters from the books, because it keeps it connected to JKR's HP world; and I like that you have other characters, too. It gives you more freedom as a writer because you can make them what you want. It's sad they couldn't name a house after Cedric, though. Anyways, I really like this story! I'm very excited to read more on this! Keep posting it!

Thank you Silver Doe, not only for your excellent reveiw but also for being my first reveiwer of this story, I thank you greatly. I am often told description is my strong point so I'm glad I have not waned in that aspect. I have thought about a story focused on the three remaining champions starting their own school and I decided I would finally write it.

I'm sorry I haven't gotten another chapter for you read yet. I had intended to have the next chapter up by now but I had some major computer viruses that took a while to take care of. Fortunately, no loss of data so I ddin't have to re-write what I already had.

I have to agree that it is sad that they couldn't name a house after Cedric, but rest assured he won't be completely left out of the story.

Thanks once again, I hope to keep your interest.

mate i sincerly appoligize for not posting feedback before now. every time i try my friends computor slows to an almost stop. i havve read your story and i enjoy it a hell of a lot. i especailly like the fact that you have made harry a bitter old man. i was kinda getting tired of harry always being this "save the world marry ginny be happy" douch that we have been seeing since the end of the seris. i thank you for the refreshing new look at the seris. also it was kinda obvious that it was DD that harry was talking to.


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Don't worry about it Shadowfox, I'm just glad you did post feedback. I was quite pleasing to see some. And believe me, I know all about computer issues hampering what you're trying to do. I'm glad you like my new portrayal of Harry as a bitter old man. I think its a quite interesting angle to go from. Besides, what do I really have to tell a story about if everything worked out with him being nice and all that? Oh, and him talking to Dumbledore wasn't the part I was worried I'd been obvious about, I wanted you all to know who he was talking to. It was something else I was refering to, so I looks like I did my job because you didn't seem to have picked up on it right away.

Anyway, thanks for reading and for reviewing. I'll have the next chapter up as soon as I can.